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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 7)

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su..plz continue!Embarrassed
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Su love it, sachi with a baby. Omg, mayb mrs ahuja isnt sachi. Cant wait 4 u to cont.
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Su ...........plzzzzzzzz it cannot be Sachi n that too with a baby...i cannot bear to even imagine Shravan's pain if it turns out to be Sanchi...........

n u have become like the CVs......i mean u stop where u make us go crazy for the next part......iam more nervous than Shravan now!!

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Wow I loved it.Please continue soon.Tongue

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Sunaina..Really Wonderful Writing yaar....And U Following the Path of CVs...at least CVs show us Precap..But here No Precap..This is Very Bad...Wink.Plz Continue soon...Waiting for Next part...

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PLEASE CONTINUE. LOVING IT
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continue - 7
 
"Ghar , yeh mera ghar hai . This is my home . "  Mr. Jay turned back to face Rajat Jaiswal.
 
"Shravan , we are so happy to see you like this . Papa will be proud of you. "
 
"Mr Rajat Jaiswal - please enjoy the dinner . "
 "Shravan  - tu meri bat sun."Neetu came and held SHravans hand, "Dadi tujhe bahut miss karti hai aur woh bahut bimmar hai , please please come and see her " 
She could feel the tremor in Mr. Jays hand and understood what emotions he was going through.
 
"I need them no longer,"  Mr. JAy took his glasses off and threw them into a nearby shrub and said,
 "  Neetu bahbi - I am  so happy that you have come to my party. Please convey my pranaaam to Ma and dadi . I will sure come to meet Dadi but please do not say that is my home. One is never driven out of ones own home but I was."
 
Without the glasses on , Shravans eyes could be seen clearly and they were full of tears. 
"Jis Shravan Jaisawal kko aap jante thhe woh ab zinda nahin raha. Main hoon Shravan Jay aur mera koi  bhai nahin hai . For me my father and my brothers are  all dead   aur aap sab  widhba ho gay hai . .."
 


Edited by sunaina02 - 19 December 2010 at 9:49am

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