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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 82)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Cry
heart wrenching update. hope everything will be alright. i want you to congraluate you for being an amazing writer. in this episode you have wrote exceptionally beautifully geet pov . iknow losing womanhood is not easy to take . good work.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
omgggg..u have such talent for making me cry...
happy that geet made it..even when he almost lost her...plz let the baby live..geet is going to need it.....loved it jaz...u hear it alot but i have to say..u are such a talented writer..

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DancinFireflies Senior Member
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:18pm | IP Logged

Jaz....... not again pleaseCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry.... at least we were relieved geet is fine but just to leave us 'pulling our hair' you do thisCryCryCryCryCryCryCry... you love making us cry don't you... plz don't kill the baby or geet... but I get a feeling you will not I don't know why but I feel you will keep them both safe... please...EmbarrassedBig smile

Another cliff-hangerCry... god... I agree Liz leaves the update in the worst parts but you ... you kill us girl... at least with her we know it will turn out positive no matter what but with you it's scaryCryCry...

The way you captured each n every emotion geet felt... it was WOW... especially related to her coming out of coma n the motherly instinctsCryClapClapClapClapClap... plz don't kill the babyEmbarrassed... please...

Not once, did I have a smile in this update so u better make the epilogue [whenever it comes] damn smileyAngryLOL coz if iask the next update all happy shappy that is not possible...

I don't know why but I have a strong feeling you won't turn it into a tragedy but then again you never know with jazLOL... one request plz don't kill any one plz... Embarrassed

Did I tell you I love this FFEmbarrassed... Really am in love with your writing its heart wrenching...

n yeah just in case you dont know m still cryingCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
thanks for the updateBig smile


Edited by aiyana - 27 January 2011 at 10:18pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Wat to say....... Plz let geet nd baby alive...... Kya bigaada hai unhoney tumhara........

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
jeez... really hoping Geet and Maan get a breather sooonConfused... Poor Maan, living through the scare of her having actually died for a couple mins there , to their baby fighting for her life to now geet , fainting again!

Hope the story takes a happy turn for the couple soon... but yeah, you write well, keep it up.Smile and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
U just cudn't let her be happy even for 2 minutes...one bomb after the other....poor girl....so much sorrow in such a short span of time... CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

feel so bad for the two of them...can't help but feel out to maan....his 2 girls in such a situation...

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
u r an amazing writer keep it up u bring up da feelings so well

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
loved the super long post
why is so many cruel things happeign to maaneet
i hope they get through it and baby is okay

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