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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 118)

shivangi783 Goldie

Joined: 11 August 2010
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged

Beautiful, touching update!
My eyes are moist yet again but this time it isn't due to the pain or the worry but for the immense satisfaction and happiness I felt after reading this part. Simply heart-touching!

The beginning had the anxiousness and desire in Maan-Geet to take their princess, their angel, their lovely daughter home. Beautifully written.
Roshni is the apple of not just her parents eyes but Naintara, Meera, Yash, Dev, the doctors, the nurses and the list goes on. She surely is special who has carved a place in everyone's heart including the readers.  

The guys and gals made the welcome really special. I love how Roshni plays with them, the crawling race with Yash and Dev was so cute, the gifts discussion, watching her sleep and when everyone as to whose gift will Roshni like first, she crawls up to her daddy Maan-awww so sweet. Reading this part I just felt like I was living those moments  like I could see everyone playing, adoring, loving the little angel, the little princess-RoshniSmile
Meera-Dev's decision of having the wedding later so that Roshni can be the flower girl was so damn touching!!! It shows their depth of love for her. 
You know when I read Roshni sleeping in the nursery when Dev and Yash were standing outside watching her, I wanted her to sleep with her parents and while I was reading further, I saw my wish being fulfilledSmile It was sweetEmbarrassed

It was truly a Home Coming for Roshni and with Roshni, a home coming of happiness in the lives of Geet and Maan! 

This story is really close to my heart and will always be. There's a deep emotional connect with the story and the characters. 

I sincerely request you for an epilogue! Please, please, please  *pleading face*Embarrassed

P.S.-I love you, Jaz. Love you a lot. 
I dare not call you my IF BFF or Babe lest shreya or guli comes running behind meLOLLOL but you are my special friendSmile

Edited by shivangi783 - 23 February 2011 at 12:11pm

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Ilovemsk IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 October 2009
Posts: 2844

Posted: 23 February 2011 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Thats me in the 'note'
I'm so happy
I was in your note ahahaha I'm so happy x
Anyway u ended it....grrrrr
I'm so happy my name is Naina anyway
:( but Naina still angry and don't make fun of me!
Epilogue demanded!!!

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mchopra IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 April 2009
Posts: 11275

Posted: 23 February 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Wow JAZ That was awesome...really..ssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautifully done...i just loved each and every line..but my fav line..
"All philosphy flew out of the window..." so atlast my little torturer found a way to make us mile...and this was truly the BEST HOME COMING EVER..REALLY..
ok now come on and we need an epilogue..u promised me..didnt u...u just cant do taht..and we will good people..and this time no JAZ PEETO ANDOLAN or pink bulldozers for u..or again u will run to someone else..and i am not letting that happen again..haan...
MMM and YIPEEEEEEEEEEEE i knew Roshini will be fine..u see asking u abt kangaroo hold helps...hehe..
and waise i have never seen kids sucking two finger toh agreed...but two...thts the first time..
SEE increase of knowledge..thnks..

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sakadafi Senior Member

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
What a beautiful update!!! Truly, one which brought and held a smile to my face as I read through it.  Finally after all the tragedy, a happy ending.  And the way everyone loves Roshni is too cute....loved Dev & Yash's race with her...that scene was just tooo cute and funny.
Have to say Jaz, you are an awesome writer who had me hooked on from the first update to last.  ClapClapClapClapClapClap Do indulge us readers with an epilogue Big smile

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KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 22539

Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
loved it
loved yash,NT,dev and meera with roshani
soooooo cute
loved da bond that they all shares
loved maaneet
da perfect ending
thanks 4 da mindblowing ff
thanks 4 all ur hard work
thanks 4 da pm

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divareena IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 16799

Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged

Me so glad that geet and roshni can go home. Love how roshni breaks into a tootless grin, so adorable.


Love how roshni runs and throws away all her toys the minute she sees maan and geet. she is a little princess.


Lool roshni sucks her two fingers and not the thumb.


Aww so yash and NT like each other


Love how roshni sleeps with her parents. What a lovely ending. Thank you for the updateClapClapClapClap

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2883

Posted: 23 February 2011 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Awe that was amazing and so sweet roshini is truly a miracle baby but also the jaan of so many people and awe loved how maan drove at a slow pace that even a gran overtook him but he said he had a special cargo that was so sweet and awe the whole foursome with their gifts fighting over whose is the best and the crawling race until watching her sleeping it was so touching espcaily when meera said that she wanted to wait until she was two where she would be able to walk an be her flower girl (if you decide to do an epilogue could it please be on meera and devs wedding Smile) and awe maaneet and their bond with their phari is just beautiful loved it from start to finnish roshini is all of their roshini anyway great end to a beautiful ff Clap

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Nanthini9 Goldie

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
Aww this was an amazing FF. I lyked the ending and how you didnt drag any of the parts. Please give us a epilogue.

Hahaha Dev and Yash are too fun. The crawling game was cute esp Dev's reaction when he won.

Meera and Nai are really sweet. Luved how everyone was there for Maan and Geet through their hard times.

THank you for giving us an amazing FF!!

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