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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 18)

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Tar por????  I want to know what is going on in that cottage!

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continue - 14
 
"Aap kisse milna chahte hai?" the guard once again asked Shravan.
Panting and heaving Shravan replied, "Sa   sachi Madam  se , Sachi Jaiswal"
"Aap ka shubh naam?"
"Shra   Shra    Shra   Shravan Jaiswal ."
" To aap jaiye, yahan se right mein jo cottage hai  wahin rehti hai Sachi Madam, Bahut acchi hai, hum sab se kitne izzat se baat karti hai, sabko khayal rakhti hai., aap ke bare mein bhi bahut suna unse"
" Sachi to cockroach ko bhi cockroachji hi bolega na..." Shravan mutterd to himself.
He ran up the path towards the cottage as shown by the guard and stopped to breathe.
 
It was a tiny but lovely cottage. The brick walls wer covered by climbing plants and there were rows of yellow and violet pansies along the path towards the entrance. Couple of gardenia trees and rose shubs were scattered her and there. The air was filled with the intoxicating fragrance of gardenia.The blinds were pulled acroos the windows so nothing could be seen from inside but it was apparent that the light was on. Shravan gently knocked on the entrance door.
No answer.
He again knocked.   
No answer.
He tried to put his ear on the door to listen to any noise from inside. His weight opened the door ajar . He peeped his head inside and glanced around the room.
The room was very humbly decorated with local Indian mats and wooden furniture. Excess comfort of foams and leather was invisible . But it was neat and tidy. As he eased himself throough the door, Shravan spotted Sachi.
She was kneeling in front of a Mandir and praying with her hands folded and eyes closed.
"If there were anywhere heaven for on the earth . It is here in this cottage."  Shravan told himself. He  came and knelt beside sachi facing her side ways and folded his hands in parayer .
 
Without opening her eyes Sachi said," :Aap aa gaye Shravanji "
"Sachi tum kaise sab dekh lete ho , jaan lete ho?"
" Main aap ko aankhon se nahin, kaan se nahin, naak se nahin - mere dil se jaan leti hoon , pehchan leti hoon., you come with your face changed, your voice altered and fragrance hidden under perfumes, I will still know it is you from the beating of your heart, from  the twinking of your eyes , from the pain and joy you feel in your soul."
Both of them got up and looked at each other .
 
 
 
 


Edited by sunaina02 - 27 December 2010 at 5:43pm

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yea as Anu is asking plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz what is going to happen in the cottage!!!!! r u taking lessons in torturing us or is this the venom flowing u were talking about Big smile
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Originally posted by kchitra77

yea as Anu is asking plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz what is going to happen in the cottage!!!!! r u taking lessons in torturing us or is this the venom flowing u were talking about Big smile
 
What do you want should happen in the cottage.??
 
Venoms will flow if the responsibility track continues after the new year.
 
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunaina02

Originally posted by kchitra77

yea as Anu is asking plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz what is going to happen in the cottage!!!!! r u taking lessons in torturing us or is this the venom flowing u were talking about Big smile
 
What do you want should happen in the cottage.??
 
Venoms will flow if the responsibility track continues after the new year.
 
plzzzzzz   su ......venom   or anything else.....dont stop.... atleast say how Shravan achieved this status........ whether he is responsible or not let Pratap decide....
for us carry on for everSmile
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 6:27pm | IP Logged
hmm thats not a difficult Q to answer Wink u know what i want to happen in the cottage which hasnt happened in the serial n which u promised long back to write as a one shot!!!Embarrassed
 
I dont mind the venom flow reg the character but i hope it doesnt mar ur beautiful story!!!!

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