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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 80)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Wat to say....... Plz let geet nd baby alive...... Kya bigaada hai unhoney tumhara........

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
jeez... really hoping Geet and Maan get a breather sooonConfused... Poor Maan, living through the scare of her having actually died for a couple mins there , to their baby fighting for her life to now geet , fainting again!

Hope the story takes a happy turn for the couple soon... but yeah, you write well, keep it up.Smile and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
U just cudn't let her be happy even for 2 minutes...one bomb after the other....poor girl....so much sorrow in such a short span of time... CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

feel so bad for the two of them...can't help but feel out to maan....his 2 girls in such a situation...

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
u r an amazing writer keep it up u bring up da feelings so well

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
loved the super long post
why is so many cruel things happeign to maaneet
i hope they get through it and baby is okay

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Jaz  Hug.....Thank u for the long update and PM......what to say?.......poor Maaneet Cry......god so much suffering Cry.......your awesome writing makes it so real.......hope soon all iz well.......please my dear.....it is all in your hands......update soon.......plzzzzzzzz  Smile






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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Amazing writeup again!! How do you do it time and again?
BUT BUT BUT I have a suspicion here: Did by any chance The Brij Boy pay you to cause Geet and baby harm in your stories? Each update is like heart in the mouth, at this rate I am soon going to need a pace maker or whatever it needs for the heart to beat at normal pace rather than at x*1.5 rate- the updates are that amazingly real and racey... they feel more like thriller between 2 updates :)
Now plzzz dont cause an anti-climax and make Maan lose both Geet n Baby... just make both of them fine.. I will be cherishing happy memories of this SS that way! :)
 
Thanks for the update!!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
I am really too sad to write anything....Why did they insist on telling her about the hysterectomy right there and then? Couldnt that have waited till a little later- once her body was out of shock?

The baby is sinking and so is Geet...Knowing you they both will probably die in the next part...Nahiii....So if we all get together and buy you the latest MAC collection- will you reconsider your plot?

This update made me really sad...

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