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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 10)

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
This track reminds me of old movie of madhuri i think it was phool bane angaarey NIce plot...

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
yea me too with a hope that Sanchi is not Mrs. Ahuja.....i love Shravan Jay...hope that in BHPH also he turns into this intimidating n powerful Shravan to stand up firmly against Pratap Jaiswal!!
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 correct me if am wrong, Is Mrs. ahuja likely to b Thara, and Saachi works in their hospital??Confused

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No revenge story Please.You have got flare in writing story.Every day I expect atleast two episodes from you.Thumbs Up
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wow !!!! pls pls continue!! eagerly waitin 2 no wat happend 2 sachi!!!!!!!!
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So far so good, Su. Plz do continue.
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su.. update soon.. cant wait...
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A big white sleek car stopped in front of the biggest flower-shop in Musouri - VALENTINE FLOWERS. Mr. Jay got out of the car . He was just out of his business meeting so still had his formal suit on . That morning he has got rid of french-cut beard as he wanted to look as much like the old Shravan in front of Sachi . He had his shades on as he entered the store.  He looked around and smiled. He had come to this shop on several occassions, buying flowers for Tara and then for Sachi.
The owner of the shop came forward to welcome the distinguished customer .
"Sir aap ko kya chahiye?"
" Mujhe ek bouquet chahiye - made of 501 roses - red roses."
"  Kaun si color ki?"
"Red roses- acchiha nahin mixed karke banao ,"
Mr. Jay took off his shades .
"Shravan ji aap" , the store owner knew shravan very well.
"Han Shyamlal ji , main hi hoon, aap kaise hai ?"
Shyamlal was surprised to find Shravan to be so polite. Earlier , Younger shravan had never greeted him so well.
 
" Thik hoon . Aap chinta mat kijiye , main acchse ak bouquet banake aap ki ghar bhej dun . "
 
Shravna paid the price and  was on his way out.
 
" Aap ki patni Sachiji yahan har saal aati hai anniversary ke liye order dene ke liye.  
Mr.  Jay stopped at once.
 
"Kab?"
"Pahel August , aap khud ki anniversary date bhul gaye " shyamlal started to grin.
Mr. Jay  was confused and left the shop.
On his way back to the bungalow he passed the Jaisawal mansion .
For one moment he wanted to stop the car but looking at his watch decided not to as he might get late for the dinner.
Despite everything he wanted to meet sachi , see her at least once more, drink her beauty with his eyes .   
 
 


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