SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 - Page 19

bluedreamz953

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Posted: 13 years ago

I'm so happy Maan is so responsible!

Loved him scolding everyone...haha!

Thanks for the update

love you

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi dear.
awesome start and just read all three parts.
it's awesome brilliant , beautiful.
loved it.
loved maaneet scene and conversation.
brij is too bad. how could he left geet like that and geet's mother never prtest about it.
omg, in 7 months geet never go to her check up.
thanks God maan is back.
now I'm sacred about geet and baby.
update soon.
pm me when u'll post next part.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

superb!!!!.......

beautifully written!....

the way maan supported geet is mindblowing!....really proud of him!

poor geet!...she had to suffer sooo much!

i hope geet and their baby will be fine!

continue soon!

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ansah

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Posted: 13 years ago

Gawd....that was one out of world update....

Poor geet had to face all this all alone....

but now maan is there for her.....

How can her parent's be so horrible

Maan's gut feelings.....now i am scared

Hope both the child and geet will be fine

waiting for next one....thanks for awesome one

update soon....and keep writing

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg I was waiting finally u updated...

Jaz yaar u made me cry...I felt so bad for Geet...can't wait for the next part...

update soon...hope da baby is fine...nothing happens to geet....

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Zoya

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Posted: 13 years ago

All I can say is awesome!!!
Sorry yaar isse zyada I cant comment because I have got a bandage in my right arm and its hell difficult writing with single hand!!!
And Yeah Thanx also for taking time out and updating!!!

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afsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update

Geet was scraed that he wnt accept the chld n may doubt her

Waise evn i was feeling the same

But good that Maan trusted her a lot

After listening to Geet Maan was hell angry

Man he controlled a lot i swear if it was in his hands he wuld hav killed sumone at that moment

Plz no senti plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i dnt want his thoughts to cum true plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Loved NT she actually took care of her very well

Sweet sis

I dnt lik Brij he shuld hav atleast got a doc home for her but nahi my reputation

If ur daughter wuld ha been dead na toh make reputation ur daughter

If i wuld be there i wuld hav said this for sure

Liked how Maan took all elders in hand

The way he blasted them was fab

Plz no bad news

Update soon

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JayaR

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Posted: 13 years ago

yet another gr8 update.....

excellent work....loved d way Maan reacted aftr wht Geet told him abt how she spent her 5months all alone....

loved d way he rescued her n warned both d families.....

yiiipppppeeee.....im happy u updated......
pls update d nxt part soon......

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582204

Posted: 13 years ago

You are brilliant beyond brilliant! Your style of writing is so unique and wonderful I become so engrossed within the text I become completely oblivious to my surroundings, your writing has that effect upon me!
I can't WAIT for the next part oooohh I'm so exited :D
Keep up the fantastic work! xXxXx

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duniya12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fantastic, brilliant, awesome!!! Loved it so much. So proud of MSK the way he made everyone shut up and make the ladies realize that they too were mothers and how badly they have behaved w/ his Geet. I love Geet for what she had done to keep her Maan's pride safe. She loves him so much and MSK's love for her is like an ocean. Ohhhh I am so proud of both of them. Again loved the update and cant wait for the next part. Please please update soon.

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