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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 3)

-Jahnvi- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 August 2010
Posts: 9787

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
How do you do this Su? Its amazing. I love the way you're fast-forwarding through the scenes.. not dragging any! Looking forward like always for your next update!
(Have you ever considered writing an FF?Embarrassed)

maris08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
sunaina cant wait get the next  instalment.
Mr.Zk Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2010
Posts: 1609

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
How Sunaina How Can u write like this? Everything is Really wonderful....Amazingly Describing the feelings....i can Imagine Sunaina....Hats off to you...One of the member said...U r FF is more interesting than the original one..Really loved it...Continue soon..Waiting for Next....Thumbs Up
sangeeta9 Goldie

Joined: 05 November 2010
Posts: 1611

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 7:51pm | IP Logged

sunaina please continue soon... i sincerely hope Mrs.Ahuja is not saachi... how could she do that?
desi_lover_guy IF-Dazzler

Joined: 13 August 2010
Posts: 2550

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
I always liked your ideas even though it was sometime out of box..... I knew you have gr8 understanding of soaps and films and can write beautiful ff... Please write soon,... and just one request write lil bit more ............. Wink 
momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 August 2007
Posts: 16403

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
this is getting good - does he want retribution or is he going to steal her away.....keep going.

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kchitra77 Goldie

Joined: 18 August 2010
Posts: 1296

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Hi Sunaina.............very interesting FF...very different from ur sensual one shots....u r building Jay's n our anticipation as well .........gripping n cant really wait for the next part....plz dont make Sanchi as Mrs.Ahuja........she is always n only Shravan's love n wife

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arwaria Senior Member

Joined: 12 September 2010
Posts: 439

Posted: 15 December 2010 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
What a description Sunaina.. plz continue and do write more..ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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