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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 5)

mchopra IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 10:19am | IP Logged
what was that..u left it half way..and u want long cooments..ok lets start but conditon i want the next update within 24 hrs not a min more u are geeting..pakka or next time i will take full revenge and write only ok..thats all..and u know me well enough i do what i say..we ahve read enough of ech other by now..hehe
mmm so the SS..what everyone says u have more..this is my first SS i usualyy read ur OS and they were al beautiful and this one toh mind blowing..mmm and suspense..why she couldnt meet now i am gonna cojure up stories the entire night woman..mmm and i know none of them will match..hehe
and maan an army officer..ahhhh i am trying to imagine ...mmm and NT..why yaar i already hate that name u had to bring her in..but chalo i bet this was the only part which had her..
looking forward to the next part eagerly..jaldi update karo..
PS:loong commnet see..

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jnawaz

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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 10:35am | IP Logged
^^ yaar...dhamki deh rahi ho? *shocked muh*...and yes...we do know each other well enough...so you have to know with my hectic life withing the next 24hrs is nearly impossible but im trying...main toh kaam pe hoon phir bhi chup chupke likh rahi hoon...will try within 24hrs...if not...then by friday for sure!!! Maneet ki kasam! ha ah
JAZ

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esha143 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 11:04am | IP Logged
that was a really good one......now what has happened to Geet that everyone is telling lies about her to Maan n now he's shocked to see her.....Can't wait to know.....do continue soon pls..........

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darkice7_12 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 11:36am | IP Logged
sounds very interesting. can't wait to read what happens next. could you please add me to your PM list? thanks.

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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Very very different to the typical stories written on Maan and Geet. I'm looking forward to your update and how you'll develop the story to show the relationship that they both share.

Lovely OS! :) Can't wait for the next update! :)

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muskaan... Goldie
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
wow.......
please cont. soon....

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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
jaz..plz update soon..i am dying to read the next part ....plzzzzzzzBlushing

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Amiiish IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Jaz this was awesome, but I dont like suspence, you have to continue soon.
I knew the girl was geet, but when he started asking for chutki, I was like maybe she is his sister LOL
Why isnt she allowed to see him, now Im really curious to know. Cant wait for next part, update soon;)

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