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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 89)

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged

Nooo geet please come backCryCryCryCryCryCryv. Phew me was so so happy when they felt her pulse.SmileSmileSmileSmile

 

I can imagine maan's relief when geet's pulse was felt otherwise I don't know what would have happened to him.Smile

 

When geet called out to maan, that would have been the sweetest music to him.Smile

 

Aww so sweet of to hug her first and then scream at her for scaring the daylight out of him.

 

I can imagine geet's pain when maan said that they had to do a hysterectomy on her and she will never be able to have his children again.CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

 

Naahii geet its not your fault about the baby, please don't blame yourself.CryCry

 

Nahiiiii I hope the baby is ok, please don't let anything happen to her.CryCryCryCry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
As always you rock Jinwaz, I am totally fan of your writing, I like the way you have portrayed Geet's emotions for her kid, it is understandable and it is very interesting to see that for Mom, kid is actually much more important than her husband, you have captured it pretty well, really salute to your writing and your story but as always I always wonder that you are a student of some medical school or what because the kind of medical details you include in your FF is spellbound. 

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
should i be worried, upset or relieved that im not receiving threats about bull dozers or having people stick their tongues out at me...or getting bribes for updating? ConfusedConfusedConfused...i dont know how to feel....lol...maybe you guys arent interested...Wink

JAZ

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
it not like that.Cry.
i love ur ff both of .

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jnawaz

should i be worried, upset or relieved that im not receiving threats about bull dozers or having people stick their tongues out at me...or getting bribes for updating? ConfusedConfusedConfused...i dont know how to feel....lol...maybe you guys arent interested...Wink

JAZ
 
ae lo .. yahan mein update ke liye mari ja rahee hoon aur jaz madam keh rahee hain that we are not interested ... bohat na insafi hai aalam panah...  Stern Smile
 
oye Jaz.  update kero naa ... kitnaaaaa time hogaya... Cry 
 
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Sana

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jnawaz

^^ three words se kaam nahin chalega... i want a proper comment...that is..if you want it to stay happy happy...*jaz does evil laugh*

JAZ

 
oh no .... nahinnn... khuda ka wasta hai tujhay
 
plzzz end this on a happy ending ... pretty plzzzzz 

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
 I M CRAZY BOT FFs ON MAANEET  N  TODAY WHILE GOING THRU THE FORUM HAD AN EYE ON UR FF .............................READ ALL PARTS IN ONE GO N IT WAS AWESUM..................................

M DIE HARD FAN  OF MILLS AND BOON  N FELT THIS IS CLOSE TO IT...................................

U TRULY ARE A GR8 WRITER ..................................LOVED ITClapBig smile

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
OYE besharm..ache raho toh madam wants taunts and bulldozers..looks like i need my JAZ KO PEETO ANDOLAN NOW..ok so here i go..
JAZ KO PEETO JAZ KO PEETO..
now finish it by this weekned na..two weeks since we are on a cliffhanger..come on..
and no bribes only..  



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