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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
AHHHH JAZ YOU ARE AMAZING!

How is it that each and every one of your updates always end on a cliffhanger making the reader want to read more and more?!

Honestly when I went to pg 53 and read the first para I went back to the first pg to check I was reading the right SSLOLI couldn't figure out where Dev came from and then I read on and realised what you were trying to get at.

Everything seems to be all over the place right now for Maan. His wife is in a coma and can never have children again, his little new born kid is underweight and has jaundice and now to make things worse Geet's parents that could have taken care of everything decide to turn up at the hospital. It doesn't get more dramatic than that! lol

I hope Geet and her baby are OK. I'm a sucker for happy endings.Embarrassed

Awesome update Jaz!Clap
I'm already looking forward to your next update!

P.S. Do you happen to be a med student or a doctor? Like NT I'm not a doctor either lol but I liked your usage of medical terms..it helped bring the story to life for me :)


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
i was crying SOO badly when i read ur update!!! it was beautiful, i feel so sorry for all 3 (maan geet and the baby). I hope everything turns out well in the end, or I wil come to you in the middle of the night and attack you with a pitchfork!!!Big smileLOL

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
great update its beautifully written ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
very very emotional part
hope geet and baby recover soon EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
loved it !!! continue soon..

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
wow!!! I had tears in me eyes - that was sad........oh my i fully support maan on raging through the handas...........oh no they dont..........i feel extremely bad for geet - i hope the child survives......if not she will break completely!!!!!!!
awww
 
i'll come back later- let me gather my thoughts
 
besides i need to get to sleep asap
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGG,
Geet can't catch a break, gr8 update, i think i'm gonna love the next part waaaaaaaaaaaaay too muchLOL, seems Maan is in murdering mode, Ohh The Handas r soooooooooo dead.

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WOW!!!   That was an amazin update!! loved it and really looking forward to the next update!!

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