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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 50)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
jaz i think r u doctor.... u explained every well about 
gestational Diabetes...
it amazing.. great part pls continue soon....
can't wait pls geet and his baby must be safe plssssss

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Hi JazSmile

Beautiful update again!
I was really scared after the last update if everything is fine with Geet or not and after reading this update I am scared like hell. I was crying by the time I finished reading this. The more I read, the more I get attached to the characters. Emotions flow through your writing. You write it so beautifully that one can emotionally connect with it. 

I feel for Geet. She has suffered a lot in the past seven months and now she comes to know that her baby's life is in danger-the baby for whom she had been fighting since seven months!
Glad that Naintara is there with her along with Maan to support her emotionally besides taking care of her needs.
I smiled at Maan in the part where Geet has morning sickness and he calls Naintara to call a doctor and Naintara, in turn, hands over a detergent packet to Geet. I was imagining his reaction there.
Wedding was really beautiful. You write it so well that one can actually visualize the whole set-up. 
And in the end, you dropped a bomb on us. GeetCry 
That part was really scary where Geet was suffering and was trying to call Maan and Naintara and when she was at the stairs and the blood oozing out which was soon forming a pool just shook him. I am wondering what will happen now. But please, I want both Geet and the baby to be safe. *fingers crossed*

BTW are you a doctor or did you browse the net? I mean, you explained the complications with complete medical terms, with all the pros and cons. Whatever the case is, I must say you really work hard for your writings! Commendable!Clap   

Also, I have a small request.
Can you please PM me the links of the OS, SS, FF's you have written? I want to read more of your work. I am reading EK PAAL besides Home Coming but would love to read more. 

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
beautifully narrated part.............cont soon

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
m dead Dead 
 
jaz it was awsome ClapClap
raed all 5 parts and got to say it was fantastic StarStar 
maan's arrival, geet's preg, maan's care and the proposal was just COOL... have no words to describe how much i loved it...
the hospital scen and geet knowing bout the complications (noor was Cry)
and what is this that happened now..!!??
take her to the hospital do something yaar cant see/read it like dis
wwaiting.. please update soon TongueBig smile(its a humble req yaar LOL)
 
oh and btw jaz if ur sending pmz then i'm not gettin them Confused 
 
 
love
Noor


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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeeee
bt hope geet is alright n even her baby could b saved somehow
happy tht maaneet r married
plzzzzzz update soooonnnnnnnnn

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged

hiii jaz...now thats a cliffhanger dear...

completely hooked to the SS...

hope nothing serious happens to geet....

cant help pestering you for one more part

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 5:36am | IP Logged
hiiii
sorry 4 da late comment
beem abroad
loved the ff
its awesome
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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