Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 23)

sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by monkeydog18

sunaina the new year has passed i think mr and mrs jay should have fun too now ;)
The readers are in fun mood so i am still thinking of mixing fun with drama

anasuya43 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
CryCryCry No story .......................................................................Cry                  
sandy.21 Goldie

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Sunaina..When ru going to update Mr Shravan Jay....Waiting Dear..Plz Make it Soon....Cry
momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
next chapter kobe?  eagerly awaiting Saachi claiming her rights.
sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
continue - 17
Shravan stood just behind Sachi . His hands ruffled though her hais. He lifted two-three stands so that her while silky neck and and back were revealed.  He unpinned her hair  and put the gardenia clasping it with a hair clip  to Sachis hair. He immesed his face into the black msytery of Sachis  hair  breathing  in the mixed  fragrance of gardenia and her hair .
"Shravan jo aap bhi na"  Sachi said shyly .
They walked in sillence to wards the Doctors cottage . Sometimes silence is more desirable than constant chatting.
( I will continue tomorrow, I am toos leepy now )

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sangeeta9 Goldie

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
sunaina..... this is not doneDisapprove.... you better finish this part as soon as you wake up, SmileWink

-Jahnvi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
thanks sunaina! I'm not going to ask you to update soon as I know it can hard to find sufficient time with kids and family around. but must say, this little piece was amazing too.
maris08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
@ su ..... I understand u r so sleepy thats why a lot of typing error... sleep feel refreshed and continue ur ff...goodnite   

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