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prerna_agrawal Goldie
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 5:04am | IP Logged
loved it!!!
mayurg2010 Goldie
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 5:52am | IP Logged
you know what? you can portray one's feelings very nicely.Star

This shot is very close to my real life......

My exact feeling towards love....... even i think that love at school can never be love. It's just an

attraction, infatuation or something else but it can never be love..

Well, I don't know about others but this is what i feel........

Amazing shot.Clap
sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Amazing os girl

loved the concept

too good

do write more
MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Mahi.. U have beautifully captured the feelings of teenager.. caught in between her values, tradition and what she feels as a liking for a particular individual.
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 6:41am | IP Logged
hey dear superb OS loved it and thanks a tone for pm u seriously rock and thanks for pm 
yumnakapoor IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 7:38am | IP Logged
very nice OS

thx alot for the pm
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
lovely os.
nupur feeling was beautifully narrated..........
want more form u.
thanks for the pm.
love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 8:43am | IP Logged
superb os

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