Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 25)

sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
continue -18
What was shravanji thinking ?
 Had not he forgotten Tara ?
 Does he still have feelings for her ? 
 Is he sure he wants me back?
Such questions kept Sachis mind busy while she unlocked the door. She had expected shravan to follow her but he did not . He had backed the car and driven away  without even saying a proper goodbye to her. Her eyes filled up with tears. She threw her purse on the table hard that it dropped to the floor.
She could not stop the sobs that shook her whole body . She threw herself on the bed and cried her heart away .
All these two years , she had waited and waited and waited for this day when once again she would see shravan , have him beside her , feel him, touch him .
But he is again gone . Sachi was not even sure that he woud come back .
Shravan was driving basedt on his reflexes as his attention was somewhere else. He was as if in a trance - sleep-driving through the roads of his home city .
Mr. Shravan was handsome , rich, powerful , has a good sense of humour and kind at heart - what every woman desires.
But he had never messed up with any women except for two .\
Tara and Sachi .
For few years both of them were out of his life and he never even thought about women. His only passion was to prove to the world, to his family, to his dad that "Shravan can also be someone in this mean world"
And now - he was here facing both the women in his life within a couple of hours.
He did not know whatt he wanted to do.
Make love?
He only  knew that  he wanted to get lost somewhere .
He only knew that he wanted to feel the warmth of that love and understanding that he he had missed these two years.
He only knew that he had to go back.
The car stopped suddenly and swiveled as Shravan pressed the brake hard and turned the car.
Exhausted from the surprises, hopes  and  despair of the day , Sachi had given herself away to the solace of all miseries, natures own balm to heal our wounds -  sleep. She had forgotten to lock the door behind her. So she did not know when someone had entered her room, locking the door behind him , came towards her and lay beside her , taking her into his arms and planting kisses all over her face . In her sleeping trance , sachi also hugged him closer and rubbed her face on his cheek before giving away her lips to the seeking lips of his .
Shravan knew that all this time - he wanted to do something he had never done before.
He wanted to make love.
He wanted to make love to his wife
He wanted to make love to Sachi..  

Edited by sunaina02 - 20 February 2011 at 7:09am

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sangeeta9 Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
ConfusedConfused  why is shravan thinking about tara now??? ShockedShocked

su you told that saavan consummation will be the next part in mr.jay story... hav u changed your mind??
momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged
GADDHA!!  Tara is married with a kid, forget her.

Su continue please!!!

Edited by momma1128 - 07 January 2011 at 7:59am
sangeeta9 Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
awwww su... thanx for the pm.. please update soon...
momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunaina02

continue -18
He wanted to make love.
He wanted to make love to his wife
He wanted to make love to Sachi..  
Thank you for updating Su!

FINALLY!  Man up Shravan and get down to business or you will self combust!

Keep going please!!!
kchitra77 Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
wow..Tara as Mrs.Ahuja is a big surprise..........also for Shravan n thats y he was bowled over for sometime. Now Su....u too get down to business yaar.......just like the serial u r making us hope ..ok the next episode will be consummation....but u r also killing us by stopping at crucial places!! Amazing story!! 
sash10 Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
wow i did not expect tara to be the docs wife lol Wink
Davi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
What a suprise su. tara, i had totally forgotten abt her. Brilliant update su. Cant wait 4 u 2 cont.

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