Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 31)

nycsweetie IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 March 2008
Posts: 11383

Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
lovely update

kchitra77 Goldie

Joined: 18 August 2010
Posts: 1296

Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
now its our turn to say 'O Teri Ki' i think...cuz i dint expect him to say he doesnt know anything about Sachi when in all he has finished the most imp. C-night with herWink...thanx Su
izanami Goldie

Joined: 06 July 2010
Posts: 1419

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Love your story, Su! CVs definitely need to look to you for instructions, because your writing is about 1000 times better than theirs!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Mr.Zk Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2010
Posts: 1609

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Sunaina...Lovely Update...This Is More Interesting and very much enjoyable than the original show...I Want CVs to Read the FF of you and Get More How to Hook the Viewers to the show...Now Everyone Here is Eagerly Waiting for your Update...Right? Update Soon Sunaina
sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 08 August 2005
Posts: 31014

Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Continue - 22
Sachi just came out of her bath and stood near the dressing mirror trying to rub her long hair dry with the towel  - an action only Indian girls usually do and look naturally desrible in that process. So many Indian husbands linger their morning hours on bed just to watch this action !
Droplets of water stood on Sachis smooth skin shining as small beads of pearls . She decided to wear a red saree today instead of a salwar suit.
'The red saree will help her to celebrate her "suhaagan" status today !'.
Thinking about the last night and  smiling ,Sachi put the vermillion powder on her forehead  and rubbed the red dust off her nose making it more red.
She smiled and dreamed of the day when Shravan will be there on the bed watching her morning toilette. She closed her eyes and imagined Shravan coming from behind and putting his arms acrros her waist  and planting a kiss on the top of her head .
Putting her hands on Shravan's, she would try to free herself but Shravan would further tighten his hold and immerse his face deeperr  in the unexplored world of her wet fragrant hair. 
 A soft sound of "Mmmmmmmmmmmm" will be the only response from him .
"Chodiye na "
"Mmmmmmm - nahin ,", Shravan would be dragging her again towards the bed.
" Shravanji , please chodiye muhje "
" Kabhie nahin "
Already shravans lips would start to criss-cross Sachis face and neck .
" Dadi ..."Sachi would scream and take advantage of a lax in Shravans hold to escape.
She would be standing near the door and laughing.
"S -a- aachi "  .
"Sir - aap kuchh bola ?. Hum office pahunchh gaye"  The driver reminded Mr. Jay.
" Oh,,," shravan woke up from his day-dream .
Not surprising that Sachi and Shravan both visited the same dreamland that morning .  

Edited by sunaina02 - 19 February 2011 at 6:57am

The following 18 member(s) liked the above post:


..-Niru-.. Goldie

Joined: 06 October 2010
Posts: 1460

Posted: 19 February 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
such a nice n sweeeet update !!!
loved it !!thanks so much for this beautiful update!!!
pls continue soon !!!
momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 August 2007
Posts: 16403

Posted: 19 February 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Such a cute update!  I loved it!
Mr.Zk Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2010
Posts: 1609

Posted: 19 February 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
At last After so Many days of Waiting...We Get to Read your Update....Thanx thank you So much Sunaina...Its Wonderful Update...Awesome..

As one Poet said You can only see the Real beauty of the girl at two times

First Early morning when Girl Opens the Eyes...
Secondly When A Girl Had Hair Bath.....Girls look Stunning....

U have Well Described the Situation Sunaina and I Can Imagine it....Superb..ClapThumbs Up

Edited by ZZkumarZZ - 19 February 2011 at 7:34am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Shravan & Saachi at Indian Idol Grand FInale

2 3

Author: -Nadii-   Replies: 16   Views: 3462

-Nadii- 16 3462 12 February 2011 at 8:37pm by fmaryams
Love beyond eternity..Shravan and Sachi updt pg85

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 86 87

Author: scent_flower   Replies: 694   Views: 69280

scent_flower 694 69280 29 January 2011 at 2:22pm by Ishrafan11
Y do we love Shravan and Sanchi


Author: xxMATSxx   Replies: 13   Views: 3172

xxMATSxx 13 3172 02 January 2011 at 11:57pm by Radhii_034
Mature Shravan.

Author: IndefiniteLOVE   Replies: 8   Views: 1725

IndefiniteLOVE 8 1725 27 December 2010 at 4:04am by ..-Niru-..
shravan is slowly falling for sanchi

Author: sOobsessedx3   Replies: 3   Views: 1886

sOobsessedx3 3 1886 13 September 2010 at 2:52pm by nycsweetie

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Baat Hamari Pakki Hai Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index