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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33)

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Posted: 14 December 2010 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Mr. Shavan Jay - the regional manager of  (Mercedes/BMW/Jeep/ Chevrolet - whicheve you like) has come to Mussouri  to promote their new car r specially designed for hilly places.
 
Mr Jay is already famous in Shimla  where he has done a business worth 100 crore rupees.
 
He has been dreaming about this for last few months . To come back to this place , to breath the same air , to feel the same breeze ...
 
A special bunglow has been reserved for him where he will reside for coming two months
 
Today evening he has arranged a party for the social and business elites of Mussouri  so that he can chart up the new marketing policy for this hill-station and the neighbourhood,  A businees of 10 crore is whatt they are aiming at  of which Mr jay will recieve a commission of 1 crore .
 
Mr. Jay has personally checked the guest list  and just included Rajat Jaisawals name to the list and cut off the othe two Jaiswals.
 
He wanted to do it slowly  and steadily , not all at once.
 
 
 
There was a knock on the door,
 
"Come in"
 
The khansama entered with a trolley load of breakfast . Mr. Jay helped himself to the toast while the
 coffee was being made.He once again flipped through the guest list and carefully moved his index finger over the while list lest he missed a name  till it stopped over the name Dr. and Mrs  Hemant Ahuja.
"Yes that must be the one"
 
 
He got lost in the past.
It was two years back . He was thrown out the house and the door was slammed on his face.  He could still hear sachi crying. He kept on banging the door but noone opened it.
 
After sometime , he decided to move on with life. he promised himself that he would not come back to this place only if would earn a lot of money. He came tto the address given by Rocky Singh and stated ot work as a mechnic in that garage. He lived in a dirty room over the workshop and never went out .  


Edited by sunaina02 - 20 February 2011 at 6:58am

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Posted: 14 December 2010 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
you've got me getting goosebumps Sunaina! please please continue..
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Posted: 14 December 2010 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Hey Sunaina....Well WrittenThumbs Up....Plz Continue Soon...
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Gr8 idea su. Very well written. Plz do cont.
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woww sunaina... superb... plz continue soo...
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 2:37am | IP Logged
good sunaina .these days ff is more interesting than actual story

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Su..plz continue.
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunaina02

He got lost in the past.
It was two years back . He was thrown out the house and the door was slammed on his face.  He could still hear sachi crying. He kept on banging the door but noone opened it.
 
After sometime , he decided to move on with life. he promised himself that he would not come back to this place only if would earn a lot of money. He came tto the address given by Rocky Singh and stated ot work as a mechnic in that garage. He lived in a dirty room over the workshop and never went out .  


this part ws sooo emotional....Unhappy
loved itttt........!


Edited by spicy_tikka - 15 December 2010 at 4:27am

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