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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 55)

nikipuki Senior Member
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Jaz.....you really excel at emotional scenes....you made me feel as I was just there experiencing each of those emotions.....very emotional update......

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:03pm | IP Logged

Huh...Geet in coma & baby is not doing well either. Cry Poor Maan!

But it's not just Handa Parents' fault...all of them contributed; incl. Geet, Maan & NT as well as Khuranas.
 
Jaz, Pls we need happy Maaneet family...
 
-Sona
 

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Omd when you showed meeras date I thought I missed something but then when I read on I realised it would link on and awe man I feel for maan seeing his wife and daughter fighting for life and he is helpless and I really do hope they bcome better and geet comes out of coma soon and I realise how hard it must have been for meera to operate on a close one knowing their life is in your hand and awe like naintara's little monologue about her relationship with geet and ooh wonder what maan asked dev a favour for knowing that he is a lawyer and he also asked if her chance of having a normal pregnancy would have been better if geet got proper care and even I didn't like the presence of geets parents so I wonder how maan feels anyways loved the whole update and the real atmosphere you created and can't wait to read maans confrontation with geets parents Smile

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:15pm | IP Logged

hiii jaz...

the update was extremely gripping..........

geet slipping into coma and the  possible complications with the baby's condition being critical......they wer so well depicted that this entire sequence left me holding my breath.....

the update was simply marvellous and flawless from all aspects..

keep writing

reva

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Amazingly written, very intrestin part! Lovd readin. Aftr readin it i felt like to kil her parents had they taken care of her she wouldnt slip into ths critical cond. Plz save both of them. Plz cont soon.

Edited by chubzy - 09 January 2011 at 7:17pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
really nice..but sad..

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Oki Jaz I hardly get tears, but this was an exception. Omg what an update, a painful reading yet beautifully written. I must say this has to be one of your best work, so touching, and I could feel each n every moment. I seriously felt like I was watching GA or the other similar show, dont remember the name. But it was a nailbiting update. You are a great storyteller, with all the emotions n feel.

You know I wasnt in a mood to comment, but you compelled me to comment. Im so overwhelmed with this update, oh Jas I love you for this.
Can you plz tell me when the next update is coming? plz

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
OMG..... Ur last updation nearly gave me heart attack.... Dats y i didn't comment.... But dis one she better quit painful but still dey r alive.

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