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MaanGeetkiSimmi Senior Member
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
 Big smile Big smile WOOOOO AWESOME PART ! THANK GOS THERE'S NO DEV THE BIG - DADDY IN THE STORY LOOLS  Big smile Big smile

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
those fears alone paralyzed her nearly every moment of every day- loved that line
aww i ahd tears in my eyes when maans aid it was his baby
i hope everything is okay

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:45pm | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM.Loved the part.Disgusted with thier families,how could they ignore her like this,they should have showed atleast some mercy on her.Loved the way Maan comforted her,how sweet.How nice of Geet,she didn't want Maan to seen as bad,loved her courage towards her love.Hope  Geet and thier baby is alright. Continue...................

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:59pm | IP Logged

I am in tears reading the update!! Beautifully written update and looking forward to the next update!!

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Whoa Jaz...quite an update !!!
Glad to know Maan doesn't regret the child and also the fact that Naintara was there by her sister in such an hour...at least someone was there :)
Gosh....that was splendid when everyone was shocked outta their wits that Maan is the father of the baby...quite a surprise !! Embarrassed

I just hope everything is fine and normal with the baby...Geet has taken care of it from the last 7 months....I hope just hope....In all a very emotional update !

and hey please update soon...do not keep in the darkness any longer like last time Wink

Take Care,
Fatima


Edited by -shabnoor- - 19 December 2010 at 10:07pm

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
GO MAAN!!!!
can't wait for the next part!!!

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Oh my lord, I just DON'T know what to say! I'm speechless. JAZ! You are such an amazing writer!Big smile I really love the concept and the way you ended this one. It is a bit of a cliffhanger (just a bit) but at the same time, it felt like you completed this part. I have no idea if I'm making any sense or not. You said to write long comments so I'm really tryingSmile I just can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
loved it yaar..awsome update .finally everyone knew that its his baby...i hope nothing happens to the baby ..

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