Part 2: Distractions: I'm already gone...you sold it to me....I think I know what the distractions might be....actually nope I'm just kidding...haven't got a clue, b/c you fool me every time!! But I'm so glad you updated b/c I was dieing to know what is gonna happen especially he's the first person she told her real name to!!!!
And here it comes....OMG! They finally got a doctor in the house....YAY!! Poor Maan in pain, good thing Geet is running her hand through his hair and comforting him!!!
And he felt "growing ease" in her lap....now that is stuff I wanna read! And then go ahead and kill the moment with him concluding it's a "cheap antic" b/c she is a prostitute after all!
And this is how you bring it back: he didn't regret the strenuous act on his neck, for she was every worth the sight he got: OMG!!!! That's a damn amazing way to reel me back!
When you wrote that Chandni was not used courtesy from men and that too in the form of words....that never hit a chord! She is a prostitute and I sometimes forget that b/c her approach from the beginning is quite different! It may seem like an oxymoron or irony, but she's still pure in the simplest of ways b/c these small little things matter to her! Her outlook in life is different, or maybe her outlook may be (or will be) changing. And she understood the importance of these actions of his...the SORRY...b/c she's not used to being respected in that way!!!! God, I def feel for her...what a soul! And what a life!!!!
And her fumble I'm not Chandni, but Geet...OOPS...it's Chandni!!! Maan's effect on women!!! And he's brushing his teeth with his index finger...OMG I did that two days ago b/c I lost my toothbrush while traveling to a friends...how about that!! And that millionaire vs common tribe line....effing awesome!!!
Priceless moment: Sharing the bed...his question, her comeback, and his no response....Maan is obviously not used to not getting his way, but Geet is on a whole other level of genius!!! And then the next conversation he had with her so he could hear her voice!! In all attitude...MR MK is all like woman, I don't share my bed with anyone...and Geet's witty one-liners and comebacks....It's my bed honey....gotta love that!!!
And then all the pillow talk...no pun intended, but annoyed Maan asking her if he should sleep in her arms....my answer a Big YES!!!! And then she moves so he doesn't feel cold...the argument and then the laugh that gave him peace....loved this to death!!!
And then all that deep and soulful talk....she's pretty much trapped here and the only identity she can and will have is of Chandni...no wonder her veil, but I think once he sees her face...everything will change for sure b/c he calls her Geet so he kind of forgets her prostitute image! Also the the last line was amazing...the whole she's a distraction and he doesn't WANT to ...key word WANT....he doesn't want to resist her! Slowly, she's becoming his weakness...he needs to see her and hear her voice...he's changing, the same way she is! And I love it!!!
Amazing update! I loved it so much!!! Can't wait for the next part...time to go read NY Times!!!
Edited by sweet coco - 20 December 2010 at 6:48pm