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YOU ALL KNOW KASH HAVE BEEN MYARMAAN RIDDHIMA ALWAYS.
After the final proposal by Ridz ,I'm continuing this one shot which is divided in tWo parts for all those people who liked Shona and loved KASH n DMG[even if for a short timespan].


 THE FINAL DECISIONS

PART 1

They could not believe that after going through so many things finally they are together.Just a few minutes before Riddhima proposed Armaan on her knees.Everything that had went wrong since the past one year was made absolutely right just in a fraction of seconds.
Both felt as if they were dreaming.A few hours before,Riddhima was thinking of going away from her life and Armaan was determined not to stop her.But fate always brings unexpected surprises. The moment Armaan realized what his basket actually wanted to say to him,the tme slipped and he felt that he had lost her forever.The instant Riddhima came back to Sanjeevani to bid a final good-bye,she recognized that she belonged to this place and Armaan.As she herself said"Armaan mere wajood ka who hissa hai jo mujhse kabhi alag nahin ho sakta".She knew that it would be completely useless to go away from Armaan as she would leave her heart and soul here.Taking the lifeless body abroad would have been of no use.Eventhough late,but finally she accepted the truth that she belonged to Armaan only.Even God wanted them together.That is why after so many efforts her marriage ended.Destiny had separated them and it was destiny only that brought them together once again.she knew that she can't live without Armaan as her heartbeat called his name,her breath's had his fragrance of love and her life depended upon him.
Right now all were in the cafeteria including Sid and Yuvi.Seeing Riddhima's smile reaching her eyes and the contended look on her face Sid knew that it was the best thing he could do for his love.He understood the meaning of sacrifice in love and the satisfaction it gives when you see your love happy and beaming with joy.the pain of losing it is nothing infront of the calmness that is received after giving your love the thing which could keep him/her happy forever.
Shashank,Shubhankar,Kirti,Padma all were present.
SH: So Armaan what next?
AR: kya main apne dil ki baat kahoon?
He stealed a glance at Riddhima.
PADMA: beta tum bas kaho apne bte ki har khwahish ko poori karoongi main aaj.Riddhima ko tumse zyada pyaar koi nahin kar sakta yeh baat hum sabhi jantey hain.tumne Riddhima aur hum sab ke liye aaj tak bahut kuch kiya hai aaj tumhari har baat ek order hogi.
AR: aap aise mat kahiye main toh bas apni ek khwahiSh zahir karna chahta tha.
Riddhima looked at him and held his hands without any hesitation infront of all.
RI: Armaan tum ab bhi papa se utna hi darte ho?Unbelievable.saaf saaf kaho na.
He smiled and fumbled while speaking.
AR: mujhe Riddhima se abhi isi waqt shadi karni hai.please mujhe apni baat poori karne dijiye.
He didn't look up while speaking.

AR: main bilkul tanha tha..mom dad ne kabhi meri aur mere feelings ki parvah nahin ki.woh toh apni hi duniya mein mast they.unhein dekh kar mujhe laga ki is duniya mein pyaar sirf ek mazak hai.log dil behlane ke liye pyaar karte hain aur jab unse bore ho jate hain toh naye rishtey bana lete hain.mujhe nahin pata tha ki main kitna ghalat tha.apni us thinking ko lekar main bhi bilkul carefree rehne laga.colege ka sabse hot ladka jiske liye sab kuch uski muthi mein tha.main jasie zindagi chahta tha jeer raha tha.Fir ek din Riddhima meri zindagi mein aayi.usse milkar pata chala jo rishtey dil se jude hotey hain who khokhle nahin hote.Is duniya mein aaj bhi sacha pyaar hta hai."Rishtey khoon se nahin pyaar se bante hain".Dr.Shashank ko dekha toh jana ki father ka sahi matlab kya hota.Padma aunty e mila toh jana ki maa ka pyaar kya hota.jis tarah se aap donon Riddhima aur anjali ka khayal rakhte they mujhe ehsaas hua ki har rishta tootne ke liye nahin banta.pyaar ki mazboot door[thread] unhein bandhey rakhti hai.Riddhima ko jana toh pata chala ki pyaar kya hota hai.Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai Anjali ke rude behavior ke bawajood Riddhima use kitne pyaar se rehti thi.is pyaar ka jadoo kab mujh par hua pata hi nahin chala.Kab,kaise Riddhima meri dhadkan mein sama gayi mujhey pata hi nahin chala.Lekin jb jana ki pyaar kya hota hai,zindagi ka ek maqsad mil gaya mujhe-apne pyaar se bepanah muhabbat karna aur usey uski khushi se apna banana.Dheere dheere kab Riddhima aur main qareeb aagaye pata hi nahin chala.Jo Armaan kabhi kisi se nahin darta tha usey kisi ko khone ka dar rehne laga.Har pal bas yahidar rehta ki kaheen main riddhima ko kho na doon.Jab hamara rishta finally aap sabne accept kar liya tha mujhe laga ki Riddhima ko meri hone se ab koi nahin rok sakta.Woh din toh main kabhi nahin bhool sakta jab basket ne meri ring pehni thi.

ANJALI: What lekin kab?

AR: us locked room ke andar.woh jo log hamare hospital mein aaye they who terrorist nahin they.unhein bhi pyaar ne is mod par lakar khada kar diya tha.woh donon ladke minister ki beti ke husband aur unka ek dost tha.unhone hi mujhe mauqa diya ki main apni basket se sagayi wale din hi sagayi karoon.Minister ko apni beti ki yeh shaadi manzoor nahin thi.Lekin waqt ko kuch aur manzoor nahin tha.Riddhima mera junoon hai lekin uski khushi se badhkar mere liye kabhi kuch nahin tha aur main usey chod ke chala gaya jissey ki woh apni zindagi mein aagey badh sake aur mere liye khud ko barbaad na kare.lekin kismet ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha.Riddhima fir se mere paas aayi aur uski ek jhalak ne mujhe theek hone ka hausla diya.Maine hamesha filmon mein dekha hai ki pyaar mein bahut taqat hoti hai lekin asal zindagi mein khud kabhi mehssos karoonga yeh pata nahin tha.Ek baar fir kismet hamein ek aise mod par le aayi thi ki hum chah kar bhi ek doosre ke honahin sakte they.Ek pal ko maine bhi apne dil ko samjha liya tha ki mujhe Riddhima ko Sid ke saath aage badhne ka hausla dena chahiye aur maine har koshish ki Riddhima ke rishte ko bachane ki.Apni wajah se main Riddhima ki zindagi kharab nahin kar sakta tha,koi haq nahin tha mujhe.lekin guzarte waqt ke saath Riddhima ne yeh toh decide kar liya ki usey sid ke saath hi rehna hai lekin uski saanson mein aaj bhi main hi tha,who meri aahat ko mehsoos kar sakti hai,meri zara si takleef se usey aaj bhi dard hota hai.Maine jhoothi muskurahat se sabko yaqeen dila diya tha ki main khush hoon,lekin mera dil har baar Riddhima ki aankhon mein Sid ke liye pyaar dhoondhta raha.Aur fir jab Riddhima ne Sid se dobara shaadi karne ka faisla kiya,mere sabr ki had hatam hogayi.Mujhe laga ki ab waqyi mein mujhe dekhna hoga ki Riddhima sach much Sid ke saath khush reh payegi aur kya is shaadi ke baad uski nazron mein mujhey apna nahin Sid ka aks dikhayi dega.
Ishq ne itne imtehan liye lekin maine apne ishq ko apna bhagwan mana .Riddhima ko maine pyaar hi nahin kiya,pooja ki hai maine uski.bhagwan kabhi ghalat nahin hotey-mera ishq bhi ghalat nahin tha.mera ishq,pyaarmuhabbat meri Riddhima aaj bhi wahi khadi thi jahan se maine usey aage badhne ke liye Sid ka haath thamaya tha.Main apne saath nainsaafi hotey dekh sakta hoon lekin Riddhima ke saath nahin.Mujhe yaqeen hogaya ki Riddhima ke is faisle se teen zindagiyan hamesha pareshan rahengi.woh kabhi bhi Sid se sachi muhabbat nahin kar sakegi.Ek jhoothi zindagi Sid ko milti .Sid ne jo hamare liye aajtak kiya hai who koi nahin karsakta.Uparwale ne usey hamara farishta bana ke bheja tha.Hamarey toote huey rishtey aur dil ko usne joda hai.Aisa karte huey who khud kitna hurt hai yeh mujhse behtar kaun samjhega.I'm sorry Sid.Lekin main tumhain thanks nahin kahoonga kyunki who sufficient nahin hai itna kahoonga ki har pal bas yahi dua kroonga ki tumhain tumhari zindagi ki sachi muhabbat mil jaye,ek aisi ladki ladki tumhein mile jo tumhein deewangi ki had tak chahe.

Sid smiled and blinked his eyes to assure him that he is alright.

Armaan continued:-Waqt aur haalat kuch aise bane ki mere kuch kiye bina hi Riddhima ki raah meri atarf mud gayi.Main toh bas Riddhima ko ina samjha raha tha ki usey apne faisle par ek baar aur sochna chahiye lekin kismet kab kaun sa khel khele kisi ko nahin pata.
Aur fir Sid ne hamari baatein locker room mein sun leen.aur ab hum saath hain.

He finally looked at Riddhima whose nose was red and tears were still sliding down her cheeks hearing his heart out tonight.

Armaan locked his eyes in Riddhima's and let his heart out tonight infront of her.
AR: Basket I'm sorry.Sorry for every tear that has formed in your eyes because of me directly or indirectly.[He wiped off her tears].[they were now looking into each others eyesholding hands together under the table.]I'm sorry for not stopping you from going .Once again I put my ego in between and was about to ruin the chance which God has given us.not many people are as lucky to have a second chance as we got.I'm sorry for everything that hurted you since we met.I'm sorry for taking the decision of leaving you alone without talking to you even once.I'm sorry for making you wait sooo long for this day.I'm sorry for going through all the problems because of me.I'm sorry for putting my stupid ego between us at every silly fight of ours.I'm sorry for making you the reason of breaking someone's heart.I'm sorry for giving someone else a right to touch you.I'm sorry for every small and big mistake of mine.I'm sorry for all the lies that I've told you or the truths that I've hidden from you.I'm sorry for everything.But I laos want to say that I'm hopelessly and irrevocanly in love with you.You are the one who taught me what actually a life is.You are the one who made me realize the depth of relationships and love.You are the one who filled the whole emptiness of my life.You are the one who gave me reason to fear of losing you.You are the one whose smile gives me the real peace of my life.You have the eyes in which I can drown forever. You are the one who has shown me the impotance of principles in life.You are the one who has shown me my real self.I can see my reflection in your eyes.You are the only one who can fight with me over silliest of things and then end it up by just a single smile.You are the one whose feelings reach my heart without uttering a single world. You are the one to whom my soul belongs.You are the whose love I want to feel.You are the one whom I wish to hold in my arms forever and never let you move away a bit.You are the one with whom I want to spend every single moment of my life.You are the one with whom I want to grow old and take the last breath of my life.You are the one whom I wish to love more and more by every passing second.You are the one who can tame this wild Armaan.
He finally bends on his knees and said:
Jabse tumse muhabbat huyi hai khud ko bhool chukka hoon.bas tumharey hi saye mein mera aashiyana hai.tumhain khone ke dar se ek minute aur nahin jeena chahta main.shaadi karogi mujhse abhi isi waqt?mujhe apna lo basket.main tumhare intezar mein marna nahin chahta,tumhare saath apni zindagi kar apna jeena chahta hoon jo maine jaagti aankhon se dekha hai.bolo kyat um apne is paagal aashiq ke saath shaadi karogi ?

Riddhima threw herself in his arms[kneeling down like him] without taking care of anyone else's presence in the cafeteria.haan Armaan haan Riddhima ka wajood Armaan bin adhoora hai.aaj ke baad main apne Armaan ki har khwahish ko poor karoongi.main tumse abhi isi waqt shaadi karoongi.
This was the decision made by BASKET-Armaan's basket/Riddhima.She didn't need to seek anyone's permission for this.This new life is meant only to be lived with Armaan,so no more questions were left to ask.she felt like free bird and all the burden on her heart was vanished.
In Armaan's arms she always felt relieved and secure.She knew he will take of all her worries.
All the eyes had tears in them.The people present there just could not digest the extremes of Armaan's eternal love to Riddhima.Sid felt proud of Armaan and thanked God for making him the cupid of Armaan Riddhima's loveepic.
Armaan kissed Riddhima's forhead and buried himself in her hairs planting a kiss in her hairs.
They had lost all their senses.They only knew that they are together after almost a decade.Armaan pulled Riddhima more closer to himself and he was busy adjusting his face inroder to seal his feelings with a loving kiss.But the coughs of Yuvraj and JP brought them out of this trance.
JP: Armaan bhaiya control.
He pointed to Shashank.
AR left each other unwillingly with their faces all red out of flushness.
Shashank said nothing but just hugged Armaan and Riddhima both.Soon Anjy and Padma joined them.
AN: God Armaan aisi lines bologe toh Ridzy kya koi bhi ladki tumse shaadi karne ko tayyar ho jayegi.
Everyone cheered up and the atmosphere lightened.
AN: But tell me abhi kaise shaadi hogi?
AR: Shaadi yahin aur abhi hogi .
He paused and looked at Shashank with a pleading look only to get a small nod from his side.
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PART 2 -page 3
 
It's your turn guys to let me know what you feel about this one shot.
I've been writing since 45 minutes and posted it without proof reading.Sorry for spelling/grammatical mistakes if any.


Edited by asma_227 - 11 July 2011 at 2:39pm

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Posted: 10 December 2010 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
yeyye ye yeh!!!
I m the first one
hey nice one
sachi armaan aise lines bologe
to koi bhi shaadi kar lenge riddhima kya cheez hai
update the next part soon

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Posted: 10 December 2010 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
awsome ......CONTNU.......JALDI SE

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Posted: 10 December 2010 at 2:16pm | IP Logged

that was simply awesome..........

mind blowing dear.........

im in love wid this...

n wat all armaan said...

sach mein koi bhi larki shaddi karne ko ready ho gae...

post the next part soon...

thnx for the pm.........

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just a word
awesome 
loved it 
cont soon 
n thx for pm
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Hey Asma.
This was awesome. . I always trying to get a reason for Ridhima's comeback as they didn't show that.. So you gave the word. ClapThnx for that.. Pls update soon the last part..


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gr8 prt!!!
 
w8ng 4 da nxt prt eagerly...
 
thnx 4 da pm
 
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