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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 14)

anasuya43 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 11:02pm | IP Logged

What happened to Shravan Jay story?????????????????????????????????????????

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 7:54am | IP Logged
I am sorry , yesterday I wrote few line and lost it .
I will start wriitng again from tonight ( 24th night in Canada) and  promise you good updates for next 4-5 days .

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Thank You Sunaina. Smile
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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
continue -11
Sachi's happiness in seing shravan was very obvious. Her eyes sparkled with excitement , her face was flushed red and she was breathing quickly with her mouth slightly opened. Shravan was taken aback by Sachis excitement as he had thought that she would be reserved and would not want to exhibit her pleasure so openly.
"Shravanjee aap?, kab aye?. " Sachi looked at the car ," Yeh garri aap ki hai?
Shavan nodded and could not stop from saying "Sachi you look beautiful'
Sachi blushed and smiled ." Aap bhi naa, bikul badla nahin"
"No sachi , I have changed a lot. This shravan is not the same as the Shravan whom you knew two years back."
Just then the baby started to cry and Sachi excused herself to go inside .
Shravan was lost in his thoughts - he was wondering why he never realized when and how he had started to love Sachi, their seaside rendezvous, the dance at the bar in drunken state , the morning in the hotel bed without any clothes on...he started to smile visualizing sachi running to the bathroom with the thick blanket wrapped around her, then -  his first time kissing Sachi , he could still feel the taste of her lips and mouth in his , he could feel the urge rising him , the urge to take her in his arms and kiss her , kiss her without stopping, kiss her forehead, kiss her toe , kiss her wrists ,  kiss her earlobes, kiss every inch of her body, he could keep on kissing her for hour after hour .
"Hello Mr. Jay , Noone told me you are already here" Shravan was awaken from his kissing expedition.
"Oh Dr. Ahuja., er  Sa I mean Mrs Ahuja was here .
"Did she really come up here. That is very strange.", Dr.Ahuja expressed his worry , "Okay I will ask the waiter to get us some drink here . what would you like Mr. Jay?"
"Just cold drink"
"Oh No Mr. jay I wont let you go without drinking my bloody Mary, by the way ....what do yu think...."
They started to discuss serious business....

Edited by sunaina02 - 25 December 2010 at 11:56am

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 5:06am | IP Logged
thanz ......sunaina   u started writingStar..... thank God for small mercies....Thumbs Up
we badly needed a ff after see all hulla in the real show.
this is very nice....Big smile
cant  wait for Shravan 2 realise the truth. am alreading  feeling how ur story  will go on..Ermm
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(continue - 12)
Shravans mind was continuously drifting away from the business topic and the Bloody Mary was  affecting his power to think .
" Dr. Hemant Ajuja ....."
" Call me Hemant and can I call you Shravan "
" Sure ,  but i must tell you - you are very lucky , your wife is very understanding and beautiful."
"Mr. J,,,eh ...Shravan - you have not seen my wife yet.
Shravan stood still for 60 seconds.
His eyelids stopped blinking. His heart stood completely still. HIs right hand was up in the air holding his bloody mary glass. His left hand almost crushed the side of the couch on which he was sitting. His mouth was full open as he was starting to say some thing ..
Then his heart started to beat faster , his mind was rushing through all events of his life.
"But Dr. Ahuja ... Sa   Sachi here....why?"
" Shravan........oh my GOd ....are you Shravan Jaiswal?"   Now was Hemants turn to be shocked.
" Yes  I am ,,,,but ....why? Is she not married?"
"Of course she is married, but she is not my wife.", Hemant added with a smile.
Shravan just could not bear any more .
He begged Dr. Ahuja , " Please tell me the truth."
"But Mr. Jay , you must meet my wife  before i tell you the whole story ." Hemant started teasing Shravan."Oh Yes, " Shravan was restless."
Dr.  Ahuja led shravan to his wifes room who had been bedridden since her baby was born.

Edited by sunaina02 - 25 December 2010 at 11:57am

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 8:02am | IP Logged
oh Sunaina...Great ...Atlast Mrs Ahuja is Not Saanchi.Confused.Thanx a Lot ...But What is the Truth ?

Cant Wait for next update..Plzz make it soon....U know this is the reason we all want you to update u r ff which Feels Entertainment rather than the original Show...

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