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SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 (Page 10)

Amiiish IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 4:15am | IP Logged
I almost guessed that it was something like that, but it was touching.
Do I need to tell you that I love the way you write. And thanks for updating so soon, love your friend for this LOL
Now half of the suspence is unfolded, but we are still there, where the first part ended, me is getting greedy now LOL
And the fb was well written, the love between Maaneet was lovable.
Keep up the good work Jaz!

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 5:39am | IP Logged
I really doubt I need to tell you to PM me and I dont think I'll tell you how much I loved it eitherWink

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Jaz..wow so that means more than a half a page this time..ok thats gonna take me time..mmm but since u kept ur promise i shall keep up mine too..pakka..
lets start with this part...loved the way u described the night..it was simple and not vulgar some people just go over the top describing that..i didnt have to hide it..i could read it..well done over that..
and MAAN mmm he is still posseive of her na..loved that from him..
the separation at the airport..made me teary eyed..awwwwwwww...
and since she is in the atiic that means she didnt tell anyone..ab nxt time describe abt her what happened in her life past 7 months..may be two three lines but i really wanna know...
GEET and nerd..who was the inspiration here,...tell tell..and bff on IF..oh i understand the pain there..its crazy but yup thank to her we got it so soon i am gonna PM her to pester u again...or me shall start with that..
in one line I JUST LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT..THANK U..WAITING FOR MORE..HOW ABT 24 HRS AGAIN..HEHE

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Jaz, this is awesome SS. Missed ur writing...

I guessing Geet didn't tell them who the father is...wow, the family is mean!

Pls continue soon....

-Sona

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 6:57am | IP Logged
OMG....that wasjust superb......loved it to core
that was just so goood....maan's kid that is....
she did no tell that to anyone....great one...

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 6:59am | IP Logged
OMG simply superb story

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 7:54am | IP Logged
nice one , cont soon

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 7:59am | IP Logged
loved it...it was very touching...i don't think she gave out maan's name to her parents

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