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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 53)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
hey babeji!!! me here!!! woot woot!! thats becuz im at masis house and no one is here and i stopped my ss to read urs!! feel special!!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

so like u started with this whole dinner thing and im like omg W*F.... all the tragedy happened and u decided to start on this date and talk about meera's life for a minute!! im like okay shes special but not right now!!!! geet is serious and shes having fancy dinners with her soon to be inlaws!!! that can wait!!!LOLLOLLOL im so mean!!LOLLOL

but haila omg!! dude maan is soooo giddy!! dude needs to control!! i mean family members arent allowed to be in the room to begin with!! it dont matter if hes a doctor or not!! he makes other people nervous!!!!LOLLOLLOL

aww c-sec!! and it was a tiny little girl!! 3lbs!!!! CryCryCryCry hope she will be fine!!!!!CryCryCry and omg geet went into a coma i soooo did not see that coming!! infact i didnt see anything coming becuz someone didnt tell me wats gonna happen in this ff!!!AngryAngryAngryAngry uff!!AngryAngryAngry u make me soo mad!!

and then in the end.... omg!! the parents came!!! i will push maan out of the way and i will go do some kung fu on these parents!! its all their fault why she is in a coma!!!! whack parents!AngryAngryAngry and u left off at a bad part!!!! hurry now cuz i wanna see some action some verbal exchanges!! well only from mann! he needs to give her parents a talk on how to take care of their pregnant daughter!!AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry


phew!!! wow my longest comment ever!LOLLOLLOLLOL plz cont soon!! and i mean soon!!! cuz if u dont her parents will be beaten up before u even the next part!!!LOLLOLLOL


luv u babeji!!!


Edited by *Guli* - 09 January 2011 at 4:21pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Res
Thaaank u for such a loooong nd lovely update
It was so emotional
Luv ya

Edited by Azmii - 09 January 2011 at 4:27pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

Jaz that was amazing
i swear to god through that update my breathing had become slightly more shallow.......
omg really awesome
loved every blumin word.....
so deep and awesomeeee hahaha no words lol

I LOVE YOU
hahahahha

hope geet and baby gets better
and take a bash on mr,mrs handa
hahahaha
plz updats soon
ah my breathing gets normal again lol

btw 3rd one to comment...not bad....   :P


Edited by Ilovemsk - 09 January 2011 at 4:24pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
amazing update
OMG you have to make geet better asap!
i assume maan will have to take care of the baby alone for sometime
but geet needs to get out of her coma like right away lol.. in the next update
hope her parents feel bad for what they caused
update soon please!!

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
lovely update pls update soon.
xxx

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
res!!!
aww man i have to freaking go out right nowCry....pinky promise, will comment as soon as i get back!
i lovee youuuuuu twinnie!!! for now that is.....will see if this statement needs updating after i m done readingLOL 
thank u soooo much for updating!Hug
 
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH twinnie....nooooCry....you know my heartbeat kept on increasing the whole time as i kept on reading down further and further.....wayy to give me shocks after shocksCry.....she is never gonna have kids again? she is in coma? the baby is being monitored?.....O-M-G was there anything else left for you to add? *pouts*
 
awww poor maan....idk how he dealt with all that?....but before that, omgg twinnie you did such an amazing job in the update with the med terminology and proceduresClap.....you made sure none of your readers would be left confused at the end and on top of that, you gave me some pre-med knowledgeLOL.....i know u r done with college and now internship but how closely are you in the med field twinnie?.....u know i could relate sooo much to this update cuz i haven't given mcats yet so i don't even know if i will ever get into med school but seeing all this, honestly, my fingers were shaking like meera's and the heartbreak that maan was feeling.....idk how i will manage to work with family members like that.....so even though my commet will totally seem worthless next to your awesome update, thank you soo much!.....don't ask what its for cuz idk eitherLOL....but your writing truly touches one's soul!Embarrassed
 
omggg to think this could all have been avoided if those....beep beeps....urghhhAngry.....i know maan can't really beat them up but i hope maan uses such venom in his words that they themselves are enough to pierce their hearts.....poor maan, how can a guy not kill the people who turned his happy-go-lucky life into a state worse than hell.....make them suffer twinnie *muhahha* lemme know if u need to borrow my pink bulldozer!Wink
 
lovee you!!
 
P.S. i still don't like for torturing us poor souls.....dude now i willbe  freaking wondering the whole time what your devious little mind is gonna throw at us next!LOL
 


Edited by macho_muffin - 10 January 2011 at 11:52am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
that was very emotional. poor geet and poor maan. i do want to see maan go off on the parents, because they seriously did not have their priorities straight. can't wait to read the next chapter. update soon!

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
this was a very scary and very nerve wrecking update!!1
OMg please I hope Geet and the baby survives!!
I think Maan is going to do case on his and her parents
how could they have dne that to their daughter
what people think is really tht important versus ur daughters life
I hope they are happy with themselves and the reputation they managed to save
hate this type of thinking that might still exist in society
update soon!

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