Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 19)

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
" Sachi to cockroach ko bhi cockroachji hi bolega na..." Shravan mutterd to himself.

Sunaina....Its Hilarious....ROFLROFLROFL...I to wish the same like chitra dear..It may not spoil your Story..If needed then only Include That part....Confused

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momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:17pm | IP Logged

I want to know why this Parineeta type misunderstanding!!!!  Likhte thako!!  Venom can be managed in other threads ;)

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
I love ur description of sachis cottage. Cockroachji... Cracked me up. The line abt dil se pehchaan leti hoon.. Loved it. Today su, i shall name u Queen of suspense... Hope u dont mind.

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
finally caught up loveddddddddd it!
omg cant wait for more!!!
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 11:40pm | IP Logged

Continue -15

Both of them got up and looked at each other.
Shravan spread out his arms and sachi walked into his embrace. They closed their eyes and stood  silently and let their hearts talk to each other.
Lub dup - I missed you a lot Sachi, every step i took , every work I did , every paisa i earned - was in you name
Lup dup - shravanji - you dont know what I had to suffer , what battles I had to face to stay here waiting for you till my death. but I knew you would come one day.
Lub dup - not a single day passed in my life when I did not think about you . I am sorry I thought you already belonged to someone else so I instead of wanting you, had  started to worship you
Lub dup -  I wondered whether you still belonged to me but Ramji always pacified me by indicatiing "tera shravan tera hi rahega Sachi , ghabro mat"
And as their hearts beat along , they did not realise when their bodies had started to feel the others physical presence. Their hands had started to move along each others back in light caressing movement which steadily transformed into passionate clutches .
Sachi lifted her face and shravan brought down his  until their lips met lightly .
It was like the first rain of spring, like the soft sound of string of sitar or tabla when the musicians just start to tune them -  shy and hesitant.
Both of them shyly smiled at each other and once again let their lips brush . But this time passion has started to flow and soon it knew no bound as the lips, tongues, mouths, tears , saliva, hair everything got entwinned and became one. The emotions knew no bound and as if the sitar has started play hindol raaga in resonance with the love that is being expressed. 
After sometime when the initial demands of love were met, Once again they sat hugging each closely .
"Shravanji aap bahut jimmedar insaan ban gaye na ?"
" Nahin janta sachi but whatever i have become  - ye sab tumhare liye"
"To ab main aap se kuchch maangu?"
"Bolo sachi , Main tumhare liye kuchh bhi kar sakta hoon"
" To aap pati hone ka jimmedari uthaiye , " Aap mujhe patni ka haq dijiye !!"

Edited by sunaina02 - 28 December 2010 at 9:27am

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Aishu. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
WOW YAAR.......its awesome......plz continue soon.....
maris08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:01am | IP Logged
wooooooowie; atlast two souls   meet.plz cant wait continue su
..-Niru-.. Goldie

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 2:36am | IP Logged
entwined in love!!!!!!!!! pls continue love ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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