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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 11)

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A big white sleek car stopped in front of the biggest flower-shop in Musouri - VALENTINE FLOWERS. Mr. Jay got out of the car . He was just out of his business meeting so still had his formal suit on . That morning he has got rid of french-cut beard as he wanted to look as much like the old Shravan in front of Sachi . He had his shades on as he entered the store.  He looked around and smiled. He had come to this shop on several occassions, buying flowers for Tara and then for Sachi.
The owner of the shop came forward to welcome the distinguished customer .
"Sir aap ko kya chahiye?"
" Mujhe ek bouquet chahiye - made of 501 roses - red roses."
"  Kaun si color ki?"
"Red roses- acchiha nahin mixed karke banao ,"
Mr. Jay took off his shades .
"Shravan ji aap" , the store owner knew shravan very well.
"Han Shyamlal ji , main hi hoon, aap kaise hai ?"
Shyamlal was surprised to find Shravan to be so polite. Earlier , Younger shravan had never greeted him so well.
 
" Thik hoon . Aap chinta mat kijiye , main acchse ak bouquet banake aap ki ghar bhej dun . "
 
Shravna paid the price and  was on his way out.
 
" Aap ki patni Sachiji yahan har saal aati hai anniversary ke liye order dene ke liye.  
Mr.  Jay stopped at once.
 
"Kab?"
"Pahel August , aap khud ki anniversary date bhul gaye " shyamlal started to grin.
Mr. Jay  was confused and left the shop.
On his way back to the bungalow he passed the Jaisawal mansion .
For one moment he wanted to stop the car but looking at his watch decided not to as he might get late for the dinner.
Despite everything he wanted to meet sachi , see her at least once more, drink her beauty with his eyes .   
 
 


Edited by sunaina02 - 22 December 2010 at 1:01pm

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ok i just can't wait for the next part

plz update sooon

can you tell me the next part in pmWink
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su 
ur ff in parts is keeping me on the edge of the seat,
waiting eagerly for the next instlmnt.
gr8t writingClap
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come on ,come on I Please complete it I have become restless

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I will start writing now.
 
Precap
 
Shravan and sachi meet
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Originally posted by sunaina02

I will start writing now.
 
Precap
 
Shravan and sachi meet


Oho Sunaina..Cant wait for next part Dear....Thanx for the Precap ...Want to know How SaaVan Meet each other..Eagerly waiting Dear Sunaina...Plz  next part Urgent....Plz ....

U know Its Wonderful and Fantastic than original theme now happening the Show...Great..Thumbs Up
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Continue 10 ( please read part 9 on this page only as I have modified it a little)
 
Sachi was sitting in the coverd patio in front of the Ahuja house. She was playing with the baby on her lap. The sun had already set but the orange hue was still in the western sky rendering a dreamy atmosphere.
 A white car came in front of the house and stopped. Sachi looked up to see who was there.
A big flower buffet came out of the car and started walking. Strangely it had two pair of legs and could walk,  sachi followed the strides as they came closer.
She knew that style of walking !
She was so familiar with them , that she could rightly predict how and where the next step will fall.
She could feel his presence with every inch of her body .
She knew it was him .
She knew it was Shravan .
 
She wanted to run down the pathway but the baby did not allow her  . She could not even get up to greet him .she just kept on staring at the  approaching figure .
Suddenly a face peeped out from behind the forest of roses. Bur Alas, it did not have the lighthearted smile she expected.   It was a serious apprehensive face.
  
Shravan got out of the car and at once knew she was there. His sachi was there. But he was afraid to look at her as she belonged to someone else. He purposefully hid his upper body and face behind the bouquet  as he gathered all his mettle to face Sachi . As he walked towards the patio , his urge to see sachi overtook his hesitation and he started to peep out from behond the bouquet .
There she was - in a white saree with a baby in her lap , her long tresses falling on her shoulder . He could not take away his eyes from her but with every stride forward, he felt a knife carving at his heart and squeezing out drops of blood from there. He was afraid of turning the pathway into crimson ! Why  life is so cruel !
 
At last they faced each other- a moment both of them had been waiting for months and years. Shravan looked deep into sachis eyes. They were as beautiful as before, He could see the mark of vermillion on her forhead  which was the last stab on his heart.  
 
Sachi got up to look at those hazel eyes  Her eyes were seeking for something, may be that glint of mischief or may be  that gratifying  famous crooked smile.  The glint and smile were missing but she could see  pure love in those eyes.
 
They both wanted to hug each other .
 
But they could not.
 
Shravan had the bouquet in his hands
 
And Sachi had the baby.   
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by sunaina02 - 22 December 2010 at 1:04pm

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 gr8t  writing su

 

whats nxt plzzzzzzz.

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