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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 68)

heermeher IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
i am feeling sad for geet and baby cant take it their struggle is making me cry

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
its too intense man
u made me feel as if i
was in nicu and icu ,with
2 code blues one for his baby
and 2nd for his wife
 
missy thats 2 much for a human
2 bear and comprehend
my body is still shundering with
fear and intense fear for both geet
and baby
 
grt update
wht can i say more
u left me shaking to
the core
 

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Dear Reader (Pixie),

While this author more that appreciates your concerns and suggestions. The author has one complaint, if you will. The entire "letter" written gives the author no real insight into what the reader felt while reading this particular update. Should the reader provide a detailed account of their thoughts, analysis and general emotions...this author may be persuaded to in fact pull a "Happy ending" out of her magicians hat.

Sincerely,
Author


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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
OMGGG..u are gonna kill me tonite..first i read the OS and i cried then i thought Home coming might have some gud news but it was intense....the parents got what they deserved.i loved maan for what he did to them...and i am so worried for geet and the baby...my heart ached for poor maan...i have a gut feeling that geet will survive for sure...i don't know why..but i guess my heart can't stand if maaneet became apart in this FF...
and lastly...thank u so so so much for updating everything..triple treat..love u for this jaz..
p.s off i go to Ek Paal..god knows what that holds for us 
Thank u again for writing such beautiful stories for us :)

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
oh man i am seriously crying here!!! Cry that was so sad. I feel so bad that Maan can do nothing besides pray and watch the 2 most important people in his life struggle to survive. I hope things turn out well in the end.
Wonderful update!Clap

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged

hiii jaz...

u seriously are hell bent on giving me a massive heart attack....

so much drama..................i had stopped breathing..........

what a powerpacked update..............

i am completely rendered dumbstruck  reading such a fabulous update..............

i envy you...how can someone write so beautifully,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

gosh and now u have left this update hanging mid air....................

now i am even scared to ask u to update......

pata nahi tumhe gussa aa gaya toh...

so update wenever u get time ....hopefully soon..LOL cant help my habit of bugging for updates..

dont mind my childish behaviour...

anyway thanxx a lot for this marvellous update

keep writing

reva


 

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
^^ i honestly dont mind the asking...the tantrums or the masti and all...i just hate it when people simply say "update" or "update now"...no please...no nothing...that i dont like...so ask for the update...by all means...ask away...ha ha...

JAZ

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
JAZ  Hug.......what an update.....poor Maaneet.Cry......i am in awe of your writing skills......u are such an amazing witer Clap......plz continue my dear ......TC Smile

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