Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 8)

-Jahnvi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
oh no! i can't read this further.. this is so heartbreaking! shravan's hurt feelings are piercing through my heart right now! can feel exactly what he's going through!CryCryCryCry

maris08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 11:12pm | IP Logged

hey am back.

sunaina, ooohhh; sab bhabi widhwa!!!! acid tongue from sravanShocked

..-Niru-.. Goldie

Joined: 06 October 2010
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 2:13am | IP Logged
wow ! im cryin !! ur update moved me 2 tears !!!!! pls continue!!!

Aishu. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Peda Senior Member

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 3:40am | IP Logged
wow.......kamaal kar diyaTongue I can feel Shravans emotions in your writing....please ud soon.
sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 08 August 2005
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Sorry guys I am writing little by little. I am not geting the time to write . I wanted to finish it by this weekend but most probably I will need the next whole week . I dont write anywhere elase and write it direct t in the posts here  . So thats I upload the post just after writing fe lines as in my new laptop thinsg move very fast and sometines I press some key or other and the whole post vanishes.
kchitra77 Goldie

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Sunaina......poor Shravan could really feel his emotions but the words he said were very bitter.............its ok Su u write slowly....though we cannot wait to read ur updates ASAP ur FF is very interesting n it makes us to keep on coming back to the forum....gr8 job.....plz continue
Davi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Amazin writin su. This part was really good. I loved d way u captured shravans feelings. Plz do cont.

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