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Lets Fall In Love...FF Updt chpt 3(pg5) (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 December 2010 at 6:42am | IP Logged

WOW!

this is seriously amazingly good. i love it. please add me to your pm list. please continue

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thanks for taking us into another magical world of Radev...  so amma there tooooConfused
 
great start, i am looking forward to attend their marriage soon...Tongue
Good luck and best wishesThumbs Up
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Awesome start Clap Clap Clap.....................looking forward to attend Radev wedding

good luck Smile


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This is a very frsh concept... Liked it.. Waiting for ur next udate

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i love to read ff's ......... so plz continue

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Liked the introduction very much. Its a different concept of RaDev fighting Wink Clap Clap Clap Good start and would love to read more soon. Smile

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g8 start

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Chapter 1

 

It was the night of their (Dev and Radhika's) marriage. The whole atmosphere at the Purohit's and Shastri's house was full of hustle and bustle. It was filled with exciting tone of the relatives….

 

The happiness that Mr.purohit was receiving at that moment was undescribable for him as because his only son who he wanted to get settle was finaling getting married, there was a bright grin lingering on his face all the time telling that how much happy he is….    

 

On the other hand ladies of the house were full busy with wedding work. Then dadima with excited tone 'chalo aab bharat inkalne kah samay hogeya hai' in a bit loud pitch she said.

 
The relatives made their way out to the gate mean while Vaishali and Dadima went to bring Dev from his room.

 

Here in his room dev was sitting on his bed dressed up in the bridegroom's outfit with a mixture of angry and sad expression! He was angry because his marrying someone he didn't want to  and was misssing lot s of his important meetings! was sad because he couldn't do any thing about it as he was uptight due to the situation!

 
'shit yaar jo jeez main abhi nahi karna chahata wahi hone ja raha hai aur main kuch bhi nahi kar sakta, kaash dad mere shadi ki chinta nahi karte'! dev said in his thoughts.  
 
Entering inside  Dev's room 'dev' Vaishali said with a loving tone. Dev instantly looked up only to find Dadi and Vaishali standing infront of him. He stood up and walked towards them.

 

Dadi placing a hand on his cheek loving  ' aaj hum bahut khush hai tere liye. Tere dad toh sabse zyada hai kyuki joh vo itne samay se chaha raha tha voh aaj hone ja raha hai' she said with a smile on her face.

 

'haa beta aaj hamare liye bahut khushi ka din hai, iss ghar ka ek laute bete ki  shadi jo hain' Vaishali said with a tinge of excitement.

 

'acha acha aab bas bhi karo yeh emotional bate'! Mrinalini quipped in. ' warna hume der ho jaigi.

 

Everyone looked towards the door hearing that and found Mrinalini….

 

Then looking back at dev Dadi said 'aree haa hum toh tumme niche bhoolane ke liye aaye they, voh bharat inkalne ka samay hogeya hai'

 

Par hum toh yaha aah kar tumse bate karne main lag gaye' Vaishali said smilingly.

 

They all than proceed outside for there daparture.  

 

 

At Shastri's place… there house was decorated beautifully with lots of colorful lights and flowers making the place appear as gorgeous as ever…. devki and shastrijee was immersed in their work not having a break to even breathe! Vishaka was also lending her hand to help as wel but uninteresringly as she was really not happy about this marriage and due to this her heart was gathering alot of hatred towards radhika!

 

But in all this excitement and noise there was one person who was in a very devastating state! It was the bride herself 'Radhika'…. She was sitting infront of the mirror adorned with bridal wear and jewelries looking at herself but was in a deep thought and could hardly hear any noise as she was too lost in her own mind!

 

Suddenly one of her cousin ran up to her in excitement and in a loud pitch she said 'bharat wale aagay, bharat wale aagay!

 

Radhika jerked her head towards her cousin in shocked, as the bharat came abit too early for her!

She quickly went towards the window to see. In her thoughts 'oh god! Itne jhaldi kaise aage yeh log…damn, thore der baat nahi asakte they!

 

Outside shastrijee and devki hurriedly went towards the gate to welcome them…

 

Everybody were dancing and singing in the bharat including Dadi. It was a very uproarious atmosphere! Mr. Purohit due to his condition came in the car with Vaishali which was right behind the bharat….

 

okay guyx dis chpt 1, i am really nervous about how wud u guyz react after reading, hope u  like it...if not than do tell.

btw amma is in dis ff but will not appear now.

 

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