Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


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Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 29)

Aanchal15 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Wonderful update! Smile
I could imagine Shravan running all the way dressed like that.Wink
The 'O teri ki' was a cherry on the cake. 
Impatiently waiting for the next update.

momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunaina02

Shravan held her tight and rubbed his stubbled chheks against her face .

Love this vivid detail .....
I am so happy you continued your story!  When you get a chance to, please go on.

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
awesome update!!
was waiting for it !!
thanks so much !!!!
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
love the updateeeeee
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Well, thanks for the lovely pen everything wonderfullyClap
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Thanks Sunaina

You had time to update.I like your writing.please do not delay next update
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
Oh Sunaina...At last After a Long time We Get to Read your Update...Thanx a Lot...Have Been Waiting for this....Lovely continue and dont take more days to update again....Smile
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged

Continue -21

Seeing the bed untouched , Dadi once again ran back to kitchen.
"kal rrat Bittu ghar wapas aya nahin ?" she asked Raghu ( man-friday)
"Ji , Bittu kaun hai ?"
" Arre shravan ki baat kar rahi hoon, wo ayaa nahin ? Kabhie sudhrega nahin yeh ladka ."
She went back to the leaving room.
At that moment Shravan ran into the house in the same disheveled state.
Seeing Dadi and Neetu-bhabi he was completely awestruck . He stood still with his jaws hanging down.
Seeing Shravan dadi ran towards him and hugged him tight .
"Mera bittu , kitna bada aur dubla ho gaya"
" Dadi aap pehle se sundar ho gayi "
" Chal tu kabhie nahin sudhrega , kahan tha raat bhar?"
" dadi mujhe toilet jaane do , var na lagege ki main 27 saal ke nahin 6 mahine ka ledka hoon."
 Shravan rushed to the toilet as dadi and Nidhi started to unpack the tiffin box and lay down the breakfast table.
Raghu after seeing Shravan with dadi came and touched her feet .
"Mujhe maaf kar dijiye , aap ko pehchan nahin paya,"
"Thik hai, thik hai , ja chai bana "
When Shravan came out of his room , he was looking impeccable in a beige shirt and dark brown trouser and jacket. Dadi was pleased to see him and asked him to come to the table .
" Oooooooo, ghar ke paraathe ...." Shravan was excited as a small child.
But he looked at his watch, took a bite of pratha and sabzi and a sip of tea.
" I dont want to be late for the meeting dadi . main aapse kal milunga."
"Shravan - tu Sachi ke baare jaanta hai ?"  Neetu managed to throw the question before Shravan left the room.
" Sachi se...," Shravan stooed mid sentence , changed his mind and said," nahin , main kuchch nahin jaanta ."
Before Dadi or Neetu could speak a word , Shravan was already in his car.

Edited by sunaina02 - 22 January 2011 at 10:24pm

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