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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 24)

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Wow Jaz awsome update yaar i loved how mann supported geet aur kaise mann ne sab family walo ko jawab diya unn sab ke sath aaisa hi hona chahiye bechari geet akele hi sab kuch sehati rahi par nahin bataya ki mann ka baby hai  yaar itna bhi kya guman ki apni beti ka doctor check up nahin karwane diya . I know what did was wrong but parents can't be that cruel to lock their daughter and not even give her regular doc's ck up ck up chodo uss ke khane pine ka khayal uski cravings for diff. food uski liye meternity clothes  thats too much atleast Nt helped geet if she wasn't there god knows what would her parents have done to her anyway yaar i cannot wait for next update...........

Raman

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
nice update....

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
wow amazing update
yes maan told them that the baby is his!
hope the baby and geet are okay
aww make sure he takes her shopping for maternity clothes! lol
con't soon plzzz

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Jazz,
 
thanks alot sweet heart for the awesome update..
 
 
i luved the way Maan stood for her .. and gave a good piece of his mind...
 
I was shocked too at her parents attitude .. its understandable that they're shocked and heartbroken but this kind of negligence is totally un acceptable ..
 
and the way Brij hoped that without prenatal care she might have miscarrieage ... i mean eww .. that was sick to the core... how can not think of putting his own daughter's life in danger ...
 
plzzz next update jaldi kero  ..   Day Dreaming
 
 
btw.. did i tell you that u're an awesome writer!    Hug
 
 
luv,
 
Sana
 

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Oh my goshh!! Loved it to the core! To be frank, I was also quite scared about how Maan would react, but it was amazing! He's the kind of partner everyone wants. I love you for writing this!! Brilliant job!
Might I add though, I reckon you made her family worse in this story than they were in the family in my opinion. Bloody hell, how can anyone do something like this to their own daughter?? Despicable! Btw, never thought I'd say this, but I love NT here. Also loved how Maan announced that he's the father. That's a big slap accross the face now isn't it? Haha!
This update has left me speechless (yes I do usually write this much when I'm speechless LOL.) as your updates usually do. Eagerly looking forward to the next one! Updata asap!!
<3

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 12:16am | IP Logged
I'm so happy Maan is so responsible!
Loved him scolding everyone...haha!
Thanks for the update
love you

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 12:25am | IP Logged
 hi dear.
 awesome start and just read all three parts.
 it's awesome brilliant , beautiful.
 loved it.
loved maaneet scene and conversation.
 brij is too bad. how could he left geet like that and geet's mother never prtest about it.
 omg, in 7 months geet never go to her check up.
thanks God maan is back.
now I'm sacred about geet and baby.
update soon.
 pm me when u'll post next part.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 20 December 2010 at 1:46am

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 1:06am | IP Logged
superb!!!!.......
 
beautifully written!....
 
the way maan supported geet is mindblowing!....really proud of him!
 
poor geet!...she had to suffer sooo much!
 
i hope geet and their baby will be fine!
 
continue soon!

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