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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow back with a nice dreamy update!!! So cute n lovely thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Sunaina for the lovely update!! 👏Was off to dreamland, reading it.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nicely written sunaina!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Continue - 23
Mr. Shravan quicly got out of the car ans ran to his office room.
"Rita - my presentation file - fast. "
Taking out his laptop , he opened the powerpoint presentation and flipped throught the slides.
His office assistant Rita laid out the neatly arranged file on his desk . Shravan started to match the figires on the slides to those in the document .
 
Once he was satisfied he looked up to thank Rita.
 
Instead of Rita , Deepak was standing there .
 
"Sir,..:, Deepak fumbled for words.
 
"Deepak - you know  I am very tense about this impending meeting . Crores and future of our company in North India depends on the success of this deal. "
 
"Sir - tomorrow Jaisawals have their shareholder meeting."
 
Shravans fingers stopped over the keyboard.
 
"So  do we have shares with us ?"
 
"Sir I have already bought 10 percent worth share ."
 
"But that doesnt match up to 20 ercent held by ...."
 
"Sir - if you okay i,t I can get another 11-12 percent ."
 
" Then go ahead - what are you waiting for?"
 
" Sir out buying spree has soared the price of Jaiswals shares high and  I need your further approval to draw the required amount from the bank."
 
"Okay do it , tell me where I have to sign."
 
"Sir , one last thing - someone called Sachi Jaisawal owns 10 percent of the shares ."
 
Once again Shravan's fingers stopped moving .
 
"What ?  Are we buying from her "
 
"Yes, she has offered five percent of it "
 
"Then dont , do not buy from her ."
 
"Okay sir , but it will be difficult to accumulate 20 percent without her 5 percent."
 
" We will see and by the way when is the meeting ?"
 
"6 pm sharp"
 
"Thanks deepak for all your help "
 
As Deepak left the room, Shravan got worried about sachi . Why is she selling away the shares .?
 
 
 
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Edited by sunaina02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Su, hope Deepak will not be cheating Shravan.

When are Savan meeting again? Looking forward to that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very interesting Su, do plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update, Sunaina. Please continue....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sunaina

Atlast you have decided to update jay story.I am very happy and thank you very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Continue - 24
 
Pratap Jaisawal was in his office when he got a phone call from his agent at Stock Exchange
 
"Namaste Jaisawal Ji , "
"Namaste , Laxman ji boliye kya khabar ha"
 
"Humare shareprice dubna (double) ho gaye"
 
"Kya , lekin kyun?"  Pratap , being an expreienced businessman was more shocked than pleased.
"Koi continuously kharid rahe hai"
"kaun ho sakta ?", Pratap started to think.
 
"Abhi tak kitne bech chuke hai?"
 
" 12 percent"
 
"Kya ek hi aadmi ya business kharid rahe hai ?"
 
" Pata nahin, lekin mujhe aisa hi lagta hai "
 
"Thik hai, aap aur nazar rakhiye aur 20 percent se zyada becha jayega to foren mujhe inform karna ."
 
 
As Pratap put the phone down , Rajat entered his cabinet.
 
"Papa , mujhe aa se kuchh kehna hai "
 
"Bolo"
 
"Teen din pehle main aur Neeta...."
 
"Rajat , tum jante ho office mujhe family matters discuss karna bilkul pasand nahin hai "
"Lekin Papa ...."
 
" Abhi nahin ., baad mein "
 
Rajat turned around and left the office. He knew it was high time Prataap should be informed about shravans presence in the city but all these days he did not have the courage to tell him and now when he gathered all his mettle , Prataap refused to listen.
 
Dadi and Madhura also were discussing Shravan that afternoon. Dadi was telling Madhura how Shravan had changed and how smart and responsible he was now .
 
 
Sachi was in her music class in  School . While her pupils practised some songs she was dreaming about the night before . Shravans loving caresses were still lingering on her skin, producing a pleasant shiver every now and then. There was a radiant glow on her face and a constant smile on her lips.
She could not wait forthe evening but was completely ignorant when and whereshe would meet Shravan again.
 
Mr. Shravan came out smiling from the meeting .
Yes, he has again done it!!
The deal has been finally signed with few amendments.
This is the time to celebrate !!!
There will be a cocktail party in the evening .
Should he present his wife there ? Suppose Sachi refuses to attend the party? What will he do?  Be with sachi or come to the party ?
 
Love and business can they never happen side by side ?
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahhh...very interesting updates Su....want to know the battle of business between papa n beta....also awaiting more romance between the love birds!!!