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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
JazSmile

I have updated my comment on page 101. Its the last post on the page. 

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jnawaz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
Hey,
 
I just started ur FF today and have caught up.
I loved it.
It was extremely emotional and not was not a single part which did not make me feel emotionally vulnerable.
U have the ability to make the emotions alive.
 
Please add me to ur PM list n update soon.
 
Thank you.

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
I'm speechlessClap
This was so tocuhing... i could feel thru their fears and heartbreak and awe!
 
All in all a masterpiece... i had tears in my eyes reading it!
 
sorry Jaz but i have no words to retrospect and describe what this update made me feel... thank you so much!
 
Luv you loads for this one

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
omg !!!.............jaz u made cry and laugh n then cry with pure joy again

...." geet ' i feel like a mother'.

that line to me EPITOMIZED the whole ff.

thank u much.
gitz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Winkhey update it soon dear...eagerly watin for it n please dont let d baby oops roshni loose her life

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
As usual, you did amazing job and again you surprised me with new things which I have never heard before like this kangaroo hold. 

How do you find all this info? Very well written but now somehow I want some happy moments outside hospital.

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Heyy twinnie
okay i am gonna apologize in advance for the short comment but i don't feel well again....uff this weather just sucks.....yup, i blame it all on the weather and not on that fact that i finished a whole carton if icecream yesterday and haven't been wearing scarfs/hats/enough layers while going to college....you see, i am never at fault here! *battles eyeslashes innocently*LOL
abhi sick se better hui thi....wapas wahi chali gayi hehe
and now i can happily say i wuv you sooooooooooooooo muchHug
ohh ya missy u know why, i hear a *cough happy ending cough* comingWink
guess no need for MY PINK BULLDOZER.....thats right, *cough MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY cough*
you know i think screw the med work....go join the cvs or even better, make ur own show....i can guarantee you it would be a hit cuz if u can get my heart thudding rapidly with just your writing, with a whole crew and music and screenplay you can work wonders!Embarrassed
really twinnie, you are sooo BLAWDYY good!!!Clap
i get scared, i feel relieved, i chew my lip in anticipation, i smile.....and the list goes on and on as to what to  your writing does to me....i get sooo lost in the story that i never even realize its merely a pice of fiction....thats how it means to me twinnieEmbarrassed
i am gonna cut it short cuz my headache is being a big fat meanie right now....will comment on ek paal soon!
love,
 
THE CREATOR OF THE PINK BULLDOZER


Edited by macho_muffin - 11 February 2011 at 9:10pm

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Wow yaar what an update very emotional and touching bechari manneet for both parents very hard to see see their baby girl goin through atached throuh machines for breathing. I would so break down geet being a mom want to hold her in her arms give her all the happines and specially after knowing she won't be a mother again she wants her princess to be normal see her playing with her mommy and daddy.The Kangaroo hold never heard of it b4 u explained it very well Finally geet get to hold her baby feel her I hope the baby is fine soon so manneet get to take her home. Time toh leti hai update karne mein par yaar must say worth waiting evtime u write its always amazing.

Love ya 
Raman
Talk to u tomorrow....:) 

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