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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing yrr
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part-83
mayur
nupur was checking a girl in the childrens ward....while mayank was giving the other children medicines...
girl=nupur di...apko pata kaal shamko kiska concert ha???
n=kiska???
girl=srk ka!!!
n=kya??????? sachme??? tum sach kehrahiho??? jhoot kaha to karwa dawai peeneko milega...
girl=di...ma sach kehrahihu..kalke paper me aya tha...ye dekho...paper..
n=wohhhh!!!!!!!!! tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi??? tumhe pata ha na..ke ma srk ki kitni bari fan huuuu!!!!!!!!!!!
girl=di....kaal apki duty to yaha nahi thi..to ma kaise batatii..aur pata ha aj ke paper me aya ha ke..adhese zyada tickets sell hochuke ha....
n=kya???? nahi esa nahi hosakta....mujhe tickets chahiyee....srk ka concert aur ma na jauuuu!! nahi esa nahi hosaktaa....mayankkkk!!!!!
she goes to mayank who was busy working
m=kya ha nupur??? abhi disturb mat karoo/....
n=mmayank suno na..kaal srk ka concert ha....aur mujhe jana ha...
m=ha to jao na..kisne roka ha.....
n=are par tickets....plzz mayank adhe tickets sell hochuke ha..plzz lake do na..plzzzz!!
m=nupur ma duty choke kaise jau???? abhibi 10 bacche ha...jinko dawai dena ha....
n=-accha to ma tumhari duty karungii...pakka promisee!! plzzz jao na..aur ha do tickets lana... tumbhi chalogee..
m=accha theek ha..par ek shart pe...meri duty me koi laparwahi nahi ani chahiye..warna ma tickets phar dungaa!!!!
n=nahi nahi......plzz lake do..i promise...ke ma tumhari duty acchese karungi...aur aur... ha.. tumhe sabke samne sadu nahi kahungi...sirf private me kahungi..
m=ummmm...theek ha ma jata hu..ye last baccha....
n=mane kaha na ma karungi..tum jaoooo.....plzz...jaldi....
m=ok ok baba...jata huu.....
n=so sweeettttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scene shifts
samrat was sitting on his bed...with lots of books surrounded him...n he was stuying very attentively.....his phone rang..
s=hello..
g=hi...kya karraheho?????
s=abtak to man lagake parhai karraha tha...par ab jab tumne call kia to sara dhyan tumpe agaya ha..
g=sorry mujhe nahi pata tha..tum parhai karo..ma badme call karungi..
s=chashmish...plzzz thori der bat karo na....wasebhi subhahse lekar....abtak sirf parhito raha hu......koi nahi ha gharme...to kya karu???? bore bhi horaha tha...
g=bass kuch din aur....phir agle hafte tumhara xam ha..aur phirse tum humare sath sanjeevanime...
s=ma to abhi patient banke bhi nahi asakta...warna mayank aur mera plan tha...ke bimaar honeka bahana karke....admitt hojauu....
g=samat khabardar jo agar ye kia....marungiiii
s=accha baba sorry...nahi karunga..
g=wase aj mera letter kaha ha??? mayank ke hato kyu nahi bhijwaya????
s=oooppppss.....soorrryyyy!! bhul gaya...kya ha na ka mayank aj jaldi chala gaya.. isiliye ma uth nahi payaa....
g=theek ha koi baat nahiil....par kaal do do letters...milne chahiyee..
s=are bapre.....ye letters ka dhanda shuru karke to mushkil me pargayaa.......
g=ab bhuktooooo!!!!!!
s=bhugat to raha hu.....
g=accha ab ma rakhti hu...di ke sath lunch karna ha......
s=chashmish ek minutee...
g=kya hua???
s=gubye kiss to dedoo..
g=samrat hospitalse door hoke bhi sudhre nahiiii!!!
s=hospitalse door hua hu..tumhare dilse..aur tumse to nahii...plzzz dedonaa.....warna parhai me man nahi lagegaaa!!! plsss
g=accha blackmail karlete hoooo...
s=ab debhi dooo...
g=accha theek ha...
she brought the speaker infront of her mouth n then..
g=nmuaaaaahhhh!!!!! ab khush????
s=bohot khusshhhhhh!!!!!
g=byee...
s=byee...
gunjan kept the phone...n came out of the locker room.......armaan saw all this as he was hiding behind the walll..but didnt hear anything...
ar=gunjan u chup chup ke kisse baat karti ha?? aur ye kiss........mera shak sahi thaa!!! rriddhimaaaa!!!!!!
armaan comes in riddhimas cabin......
r=kya hua?? race me participate kia ha kya???
ar=riddhima..mane abhi abhi gunjan ko uske bf ke sath baat karte hue suna ha....
r=not againnnn!!!
ar=i swear riddhima...aur to aur...usne usse phone par ek kiss diaa..
r=armaan tumhare dimag ka screw na kahi nikalke gir gaya ha isiliye esi ulti sidhi bate karrahehooo!! comeone armaan woh tumhari sali ha...meri behen haaa!!!!! mujhe laga tha ke ma tumse sorry kahungi..par nahi..ab to bilkul nahiii!!! meri behen par itna bara dosh??? kya sabut ha????? kya naam kya ha us ladkeka???
ar=woh to suna nahiii..par yakeen..
r=shut up armaann!! aj raat tum hall me sogee.....mere kamreme nahiiii!! samjhe???
ar=are parr....
rnow get out from here....leaveee!!!!
ar(in mind)=agar isse bina koi sabut ke behes karunga...thoriderme meri lash yaha milegaa...armaan beta nikallee...
cafe
g=di....mayank kaha ha???
n=woh kuch kaamse bahar gaya ha..anyways...sam se baat hui????
g=ha hui ha..abhi baat karke ayi hu..parhai karrahaha...
they were talking when mayank comes n sits beside nupur...
m=sorry nupur..ma jab waha poucha tha..tab counter close tha..aur unhone bataya ke.....aj saverehi sare tickets sell hochuke ha...mane bohot koshish ki..par...
nupur became sad....n she got up from there....n left the cafe...
g=mayank kya hua di ko??? kaunsi ticket????
m=woh kaal srk ki live concert ha na...to nupur ki bohot maan tha ke woh waha mere sath jaye...but unfortunately..sare tickets sell hochuke ha..
g=oh.....di ko concerts kitne pasand ha ye sirf di janti ha!!
m=gunjan i really wish ke ma usse waha lejasakta..ya usse khush karpata...
g=pata ha...di ko srk itna pasand ha...ke ek baar college annual play me unhone ddlj ka play kia thaaa!! jaha woh simran thi..sare constumes....sets...sab ddlj ka tha..aur di ne apne hathose...din raat mehnaat karke kaam kia tha..n u no what???? woh plaay...humare college ka sabse hit aur best play thaaa!!!!
m=play???? setss...costumess?????
g=ha.......di itni khush thi...ke kya kahu..tum chinta maat karoo....ma dise baat karke ati hu.. abhi ayii..
gunjan goes behind nupur....mayank smiles...
m=play?????? idea...
he dialed a number in his phonee..
m=hello...samm!! bhai..need ur helpp...
scene shifts..to armaan...he was walking in the corrider...thinking something..n crashes with gunjan..
g=oooppss...sorry sir..mane apko dekha nahii..
ar=nahi nahi..its ok gunjn...woh ma hi kahi aur dekke chal raha tha..
g=its ok....kya hua jiju ap paershan ha???
ar=ab nahi nahi..esi koi baat nahi haa!!!  bass esehi..wase tum kafi khush lagrahiho...
g=ab....ma???? nahi to..ma to wwasehi hu..jaise thii..
ar=par mujhe to tumhare chehrepar kuch alaghi smile aur glow dikh raha ha.......
g=jiju ap ye kya kehrahiha????
r=excuse me..yaha kya horahaha???
ar=ab...aba....maa...ma..ma...w....maa...
r=bakri ki tarah ma ma kya karraheho?? aur gunjan..tu ja yahase...tere jiju ka saar theek nahi ha..kuch bhi ulta sidha bak bak karte rehte ha..ja yahase..
g=ook dii...
gunjan leaves from there...
r=meri behense armaan door rahoo..specially gunjan se....apne dimag ka pehle ilaj karwaoo samjhee!! warna mere pass accha tareka ha..ilaj karwanekaa.....
ar=samajh gaya.....
at night..
sayank were in mayanks room..
m=all set??
s=dont worry...sab plan ke mutabik ha...akhir mane plan kia ha..
m=idea mera ha....
s=par kia dhara mera ha...sare planning meri ha..so credit goes....me 90% n u 10%
m=fine yaar...bass i just hope ke nupur khush hojay...usne mujhe kuch kaha tha karnekeliye aur mujhse nahi hua..
s=dude....dekhna..ye ko tu karega....nupur ne isske bareme kabhi sapnemebhi socha nahi hogaa...kabhi nahiii!!! wase ma bhi kafiii heran tha...tere jaise sadu ke dimag me ye idea???
m=nupur ki bhasha me kyu bolraha ha????
s=sangaat ka asar ha...
m=riteee...
s=wase mere lie bhi accha ha...chashmish kaal akeli rahegi....to ma waha uske sath time spend karunga..
m=well iska credit ma leta hu...mere idea ke bina ye nahi hotaa..
s=riteee....
the next morning...
mayank was waiting for nupur n gunjan....then gunjan comes...
g=hi mayank...
m=hey gunjan..nupur kaha ha???
g=di ne aj chutti li ha..
m=abhibi udass ha??
g=ha bhai..akhir itni bari fan ha..to thorasa to dukhi hogi na..
m=dont worry sham tak woh pehleki tarah hum sabki chulbuli..saar khati hui nupur hogi..
g=oh really??? kaise??? yeh dialouge to samrat ka ha rite..
m=ussise udhar leke aya hu....
g=accha ha..keep it up...chale??? duty nahi karni ha???
m=ha chalo......
after mayank n gunjan leaves....armaan comes in the locker room..to check gunjans mobile..
ar=yehi accha time ha....gunjan ke mobile pe check karta hu..kaal dopaher ko woh kisse baat karrahithi...tabhi pata chal sakta ha...
he opened her locker..to take the mobile when..
g=jiju,...
armaan quickly closed the locker....n turned around
g=ap yaha???
ar=ha woh......kaal....actually jab ma aya tha..to shayed meri ek ring yaha gir gayi..wahi dekhne aya tha..
g=oh i see..
ar=tum???
g=ha jiju...woh....ma apna stetho bhool gayi thi.bas wahi lene ayi thi.......
ar=accha...ma chalta....hu..
g=theek ha jiju......
scene shifts..nupur was sitting in her room...when mayank calls her
n=hi....
m=kaisi ho??
n-hmmm...finee...so missing me??
m=sach kahu ya jhoot????
n=ummm....jhoot hi kehdoo..
m=welll..nahi miss karraha hu..
nupur smiles...
m=accha suno..aj sham 5 baje.....sanjeevani ke piche jo ek barasa studio ha...waha chali ana plzz...
n=kya studio??? mayank ab tumhara maan kya photoshoot karneka ha?????
m=are nahi baba..tumhare lie ek surprise plan kia ha...
n=surprise kya?????
m=pata chal jayega....plzz timse 5 baje ajana...
n=par mayank......woh studio to band para ha...ma waha..
m=nupur..tum sawal bohot puchti hoo...jitna kaha utna karo...aur ha white salwar suit pehenke ana...theek ha??
n=white??? par mere pass white nahi ha..gunjan ke pass ha..
m=to uskahi pehenke ana...plzz meri maa...
n=par mujhe white nahi pasand..ma black pehnu..
m=nupur..plzzz!!!!
n=ok ok....ma aunggiiiii....khush???
m=yes....shamko tum bhi khush hojaogiii...byee..
n=byee...
sajan
gunjan was in the reception...when a nurse comes...
nu=dr gunjan...apko dr mayank ne firescape me bulaya ha..
g=dr mayank ne???
nu=ji ha...
g=accha theek ha....ma ati hu.....mayank ne firescape me????
gunjan comes in the firescape..n sees someone standing facing his back..she thought it was mayank..
g=mayank..tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya?????
he turned..n gunjan almost was going to scream..when he put his hand over her mouth
g=ummmmmmmmmm!!!
s=chashmish..chikho maattt!! ma koi bhoot thori na huuuu!!
he let her go....
g=tum??? yaha??? dimag to thikanepar ha????? yaha kyu aye??? samrat dr ridhima ya dr armaan ne dekha..to gazab hojayega.....ek hafte ke bajay..ek mahinekeliye suspend hojaogeee
s=are baba...plzz agar tum nahi chikhogi..to kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega.....
g=tum yaha kya karraheho????
s=tumse milna aya hu....tumhara bari yaad ati thii....
g=samrat...plzz tum yahase jaooooo.....koi ajayega..plzz...
s=accha theek ha..chala jata hu..par sirf itna kehnekeliye aya hu..aj sham apni kamreki khirki khula rakhna...
g=kya????
s=ha..ma aunga..
g=samrat gharme di aur ma honge...tum darwajese asakte ho....
s=nahi...adatsi hochuki ha...plzz....
g=accha theek ha...par abhi jaoo..
s=i love u..
g=ha ha,....hogaya..
s=tum bhi kaho......
g=ok ok...love u too..ab jaoo..
s=byee//
g=byee...
PRECAP: MAYANKS SURPRISE FOR NUPUR..
SAJAN MOMENTSS......
Edited by ArShSaJan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
loved it
plssss cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was a lovely update maisha
too good
loved it so much
keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb.......
awesome update.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part.
Loved it.
cont soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome continue soon..
Waiting for ur next part..
SaJan moments.. And Mayank suprise for Nupure..
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely update thoda mayur romance dikaho na yaar and yeh very late update

please next jaldi karna i am waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome part dear
totally loved it 
do continue soon
n thanx for the pm