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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 23)

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
those fears alone paralyzed her nearly every moment of every day- loved that line
aww i ahd tears in my eyes when maans aid it was his baby
i hope everything is okay

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:45pm | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM.Loved the part.Disgusted with thier families,how could they ignore her like this,they should have showed atleast some mercy on her.Loved the way Maan comforted her,how sweet.How nice of Geet,she didn't want Maan to seen as bad,loved her courage towards her love.Hope  Geet and thier baby is alright. Continue...................

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:59pm | IP Logged

I am in tears reading the update!! Beautifully written update and looking forward to the next update!!

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Whoa Jaz...quite an update !!!
Glad to know Maan doesn't regret the child and also the fact that Naintara was there by her sister in such an hour...at least someone was there :)
Gosh....that was splendid when everyone was shocked outta their wits that Maan is the father of the baby...quite a surprise !! Embarrassed

I just hope everything is fine and normal with the baby...Geet has taken care of it from the last 7 months....I hope just hope....In all a very emotional update !

and hey please update soon...do not keep in the darkness any longer like last time Wink

Take Care,
Fatima


Edited by -shabnoor- - 19 December 2010 at 10:07pm

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
GO MAAN!!!!
can't wait for the next part!!!

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Oh my lord, I just DON'T know what to say! I'm speechless. JAZ! You are such an amazing writer!Big smile I really love the concept and the way you ended this one. It is a bit of a cliffhanger (just a bit) but at the same time, it felt like you completed this part. I have no idea if I'm making any sense or not. You said to write long comments so I'm really tryingSmile I just can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
loved it yaar..awsome update .finally everyone knew that its his baby...i hope nothing happens to the baby ..

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Wow Jaz awsome update yaar i loved how mann supported geet aur kaise mann ne sab family walo ko jawab diya unn sab ke sath aaisa hi hona chahiye bechari geet akele hi sab kuch sehati rahi par nahin bataya ki mann ka baby hai  yaar itna bhi kya guman ki apni beti ka doctor check up nahin karwane diya . I know what did was wrong but parents can't be that cruel to lock their daughter and not even give her regular doc's ck up ck up chodo uss ke khane pine ka khayal uski cravings for diff. food uski liye meternity clothes  thats too much atleast Nt helped geet if she wasn't there god knows what would her parents have done to her anyway yaar i cannot wait for next update...........

Raman

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