Arrange Marriage #3 [MN]: Some Messages Shared: 30 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
It feels so nice jab koi bhula bhatka upna FF update karta hai
aur sone pe suhaga hota hai kab GM update de to
 
I totally loved it and the best part rituals ka jo meaning bataya hai wo.
change in feelings ,ek taraf ajeeb si feeling to ek taraf dar that she ll be leaving her parents
her home soon
thats too nice the way you wrote it
 
Sorry Mahi  for short Comment
next time i ll comment  long one
 
Luv,
SA
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice part
Loved how u explained why do we celebrate Haldi
The explanation was really fab
Feelings of Mayur were sumwhr mutual
They are knwing each other
Gun is gona miss Nups lik anythg
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Posted: 13 years ago
plzzzzzzz update soon.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally commenting on this part, I loved it to the core Mahak.
Everything...just fantastic.
You truly defined the colour of belonging and now I only want....you know that and that is their marriage.
I hope you make it possible before 3rd March...Haina.

Just keep updating

and BTW where are the cards haan???

Luv Ya
Daksha
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey!!
i reeli reeli like...no love ur ff...
plz plz plz continue soon......
n also plz pm me wen u continue....😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Guys!

I am kinda leaving my ffs for some days due to my boards approaching...

Love you all.
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Posted: 13 years ago
its ok.......Best Of Luck for ur exams!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANKS


Hey Guys, Long time i know....

Please forgive me for not replying to your beautiful and encouraging compliments.

They surely do matter to me a LOT.

I just didn't had time....net is very slow and my time limit rivals it....

I am extremely happy that you guys are still with me, despite my slow speed.

Please shower your comments to me always. They are the only encouraging source i have.

The only reason for my updating are your beautiful words. So keep them going.

I am truly sorry for not being able to reply, i have a very tight schedule.

But, this doesn't means at all that i am not reading them! I read them and cherish them, so please keep commenting.

With loads of love,

-Mahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Scoops For Some Future Update

Mayank was shocked and stunned. Surely he was day-dreaming. Was she really calling him? Wow, that was a first! Maybe Samrat was right, all she needed was courage.

As he looked at the name 'Nupur' flashing on his cell, he was sure that he was sporting a huge smile on his face. He was extremely happy that atleast she got the courage to call him.

He gently picked up the phone and said, "Hello."

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Nupur was shocked to see Mayank in her boutique. What was he doing here? She suddenly felt shy and giddy. She was sure that the air had suddenly become magical. Something for sure, was different.

Slowly, she went up to him and said, "Aap yahan?"

She felt so shy that she lowered her gaze. He touched her chin and lifted up her face. She gazed into his eyes and he drowned into her eyes. He smiled and her breath was caught in the middle. He was breathtakingly handsome. And she was proud that he was all hers.

He slowly broke the glance and said, "Woh…maine socha ki jab Dia ko pick up karna hi hai, toh kyun na main khud hi karun? Is bahane tum se bhi mil loonga and tumhari boutique bhi dekh loonga. Maine sahi kiya na?"

He smiled and she felt heat rising up her face. She felt so giddy, like a school girl who just had her first crush.

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As she smelt the mehendi in her hands, she felt peace. She had always loved the smell of mehendi. Since a child, she always loved having mehendi in her hands. But today, it was different.

This time, this mehendi symbolized the amount of love her husband would do. She silently wished that Mayank loved her too much, because she for sure, was developing some feelings for him.

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Obviously, this is a small teaser. I hoped that you enjoyed this one, cause i surely did. Till i write up the part, keep waiting :)

I am sorry that even after so much wait, i just had time to post a promo. But i would post the part soon.

As you all are expecting, the next part will be longer and it would cover up Mehendi, Sangeet and Mayur's unexpected meeting. There is lots of mayur in the next part. Ooohh....i am myself loving the idea. 

Please comment and leave me a review :) Remember, that i am waiting for them <3

-Mahi