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Posted: 11 December 2010 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Awesome

plz continue very soon

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Posted: 11 December 2010 at 10:25am | IP Logged
hey asma....nice part...love ar-kash always....unhe chahe ek hi diolougue bolte,ek hi scene karte....kitni baar bhi dekhun..dill nahi bharta....and mujhe koi mistake nahi mili tumhare ff mein..mai to hajaron galtiyan karti hun...plz con.soon....luv...

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Posted: 11 December 2010 at 11:33am | IP Logged
wsome ......CONTNU

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Posted: 12 December 2010 at 4:12am | IP Logged

Are here only these many AR fans left???????????????????

Silent readers plz share ur views about this one shot of mine.

I'm really thankful to all the people who have appreciated my effort so much.Thank You guys for pressing the LIKE button as well.

Inshallah the update will be here by tomorrow night or tuesday afternoon.

love u all

Asma.


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Posted: 12 December 2010 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
luved it...cnt w8 4 da nxt part......

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Posted: 13 December 2010 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
I'm sorry but I was really very much exhausted today,so couldn't update.Inshallah the part will be here by tomorrow late night or wednesday's afternoon.
Thank You so much guys for all your love and appreciation.
Love u all.Muah.

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PART 2

Padma smiled seeing Shashank accepting Armaan's request but she still was not sure as to how things will be done in such a short span of time.So she thought to interrupt and talk to Armaan.

P: Armaan tumhare jazbaton ki main qadr karti hoon aur samajh sakti hoon ki apne pyaar se alag hona kaisa lagta hai lekin beta shadi abhi kaise hogi.Itni saari tayyariyan karni hoti hain,panditji ko bhi toh dekhna hoga aur shubh muhurat bhi toh zaroori hai.

Armaan smiled and putting his arms around her shoulder he made her sat on the seat once more making himself confortable on the chair next to her.

AR: mujhe samajh hai ki shaadi mein bahut saari preparations karni hoti hain lekin who kya hai ki ab main apni bsket se ek second bhi door nahin rehna chaht .Isse pehle ki unki[He looks up pointing to God] neeyat badal jaye aur who hamare pyaar ke liye koi aur naya imtehaan tayyar kardein main basket ko apna banana chahta hoon.

Everyone smiled and shaked their head seeing Armaan's desperateness while Riddhima was simply looking down and the rosy blush on her face with the glint of happiness in her eyes was back. She was smiling, looking down, a bit nervous and trying to stop the somersaults her heart was doing making her breath heavy with the realization that the dream which she and Armaan had woven together is now going to come true.

Armaan had still not completed his conversation with Padma.He just stopped to see everyone else smiling and giggling a bit when his eyes fell on Riddhima and he lost himself in her for a while completely mesmerized by the happiness and contentment on her face.

JP noticed Armaan ready to lose all his senses for some more time,so he shaked him a bit by nudging his elbow.

He whispered in his ears:Armaan bhaiya flowerji ko toh ab aap aram se saari zindagi dekhiyega lekin filhal apni hone wali sasuma par dhyan dijiye.

Armaan was embarrassed a little but soon covered up himself by moving his attention to Padma once more and began his paused conversation in such a way as if he never lost his concentration.

Riddhima,on the other hand,was completely aware of the gaze  in which Armaan had held her and she turned even more  red-the colour of her cheeks almost matched the colour of her, sauce wala laal ,dress.She noticed him mumbling oye-hoye to himself before turning back to Padma.

Sid was feeling a bit low when he was there in the basketball court but after hearing Armaan's feelings he felt it right to here to see his big brother getting all the happiness which he deserved.The transparent face of Riddhima which reflected her heart also gave him immense satisfaction. The pain of losing Riddhima was slowly overtaken by the realization that he was the cupid in the love-story of the world's best couple.

[Coming back to Armaan],

AR: haan toh main kahan tha.Haan ek maa hain aap isliye aapki bahut khwahish hogi ki aap apni beti ko bahut hi dhoom dham se saari rasmon-riwazon ke saath uske sasural bhejein.Main bhi Riddhima ko apni dulhan aise hi banana chahta tha lekin ab itna kuch hogaya hai,mujh nahin lagta ki Riddhima khud ko bahut comfortable mehsoos karegi.[Riddhima looked at him and sighed.Somethings never change.He always knows what things can give her even a slight worry.While others appreciated her ability to understand the situation and Riddhima's feelings so well.]Rahi baat muhurat I toh meri zindagi mein aaj sham se badhkar koi acha muhurat kya jab meri Basket khud mujhe propose kare.Maine toh sapne mein bhi yeh nahin socha tha ki kabhi Riddhima istarah se ghutnon pe baith kar apni muhabbat ka iqraar mujhse karegi.Aaj ka din meri zindagi k eek bahut hi khaas din hai aur main apni basket ko aaj hi apna banana chaht hoon.Lekin fir bhi aapko lagta hai ki hamein shaadi traditionally karni chahiye toh main toh bas yahi chahunga ki aap Riddhima ka opinion le lein.uski har wish saraakhon par.

Padma kissed Armaan's forehead:mera beta toh waqayi bahut samajhdar hai.shayad tum theek keh rahe ho.Riddhima beta tum kya chahti ho.

RI: Armaan ka har faisla uski basket ko manzoor hai.

She said shyly looking down but the determination in her voice was noticed by everyone.

SHASHANK: "jab dulha dulhan razi toh kya karega qazi".Armaan toh bataon kahan karni hai shaadi.

AR: Shaadi wahan hogi jahan se Basket ne apni internship ki shuruat ki aur jahan woh museebat mein bhag kar jati hai aur dua karti hai ki sab theek ho jaye.Hum  wahin ek honge jahan hum mile,fight ki,friendship ki,pyaar kiya aur fir milkar separate hogaye.Hum usi jagah shaadi karenge jahan bichadne[separate] se pehle humnne aakhiri baar ek doosro ko apne pyaar ka yaqeen dilaya tha.

Riddhima knew the place Armaan was talking about.

AR: Sir chalein?

Shashank smiled.

SH: haan Armaan chaliye.mujhe pata hai ki ab aapko meri beti se shaadi karne se koi nahin rok sakta.

AN: Armaan

Anjali cried.

AR: what?

AN: aise shaadi karoge.are kam se kam tayyar toh ho jao aur hamein bhi toh batao jagah.Ridzy ko thoda toh tayyar karne do mujhe.

AR: Anjy  shaadi ka venue main bataunga nahin chalo dikhata hoo aur rahi baat Riddhima ko dress-up karne kit oh koi zaroorat nahin hai.

He smiled and walked up to Riddhima.She looked at him shyingly while he just moved around her and standing at her back,picked up the corner of her dupatta and carefully made it rest along her head.

AR: hogayi meri dulhan tayyar mere favourite sauce-wale laal dress mein .Basket ko kisi cheez ki zaroorat nahin who aise hi bat khoobsurat hai.

He winked at her making all to say oye-hoye.

AR: Cheaters yeh meri line hai.

YUVI: toh kya hua Sir aaj humne bol diya.aap bhi Riddhima Ma'am ko dekh kar yahi kehna chah rahe honge haina.

Armaan's ears were red,while Riddhima found something very interesting in the ground to gaze at.

AR: main venue dikhane chaloon.

Armaan held Riddhima's hands confidently making all of them follow behind him.

Sid was walking slowly deciding if he would be able to see Riddhima's marriage with Armaan or not.

Just then Shashank stopped him and said: apne pyaar ko khush dekh kar agar tum khush ho tabhi is shaadi mein shareeq hona warna khud ko takleef mat dena.Tumne aaj tak mere aur meri beti ke liye bahut kiya hai Siddhanth.samajh nahin aata ki tumhara shukriya ada karoon ya tumse maafi mangu.

SID: Plz aise mat kahiye.maine pehle jo kiya who Riddhima ki khushi ke liye kiya aur aaj bhi jo karoonga who Riddhima ki khushi ke liye karoonga.mujhe lagta hai ki ab jab main yahan aahi gaya hoon toh indonon love birds ki shaadi dekh kar hi jaun.

Shanky pulled him in a warm embrace and both the men cleared the tears that had formed in their eyes.

SID: chalein

SH: hmm let's go.

 

Everyone was simply surprised except Riddhima when Armaan took them infront of the Ganesh ji's statue in Sanjeevani near the reception.Armaan knew that his words had clearly made Riddhima understand the place where he was going to make his forever.He just raised an eye-brow at her to ask if she is happy,in response of which tears once again flew down her eyes and she hugged him tightly.Armaan held her warmly and tried to soothe her as tears were forming in his eyes too but he somehow controlled them.

SHASHANK: Riddhima kya hua beta

He was worried seeing his daughter crying all of a sudden so badly.

AR: kuch nahin sir .jante hain  ek  saal, ek mahine, saat din pehle humne isi jagah inke[pointing to the idol]samne ek doosre se apne pyaar ka izhaar ek baar fir kiya tha.Basket bas usi pal ko yaad karke thodi si sad hogayi hai.us waqt hum itne khush they  ki hamein andaza hi nahin tha ki un kuch palon mein kiye gaye wade hum ek saal baad kuch is tarah poore karenge aur hamari duayein hamein saugat mein milengi aaj.

Armaan drifted apart Riddhima from him and cleaned her tears[since he was not in a position to do more than that] .

AR: plz Riddhima jo hua use bhol jao.aaj se hamein apni nayi zindagi ki shuruat karni hai.

She nodded while smiling within tears.

AN: Armaan I must say perfect place for your marriage.

AR: who toh hai.Riddhima ne jabse internship start ki hai tabse har important kaam karne se pehle inhein yaad karti hai.Inhone hi hamare jhagdey ko pyaar mein badal diya.Woh kya kehtey hai haan yeh toh Vighn Harta hain dekho na inhone hamri muhabbat ki raahon ko kaise asaan kar diya.hamari pyaar ki raah ke kaante kab phool ban gaye hamein pata hi nahin chelne diya.

PADMA: haan sahi kaha.

All joined their hands and thanked God from their hearts asking for the happiness of this couple.

J.P.- yeh sab toh theek hai Armaan bhaiya lekin shaadi karne ke liye kuch chahiye bhi toh hota hai.

SID: haan yar Armaan JP bilkul sahi keh raha hai.

AR: Don't worry just give me 5-10 minutes.

YUVI: bas 5-10.

SHUBHANKAR:- DR. ARmaan aap thoda time aur le lijiye itni bhi kya jaldi.

AR: maine kaha na sir main bas yun gaya aur yun aaya.

Riddhima was smiling knowing very well the magical powers of Armaan Malik.If he wants to do something things automatically make a way for him.

Armaan squeezed Riddhima's hands and went away leaving everyone confused except his basket.

PADMA: Riddhima tum batao Armaan kya soch kar 5-10 minute bol raha hai.

RI: maan who zaroor paas wale mandir gaya hoga aur wahan se bas pooja ki thaal utha layega aur saath mein pandit.shayad varmala le aaye.

AN: What? Unbelievable.Ridzy agar Armaan sach much aisa hi karega na toh teri shaadi jaise hi poori hogi main uski achi wali pitayi karoongi.

SID: arey kyun karogi tum aisa?

AN: yeh bhi koi shaadi hogi.These two is the evergreen couple of Sanjeevani aur inki shaadi aise ho yeh bhi koi baat hai.

A voice: bilkul change kaha Anjy.

The voice could be recognized in just one go by Anjali.

Another voice: Anjali kabhi galat nahin hoti.

Anjali was stunned and so were Riddhima,Shashank,Shubhankar,Kirti&Padma.

Anjy and Riddhima almost ran to hug the five people standing before them.

Atul,Muski,Rahul,Niki&Abhi were attacked by the siblings out of surprise and joy.

After the rib crashing hugs and shouts of happiness the gang's high peaked spirits calmed down.

MU: Ridzy achi dosti nibhayi hai tumne aur Armaan ne.itna kuch hua lekin hamein toh koi khabar hi nahin .woh toh acha hua aaj subah maine Anjali ko phone kiya aur tab sab kuch pata chala.

RI: Di aapko pata tha.

AN: haan I wanted to surprise you.mujhe laga doston ko bula longi toh shayad tum apna bahar jane ka irada postpone kar do aur fir hum sab milkar tumhein aur Armaan ko ek kar denge.

 RAHUL –Riddhima kaisi hain aap?

RI: achi hoon lekin aap aur Muski.I'm so happy.

RA: mujhe pata chal gaya ki Muski ke bagahir sirf zinda lash hoon main aur bas wapas Patiala chala aaya.

Riddhima gulped as she heard-'zinda lash' from Rahul's mouth.

Armaan's face flashed infront of her.

NIKI: Riddhima tum theek ho.

RI: hmm

NI: mera best friend kahan hai

Riddhima blushed looking down.so her answer was given by Sid: bhabhi who shaadi ki tayyari karne ke liye gaya.5-10 minute mein aata hoga.

Sid hugged Abhi and Niki.

All were surprised but happy.

MU: iska matlab Ridzy maan gayi so no roothna manana only khushi manana.

All looked at Muski for her weird line to which she grinned foolishly .

ATUL: iska matlab ab hum band baja barat lekar Anjali ke ghar jayenge.mere bhai ki shaadi hai.

AN: I wish Atul aisa hota lekin Armaan Ridzy se yahan shaadi karne wala hai who bhi abhi.

ALL 5 together-what?

PADMA: han bachon.ab zara humsebhi mil lo.

All went to meet their seniors.

KI: Muskaan,Nikita aap donon ko istarah shaadi shuda khush dekh kar kitna acha lag raha main bata nahin sakti.

MU: hum bhi mam.kitna miss kiya humne aapsab ko lekin ab hum kuch din ke off lekar aaye hain so ab milkar masti karenge aur is Armaan ko milne dijiye fir batati hoon usey aur….

RA: Muskaan  chup ho ja aur kisi ko bhi toh baat krne de.

MU: oye teri itni himmat kit u mujhe chup karaye.teri toh…

Ridz and Anjy lukd at each other saying that somethings never change.

ATUL: Guys stop.Dr. shashank bhi yahin hain.

They stopped their stupid fight embarrassed  little.

RI: Anyways inse milo-yeh hamare interns hain.

She introduced everyone and when she introduced Sid,Rahul hugged him and Sid felt good by the way AR's friends understood him and his position.

NI: Anyways milna milana toh gaya lekin Armaan is such a despo.abhi yahan shadi kyun kar raha hai.

RI: Niki please use kuch mat kehna aaj.woh bahut toot gaya tha agar aaj main chali jati toh who toh…

She paused and then said: agar Armaan yahi chahta hai toh yahi sahi.

ABHI: arey waah Riddhima aap toh bahut obedient wife nikli.Is niki ko dekhiye ek maat nahin sunti meri.

Niki glared at him and was abou to say something when she saw a pandit coming followed by Armaan with two more helpers from the temple carrying varmala,sindoor thaal with mangalsutra and the hawankund.

ANJY: OMG.Ridzy was soooooooooooo right.

Armaan stopped in his tracks as he saw his old friends after so much time.

HE put the thaal on the table nearby and went to them as fast as he could.

AR: I don't believe this.

RA: even we don't believe kit u apni aur Riddhima ki shaadi aise kar raha hai .

AR: RAhoooool yeh meri shaadi hai jaise man aise karoon

RA: ya right tabhi toh hamein bulana bhi zaroori nahin samjha.

Armaan looked down.

RAHUL: dost kehta tha hamein.apni odsti ache se nibhayi aur jab hamari baari aayi toh hum sab ko ek kauqa diye baghair hi sab kuch chod kar chala gaya. Jane se pehle ek baar bhi socha ki Riddhima,Niki,Muski,Atul yeh sab kitna pareshan honge terey liye.agar tujhe kuch hojata toh/hamein toh yeh bhi pata nahin hal pata kit u zinda bhi ya nahin.

Rahul's voice was heavy.

Eventhough he went abroad yet he kept information about all his friends through Atul.

AB: haan Armaan you should have trusted us.hum itne bhi bure doctors nahin they ki tumhara ilaaj nahin kar pate.

NI: rehne do Abhi jab isne apne pyaar ko bhi apni pareshani batane ke qabil nahin samjha toh apni best friend aur baki sabko kyun batayega.

Niki's eyes were full of tears seeing him in good health and finally getting all the happiness that he deserved.but she was angry from him for being sooooooooooo self-less.

Riddhima tried to interrupt seeing Armaan looking down bearing all the torture but Muski stopped her.

MU: main tujhe hero bulati thi lekin tu toh sachmaan gaya.kya socha tha tumne Armaan ki istarah chale jane se sab kuch theek hojayega.Dekhana tumne kya hua.Riddhima aur tumhain kya kuch nahin sehna pada.kya hamari dosti par bharosa nahin tha tmhein.

When Armaan saw that now no one was about to speak he looked at Atul who was very much emotional right now.

He did nothing just moved forward and hugged him.The two men shed tears and finally Armaan spoke.

AR: I'm sorry for everything guys.I should have never gone away like this but you see I've learned my lesson soooooooooooooo well.Riddhima mujhse itne door hogayi ki use wapas apni zindagi mein shamil karna namumkin sa lagne laga tha.lekin main kya karta.apni khushi ke liye Riddhima ki zindagi toh nahin barbaad kar sakta tha.

Tum sab haar nahin mante aur mujhe theek karne ki koshish karte rehtey lekin agar meri kismet mein waise marna hota toh main Riddhima aur tum sab ko jeeteji kaise itna bada sadma de sakta tha.isse toh acha hi than a ki main tum sab ki zindagi se bahut door chala jaun taki meri maut ki aahat tak na ho tumhein.

RI: Armaan plz.

She looked at him horrified listening how easily he talked about his own death.

RI: Dobara aisi baatein mat karna.

NI: haan duffer.hum jante hain tune jo kiya Riddhima ki khushi ke liye  liya.hum toh bas yeh bata rahe they ki teri khamoshi ne hum sabko kitna dard diya.woh dard is dard kea age toh kuch bhi jot um donon se saha hai.lekin bas ab aur nahin happy days are back again.

She smiled and hugged Armaan while Armaan lifted her off her feet and twirled her around before putting her back on the ground.

AR: Niki shaadi ke baad kafi samajhar ho gayi ho.lekin yeh modi hi mila tha shaadi karne ko

ABHI: kyaa karoon mera dil chori kar liya isne .bahut chaha wapas le loon lekin isne diya hi nahin.

They smiled while Abhi moved forward and hugged him.Next came the group-hug making Armaan short of breath.

MU: oye beete batein bhool aur yeh bata ki shaadi aise kyun ho rahi hai.

Muskaan's question was answered by Riddhima.

RI: Nere liye.Armaan ne aaj tak job hi kiya hai mere liye hi kiya hai.woh janta hai ki is baar shayad main grand wedding mein uncomfortable feel karoon shayad isliye woh yeh sab aise kar raha hai.

AT: Armaan mere bhai kya tum Ridzy ka dimag padh lete ho.

All giggled.

ANJY: Shut up Atul.

AR: champ kuch aisa hi samajh lo.

Pnadit and his assistants were silently watching all this.Just then one of the assistants informed Pandit about something.

PANDIT: beta is waqt bahut hi shubh muhurat hai.is shubh muhurat mein vivah karne wale log agle har janam ke liye ek doosre ke hojate hain aur usnk vaivahik jeevan bahut hi sukhad aur mangalmay hota hai.yadi aap aaj shaadi karna chatey hain toh yeh muhurat bahut hi acha hai.[married life]

Armaan and Riddhima looked at each other and then looked at Shashank and Padma.

Getting a nod from them,the preparations of the wedding began.The reception area was turned into a small mandap with hawankund lighted with fire .All the nurses and other workers of Sanjeevani were also present their.And then the pandit started to chant the mantras.the marriage was completed in about half an hour and lastly when Armaan filled Riddhima's mang-her eyes welled up with tears as sindoor felt on her nose indicating the depth of Armaan's love.

She was now legally Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Malik.The name for which she has been craving for the last 3 years.

They took the blessings of their parents .Everyone wished the newly wed copuple a joyful prosperous rocking married life.Then Sid congratulated the newly wed couple while Armaan hugged him saying I'm sorry.

SID: I'm sorry Armaan for coming in between you both.You guys are the perfect definition of love-made for each other.

AR: Sid kismet ne Riddhima ko mujhse ksheen[snatch] kar tumhari jholi mein dala tha lekin who tum they jisne khud meri Riddhima ko mujhe lauta diya.mera pyaar mujhe den eke liye main tumhara shukriya ada karke tumhare ehsaan ko chota nahin karna chahta.yaad rakhna zindagi mein agar kabhi meri zaroorat hogi toh bas ek awaz dena main tumhare samne hounga.tumhara gham main kam nahin kar sakta lekin itna zaroor kahoonga ki jab tum us ladki se milo jo tumhare liye bani hai,usey ignore mat karna aur bhagwan ka isahara fauran samajh jana.I hope tumhain tumhara sacha pyar mile.

SID: OH Armaan thanx a lot yaar.ab zyada senti mat kar.

Riddhima had tears in her eyes seeing Sid like this.

SID: Riddhima don't cry aaj toh tumhain main tumhari khushi de paya hoon,aaj maine who wada poora kiya hai jo maine khud se tab kiya tha jab tum Pnachgini gayi then.Yaqeen jano tum khush ho toh main bhi khush hoon.Tumse door jane ka gham toh rahega lekin us gham se zyada is baat ki khushi aur tasalli[satisfaction] rahegi kit um Armaan ke saath apni sapnon ki duniyan mein bahut bahut khush rahogi.

Riddhima smiled and said: tum bahut ache ho Sid.I'm sorry.

SID: I'm sorry too for everything.

He apologized both of them.

Then he hugged both of them ishing them a happy prosperous married life.He was not strong enough to wait anymore,so he took the leave of everyone and went away.

 

After Sid's exit , Armaan made himself busy admiring the vermillion [sindoor] on Riddhima's forhead and her mangalsutra as the incident flashed back in his mind when he made himself a promise that one day Riddhima will wear the sindoor of his name.

NI: Armaan apni biwi ko araam se dekh lene filha ghar chalein kuch important baat karni hai.

SHANKY: Armaan beta Riddhima ki bidai toh ghar se hone do.ab toh Riddhima aapki hogayi hai.Koi bhi use ab apse alag nahin karsakta.

AR: ji Sir ab jaisa aap chahenge waisa hoga.

Everyone smiled while the gang winked at each other as they had some more plans for Armaan and Riddhima.

All proceeded towards the parking lot when they heard two familiar voices.

One was male while the other was female.

Ridz and Armaan together: aap aur tum!!!

GIRL: OH no main late hogayi sorry Riddhima di .woh mujhe na Sid ne batayatha aap ke aur Armaan ke bare mein isliye main aagayi.kash main thodi der pehle aayi hoti toh aapki shaadi dekh pati.

Riddhima moved forward and hugged her.

RI: I'm glad ki tum aaj yahan aayi hamare liye.tumne mujhe us waqt bahut sahara diya jab mujhe apni di ki aur ek dost ki sabse zyada zaroorat thi.

SH: Di plz aise mat kahiye main aapki choti behen mera matlab choti behen jaisi hoon aur aapka khayal rakhna mera farz tha.

AR: sahi kaha Shilpa.kaisi ho tum?

SH: theek hoon .

AR: I'm sorry.

SH: Armaan please main yahan tumhari aur di ki khushi mein shareeq hone aayi hoon beeti batein yaad karne nahin.so Mr. Aashiq ab toh tum khush hona aur I hope ab tum who angry young man banker khadoos senior doctor wala aatitude nahin dikhaoge.

Everyone laughed at Shilpa's comment while Armaan just shaked his head.

He could never understand this girl who is ready to laugh in one minute and can start crying in the other.He didn't know how much she held everything inside her and tried to smile infront of everyone.He has seen the love for him in her eyes but today there was new spark in her eyes.It seemed as if she was really very very happy about something.Little did he know that Shilpa was happy for her sister and her love's happiness.She had seen her sister suffering so much and today the brightness of a new life on riddhima's face gave her immense satisfaction.

Sid,Jp,Yuvi and Jigy welcomed Shilpa.

The man who was with Shilpa still stood at some distance watching all the scenes going infront of him.

Now it was his time to interrupt.

NANA: aye apple lya bulbul se shadi ki who bhi mere bina.mujhse tips liye usko patane ke aur mere bina ussse shaadi ki.dekh li teri dosti.

His voice was loud enough making everyone giggle at Armaan's scared face seeing Nana's temper high.

AR: nana sorry lekin agar main ek minute bhi aur wait karta na toh kya pata uparwala fir se koi naya plan banaleta hamare pyar ko test kare ka.Riddhima ko maine kote khote paya hai.iske siwa kuch yad hi nahin raha.apne apple ko maaf kardijiye please.

NA: Emotional blackmailin haan chal theek hai aaj tera din hai maaf kiya.aye bulbul[He turned towards riddhima] ab mere Apple se kabhi door mat jana.nbahut pyaar karta hai tumse samjhi .

Riddhima smiled and nodded.

NA: ab kya ho raha hai yahan?

MUSKI: nana aap zara humse bhi toh millijiye.

The old gang met Nana.

[Nana had gone away after coming back from Delhi due to some personal reasons and now he came back to the hospital only to find AR together wearing varmala.He understood the situation at an instant.Just then he saw Shilpa as well coming from the other side.]

Next Riddhima introduced Shilpa to the old buddies and now everyone sat in their respective cars heading towards Shashank's home leaving the love-birds alone in the car.

In the car of AR,

AR: Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Malik yeh naam kabse main tumhare naam mein jodna chahta tha aur finally aaj yeh sapna haqeeqat bana hai.

RI: haan maine toh sapne bhi nahin soch tha ki hum fir ek hopayenge lekin kehte hainna sacha pyaar apni raah khud hi chun leta hai.main bahut khush hoon Armaan.Meri zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat khwab aaj tumne sach kiya hai.

She rested her head on his shoulders as he pulled her into him placing one hand around her shoulder.

He kissed her forehead and she jut closed her eyes feeling his smell and presence.The touch which she has been missing since the past year was now filling in the craving desires of her body.

The situation was same for Armaan.Only he knew how much difficult it was for him to drive the car while riddhima's breath kissed his neck and chest now and then.They then didn't speak anything ,just enjoyed the fact of being united for eternity today.

ReachingGupta house the new couple was welcomed with aarti by Padma.The gang then dropped the bomb which shocked Armaan again.

They had asked Armaan to marry Riddhima with all the rituals.Armaan tried to protest that all this was not needed but he was stopped by niki.

NIKI: Armaan hum samajhte hain tum aisa kyun kar rahe isliye humne socha hai ki is shaadi mein sirf humara firnd circle aur family hogi.mana ki tumhare mom dad apne aapko bahut busy rakhte hain lekin who tumhare maa-baap hain.unka haq hai tumpar.unka bhi toh socho.unhein kitna bura lagega yeh jankar ki unke betene apni hi shaadi mein unhein nahin bulaya.Armaan tumhare khud ki kitni wishes hongi apni shaadi ki,kabhi toh apne bare mein socha karo.

MUSKI: aur nahin toh kya .hum teri baat bilkul nahin manenge.kal dophar mein ridzy ki haldi aur sham ko mehndi hogi aur fir parson shaadi samjha.hamein pata hai ab tu ridzy se ek minute bhi door nahin rehna chahega isliye humne do functions ek hi din mein kar diye hain.I'm sure Ridzy ko koi problem nahin hogi.hai na Ridzy.

RI:Armaan niki aur muski theek keh rahey hain bily uncle aur Ananya aunty ko tumhain batana chahiye tha.rahi baat merit oh ab jab main duniye ke samne Nrs. Armaan Malik hoon toh mujhe shaadi karne mein bhi koi harj nahin hai.Armaan main chahti hoon I hamari shaadi aise ho ki hum kabhi un palon ko bhool na payein.

Armaan looked into her eyes and knew that she meant it completely.

He smiled and nodded.

AR: Theek hai.main abhi mom-dad ko phone karta hoon.I promise basket the next three days of our life will be the most memorable days.

After the phone call, everyone was busy in making the plan for tomorrow.Armaan was hyperexcited about making all the things perfect for his basket.

Riddhima smiled seeing her own childish, naughty and happy Armaan back.

Soon the dinner was brought and it was eaten in a joyful mood which also included the teasing session for the newly wed couple.

After the dinner,

All the boys took their leave as the girls had decided to stay at Gupta house.Poor Armaan didn't get a single minute with his wife-his basket.He cursed everyone for this stupid idea of re-marriage but somewhere he was happy also to ask him to mrry her with full confidence infront of the whole world.

He was banned from seeing Riddhima before the marriage.

Next day haldi and mehndi rasma were done[Sorry guys this ff is meant to one shot so no description.Don't worry you'll read one of the best wedding ceremonies in my another ff nazron se dil tak].Armaan  got a chance to see his wife after her mehndi but not during haldi since he himself was the victim, of that haldi rasm,ready to be attacked by Rahul,Abhi ,JP,Jiggyand Atul.His mom and dad were extremely happy to see their son finally getting all the happiness that he has deserved but they failed to give him.

Armaan helped Riddhima take out her mehndi and kissed her plams seeing the darkest maroon colour on her hand.

RI: Armaan plz jao yahan s.sharam nahin aati aaj bhi balcony se aaye ho

AR: agar samne se aata toh tumhari jangli friends mujhe meri hi biwi se milne nahin deti.bahut nainsafi hai yaar.Riddhima main toh kehta hoon tum aaj hi mere saath chalo.ab mujhse aur sabr nahin hota.

Riddhima giggled and pulled his cheeks: Armaan tum na .Armaan ab yeh Riddhima jo tumhare samne khadi hai who Riddhima Armaan Malik hai tumhari patni.tumhain poora haq hai mujhe abhi isi waqt mujhe yahan se lejane ka lekin zara socho tumhare aur hamare parents aur friends ne kitna kuch prepare kiya hai hamarae liye kya tujm unke liye bas ek raat aur nahin intezaar kar sakte.bolo?

AR: Basket how do you this?

RI: kya?

AR: yahi ki bas apni badi badi aankhon ko ghuma kar,apne meethe words se mujhe har bar convince kar leti ho.theek hai ek raat ur bas fir hum hamesha saath rahenge.

RI: haan hamesha.

They rested their forheads against each other.They were standing near the window.The cool breeze that flew made Riddhima shive a little making the tosphere more romantic.Armaan didn't know when his hands went around her waist pulling her more closer to himself.He adjusted his nose with hers and pecked her nose tip.she didn't have the courage to open her eyes and her knees were going weak.

He paused for a second.

AR: Can I basket.

Inresponse she said nothing but passed a smile with her cheeks going all red.Her heart was thudding as he leaned into her.their lips were just millimeters away.He was just about to capture the rosy petals when they almost jerked hearing the loud thud on the door.

It was anjy calling Riddhima.

Armaan was badly irritated.

AR: yeh meri saali nahin meri dushman hai.pyar ki dushman.

RI: Armaan khabardar jo I ko kuch kaha toh ab jao yaha se.

She was not looking into her eyes blushing because of what would have happened if Anjali would not have interrupted.

AR: meri patni ko meri qadr hi nahin hai ja aha hoon main.

ANJY: Ridzy drwaza khol na kya kar rahi hai.

RI: di aarahi hoon bas do minute mehndi hata rahi thi.

RI: Armana I love you plz gussa mat ho.

Armaan smiled.

AR: ok bye wifey take care and sleep well tonight because tomorrow you won't be spared a single minute to take rest and specially in the night in our bedroom.

He winked naughtily,kissed her cheek and went away.

Riddhima was beetroot red by what Armaan had just said.She composed herself before opening the door.

AN: Ridzy kabse knock kar rahi hoon.

RI: sorry di.

She showed her hands.

AN: wow kitna acha colour aaya hai.khair who toh aana hi tha lover boy itna pyaar jo karta hai tumse.

RI: Dii.

She blushed.Soon Niki,Shilpa and Muski joined Riddhima and the girly talks began.

Next evening it seemed as if the sky itself has bend to see the union of two souls.

The marriage took place in a grand manner.Everyone was just mesmerized by the arrangements made by Armaan and the gang.Nothing could be more perfect than this.the red coloured lehnga which Armaan himself had brought for Riddhima was made even more beautiful when Riddhima wore it.

Starting from entrance to seating arrangements and finally mandap and stage verything was simply outstanding.

MANDAP


Shashank could not believe that such a beautiful arrangement was made for his daughter's wedding and that too in such a short span of time.

Everyone praised the arrangements and the food items provided.

The people present there went in a dazed state when Riddhima was brought to the mandap with her friends,Anjy and mom.Armaan looked at her and then forgot everything.He was simply lost in this gorgeous Riddhima.

She sat besides him completely aware of the fact that he was still staring at her.She pinched him a little bringing him back to the world.

AR: ouch.

ATUL{standing near Armaan]: kya hua mere bhai

AR: kuch nahin.

He smiled at Riddhima and slowly mumbled: I never knew you can look sooo beautiful.

Riddhima blushed.

Panditji started the rituals.

Soon the kanyadan was done and AR were asked to take the saat pheres.

While the pandit recited his own chymes,Armaan and Riddhima tooh their own 7 seven vows .These seven vows included  their promise of living with eachother forever.They vowed to share all their happiness and sorrows.They promised to take care of each other and were now each others responsibility.They assured each other about their love and trust .They decided to sacrifice everything for the sake of their happy married life.They promised never to let a misunderstanding shake their relation and with increasing time they would love each other more and more.They promised to remain honest and faithful to each other and live a happy married life forever.

After the pheres,Armaan filled in Riddhima's mang once again with the vermilion and tied the nagalsutra round her neck.He kissed her forehead as they were declared husband and wife in front of the whole world.

They took blessings fom each other.

Soon the juta churayi rasm was done and  Armaan fulfilled the demand of all the girls without debating even once .All the boys cursed him for doing this.

At the time of bidaai ,Riddhima cried a lot.she felt as if today she was going to her real home and finally away from her parents.Billy and Ananya assured Shashank and Padma that Riddhima would live in her sasural as their daughter.They had already apologized Armaan for neglecting him all his life  and now they had decided to live with their son and daughter-in-law forever and happily.

Armaan hugged his sasurji and saasu ma giving them support.He promised them to treat their daughter like his princess and would do anything and everything to keep her happy.

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After all the naughty games from the friends of Armaan and Riddhima,finally Riddhima was sitting in her Armaan's bedroom which was decorated most beautifully.

Armaan's parents have gifted them a new house on their wedding and they told them that they would be coming to live with them after a week as they wanted to give the love-birds sometime alone.Till that time they would live in Armaan's old house.

The whole house was full of the paintings of Riddhima.Some portraits also included both of their lovely moments.

One wall of Armaan's bedroom was full of their pleasant memories.the wall adjacent to the bed's head was also covered with a large photo of both Armaan and Riddhima in today's wedding dress.

Armaan's bedroom[Just imagine the walls laiden with AR's pics.cudn't find a perfect picture with decoratyion of photos,roses and candles]


Riddhima was surprised and couldnot understand how Armaan managed to get this one.

The circular king-sized bed was surrounded by white net.The rose and white orchids decorated the bed while the room was decorated with many varieties of roses along with light purple and white orchids.Colourful candles all across the room were the only source of light.

Riddhima was sitting nervously there fidgeting with the jewellary in her hands.Armaan got inside the room cursing all the girls for emptying his pocket on his own wedding night.But the frown on his face disappeared as he noticed the angel sitting on his bed in his room.

His dream love, his life, his basket was infront of him as his own bride.Could any moment be more beautiful than this or Armaan?

RIDDHIMA'S DRESS:-


He slowly went and sat infront of his Riddhima.

AR: yaqeen nahin hota ki yeh sab haqeeqat hai.meri basket aaj meri dulahn ban kar mere samne baithi hai.is dil ko toh jaise vishwas hi nahin ho raha ki uski basket aajse  hamesha hamesha ke liye uski hogayi.Riddhima aaj main bahut khush hoon.

He slowly lifted her chin up and she finally looked up into his large expressive eyes.Those eyes contained the everlasting,unbound eternal love for her with an immense passion.

She closed her eyes as he lifted both of her hands and kissed her palm.

AR: tumhare haathon ki mehndi ,maang mein mere nam ka sindoor,gale mein mangalsutra yeh sab kuch kitna acha lag raha hai tumpar.tumhain khud bhi nahin pata kit um aaj kitni khobsurt lag rahi ho.

Riddhima smiled.

He moved forward and kissed her forhead letting his lips rest their for a while.

AR: I love you sooooooooooo much basket.

Riddhima smiled and finally said: I love you too Armaan.main bhi aaj bahut bahut khush hoon.finally hamari muhabbat ko ek doosre ka saath mil gaya aur ab tum dekhna hamri ane wali zindagi mein sirf aur sirf khushiyan hi hongi.

AR: hmm.

He paseed his million dollar smile, showing the cute dimples on his cheeks.

AR: maine apni dulhan ko abhi tayyar nahin kiya hai.

RI: matlan.

AR: ek minute.

He took out three four things from the bed-side table.

First he made her wear the anklets.Unknown to him she was feeling very very nervous tonight.As he lifted her lehnga a little bit up she closed her eyes.The contat which his fingers made when they brushed her skin made her flinch.

He then made her wear the bangles made of platinum and gold but studded with Diamonds.He kissed her wrists as he made her wear them.

RI: Armaan yeh sab..

AR: tumhare wedding gifts.woh kya kehte hain munh dikhayi[He didn't let her complete her sentence].

Riddhima smiled.

AR: pasand aay

RI: bahut khoobsurat hai lekin yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi.

AR: basket apni eklauti dulha ke liye yeh sab karna toh mera haq hai.acha look at this.

He showed her a beautiful diamond set.

RI: Armaan this is so beautiful.

AR: not more than you.

RI: lekin

He kept a finger on her lips.

AR: mujhe yeh sab karne se bahut acha lag raha hai.please don't think much.Just love to have the gifts your husband is giving you on your wedding night.

She sighed and nodded.

But his finger still didn't move away from her lip.

Instead he used his thumb now to aress her lips.Keeping aside the set on the table ,Armaan focused on  what he should now.

Her luscious lips seemed sooo much inviting.The nervousness on Riddhima's face as he leaned into her turned him on making his desires go high.

AR: I love you basket.

Saying that he placed his lips on her and kissed her passionately.She responded with equal passion.His hands went to her back as he kissed her harder while she put her arms round her neck pulling him more closer.

Riddhima's back now rested on the pillow beneath her while Armaan's hands slowly explored her bare waist between her choli and lehnga.They were slowly going in frenzy as he licked her lips and she allowed his tongue to enter inside her mouth.

His hands played havoc on her skin waking up all the desires that were buried inside her since the past on year.

They only broke when they felt the acute demand of oxygen.

Riddhima blushed badly and her face in the pillow next to her while Armaan just closed his eyes and licked his lips which were all covered with Riddhima's lipsticks.

HE slowly placed a hand on Riddhima's shoulder and turned her to face him.She sat up slowly near him and hid her face in his chest.

AR: oye-hoye.

HE didn't say anything .Just took her hands and took off the jewellary fromher hands slowly planting kissed here and there.When finished he removed Riddhima's mang-tika and kissed her forehead once more.Next he took out her ear rings and planted soft kiss on her earlobes.Riddhima's body was trembling by his touch.She kept her eeys closed all the ime.

Next he placed his inside round her neck to take out the heavy necklaces she was wearing.This time Riddhima shuddered completely and felt herself melting in his arms.He pecked her chin.she thought that he was going to kiss him again but she was surprised the next moment to see him moving away.

She opened her eyes and looked at him questioningly.

He was now sitting at the edge of the bed with his legs haning on the floor.

AR: I know ki sab kuch bahut jaldi jaldi mein hua hai.tumhain thoda time chahiye hoga.don't worry basket I can wait forever.tum bahut tha gayi ho jao change karlo issey pehle main apna irada badal loon.You look so tempting right now after that kiss I want to have more of you but anyways I'll wait.

He got up to go to his wardrobe but Riddhima held his hand and signaled him to  sit down.

RI: tumhain pata hai Armaan tumhari isi adat pe mujhe gussa aata hai.hamesha apni khushi se zyada meri khushi ki prwah rehti hai tumhein.meri khushi ki wajah se hamein yeh ek saal alag rehkar guzarna pada.meri khushi ke bare mein soch toh lete ho lekin faisla karne se pehle kabhi toh mujhse pooch liya karo.

AR: Riddhima I didn't mean to hurt you.

RI: janti hoon.I've been dying to become yours aur main har tareeqay se tumhain apna banana chahti hoon,sirf mera.yaad hai ek bar tumne kaha tha ki you have grown old ,mujhe lagta hai ki sahi mein you have grown old.anyways if u want to rest what can I do.

AR: basket I've grown old haan

HE asked with a naughty grim and Riddhima's mischievious smile disappeared.

She became nervous as she saw him gazing at her with such an immense passion.

AR: You have made the biggest mistake sweetheart.Now I'll show you how old I am.

He moved towards her but stopped as she saw soe strange expression on her face.

AR: Riddhima kya hua?

RI: Armaan main much aur bhi kehna chahti hoon.tumme mujhe apni zindagi mein bina kisi question ke wapas accept karliya.kabhi yeh bhi nahin poocha ki akhir aisi kya majboori thi jo mujhe sid se shaadi karni padi.

AR: basket main janta hoon ki meri Riddhima zaroor aisi situation mein hogi jahan uske paas aur koi option nahin hoga warna Riddhima ka pyaar itna kamzor nahin hai yeh main bhi janta hoon.guzre huey ek saal mein jo kuch bhi hua use mujhe koi fark nahin padta Riddhima.tum achanak aisi baatein leke kyun baith gayi.

RI: kyunki main tumhain pele who wajah batana chahti hoon jiski wajah se mujhe na chahte huey bhi Sid se shaadi karni padi.

Then she told him everything since the day she came back to Mumbai.

When she finished Armaan was intears realizing that his basket even thought to kill herelf rater than marry Sid.

AR: I'm sorry Riddhima.agar us din Panchgini mein main tumhain us halat mein chod kar nahin jata toh shayad tumhain unsab se guzarna hi nahin padta.sab meri galti hai.

RI: Don't u dare try to blame my husband.mera Armaan kabhi galat nahin hota.ek baat maine samajh li hai ki waqt se pehle aur kismet se zyada kisi ko kuch nahin milta.Hamari kismet mein ek doosra ka saath toh th lekin thodi der se tha.jo hua aaj ke baad hum fir kabhi use yaad karke sad nahin hongey aur aaj ke bas apna har pal bas aane wali khushiyon ko samettey huey ek doosre ke saath hansi khuhi guzarenge.hai na

AR: hmm.

She kissed his tearful eyes and placed soft kisses on both the sides of his cheeks.

AR: haan toh basket kahan they hum?han I'm old n.let me show you how much energetic your old man is.

Saying that he captured her rosy petals once more and with a passion that made Riddhima lose all her senses.she didn't know when his the pins of her duptta where taken off and it was slided down to one corner of the bed.Breaking the kiss Armaan buried his head in the crook of her neck while his hands explored her back.Life would have been more easy without hooks.Opening her choli he slowly slided down the shoulders planting lots of kisses on her shoulder blade and neck.

They both laid down with Armaan on top of Riddhima.

Armaan slowly pulled the barrier between them slowly down and down in reponse of which Riddhima closed the lights.

The whole night was never enough for this couple to make love.Armaan kissed away all her pain,sufferings and showered her with all his love and passion.She responded to him equally matching his passion and her every kiss on his body assured him that she was his and only his now.HE was the one who had all the right on her.  

Armaan and Riddhima kept loving each other till they were completely exhausted.They lied blissfully in each others arms cuddled inside a single blanket signing off their body,heart and soul.

The soulmates were not only emotionally commected to each other ,now they were spiritually connected too.The night was an oblivion for them.

AND THEN THEY LIVED HAPPILY

EVER AFTER…….

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I've tried to tie up many lose threads which the creatives failed to do while ending up DMG.

I didn't get the time for proof reading.Typing 20 pages of MS-WORD was much tiring.I'm sorry for the spelling/grammatical mistakes if any.I hope you guys would like this part .

Thank You so much people for all your lovely appreciation.Thanks to all those as well who have pressed the like button.

This time I hope to to see more people sharing their views with me regarding this attempt of mine.This ff is dedicated to Shilpa Anand on her birthday.One more thing which I ant to tell you guys is that I write at an instant.The moment I sit on the computer I start writing whatvere comes in my mind and the result is infront of ur eyes.I never knew the second part would become sooooooooooo long.But anyways I really enjyed writing it and I hope that you guys will enjoy reading it and sharing your views.

Love u all

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