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unknown consequences Epilogue tonight 23/09 (Page 6)

SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 7:31am | IP Logged
great one....reallly loved it to core

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:07am | IP Logged
nice story..................
both the parts were nice....................
Maan is protective and without the always hot headedness..................
cont soon and thanks for the pm.........................

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
love it.. awsome..
maan is so caring n procative abt geet..
just love it..
cant wait for the nxt update..
plz..continue soon.
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nice FF
loved maan
please PM me whenever u update next
thank u
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
update sooon ...  plzzz


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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
update after the finale of apprentice.. tonight!! Hope stella winssss!!

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Part 3
Geet walked out of the classroom and went to the locker room and collected her books when her path was blocked by a guy. Geet looked at him

'excuse me'

'Hi I'm Arun, tum bohot khubsurat ho. Waise bi Main Delhi main naya aya ho. Maine kuch kuch cheezein dekhe hai,jaise Chandi Chowk aur Red fort kya tum mujhe sight seeing ke liye lekar jasakti ho'

Geet: Excuse me, Flirt karni ki koshish karehai ho'

NEW GUY: Kuch aisa samajlo' He Held her hand. Geet smiled. Everyone was looking at the scene in shock

Geet: Haat choro.

New Guy: Ek baar pakar liya to phir nahi choronga

GEET: aacha, kya kya dekha, Tumne Maan ko dekha hai.

New Guy: Maan, Maan kya hai?

MAAN from behind: Maan main ho. Haath chor ladki ka.

College bystanders: Ab yeh ladka to gaya. Sare ladke ko pata hai, Geet se galti se bi maat flirt ya zabarzasti karna.

Maan walked up to them. He pulled Geet's hand away from him.

'Excuse me dude, tum hum dono ke beech arahey ho' Arun said.

'beech main.. agar tum dono ke beech main kuch ta to main beech main ata na'

'Aur ha Mr mujse door rehna warna' said Geet pointing her finger at Arun.

'nahi rahonga toh kya karlongi tum' He grabbed Geet hand and pulled her towards Arun. Unknowingly as Arun pulled Geet, she banged her arm on the locker and whimpered which Maan noticed. He looked at Geet and then Arun and gave Arun a punch which made him let go of Geet's hand. Geet slapped him. 

'I hope you got your answer' said Jay turning up from the back with Armaan and Ridhima. And the gang walked out.

Home before going to club

Geet had to cancel going to dinner due to a family meeting which worried her. She needed to tell Maan as soon as possible. That evening Geet got ready in her black party dress and clutch and waited for Maan outside her house. He turned up in his sports car.

'Hey Geet, ladki jaise lagrahi ho' Geet didn't respond. He knew something was playing on her mind otherwise she would have started to fight back by now.

'kya hua, mere train se speed bolni wali best friend ke pass aaj koi jawab nahi hai'

'huh kya tum kuch karehey te aur sorry dinner cancel karna para, family meeting hogayi ti aur bua bi ayi ti'

'Geet main dinner ke bare main nahi kuch aur kehraha ta'

'wo main'

'kya hua'

'Mujhe tumhari help chahiye'


'tum gari chalao club main batati ho sab ke samne'

Maan and Geet drove to the club where everyone was waiting for them. Jay Meera, Armaan and Ridhima sat on a table and couched.

'Whats up' asked Jay.

'Mujhe tum sab ka maadat ke zarorat hai'

'kis liye' asked Ridima

'Kisi ko bagane ke liye' Geet said

'woh to tum khud ke kaafi ho' Armaan said. Geet looked at him and threw her purse at him.

'shut up guys, Geet bolo kya hua' asked Maan

'BUA ne mere liye ladka dekha hai aur wo do din main mujse milne araha hai'

'Kyun' asked Jay

'Jay tum kitne stupid ho.' Meera said

'woh chahti hain ke main ausey milo ghomao aur pasand karu shaadi ke liye jo main bilkul nahi karna chahti. Isliye ausi bagane main tumsab ke maadat chahiye ausi delhi se waapas Punjab bejne ka. Wo kal college araha hai mujhse milne aur wo yaha college bi join karne wala hai, naam hai SangeetPal'

'Matlab Sangeetpal ka welcome karna parega apne style main' Jay said

'don't worry Geet, ab tum dekhna wo kaise bagtahua waapas jahta hai' said Armaan.

'Ha Geet, kal auski bandh nahi bajaye to tum dekhlena' said Ridhima

'Ha Geet kal ke liye plan hum aaj shuru kardalengey' said Meera


'Mission eradicate Sangeetpal' said Geet and put her hand out and everyone joined hand.

'Kal ka din sangetepal ka akri din hoga yaha par' said maan

They discussed the plan and what to do

'aur ha koi be'.' Started Geet

'tumhe Geet ke naam se mat pukarna ya bulana' everyone said

'wow tum log to mere saat rehkar kafi samajdaar hogai ho' Geet said smiling.

'ha bura sangat ka asar hai' Maan said getting ready to run. Geet looked at him

'bura sangat abhi dekhati ho' Geet ran after him with her drink and soon enough it was a massive drink fight between the 6 of them which caused them to get kicked out of the club by the manager.

Geet and Maan were on there way home.

'Maan, thanks'

'kis liye'

'maadat ke liye'

'agar main apne best friend aur billi ki maadat nahi karonga to kaun karega'

'billi tumne mujhe billi kaha'

'ha to tum be mujhe kya kya kaunse naam se pukartey ho'

'Ha ha very funny anyways Maan goodnight see you tommrow'


PRECAP: Mission SANGEETPAL and A NEW GIRL ENTERING'SAMEERA Maan begins to fall for her


Edited by sweetysumaiya - 07 May 2011 at 7:08pm

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