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*Khushi's One-Shot* RTMC/DV SS Part 4 Pg 16 (Page 3)

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Posted: 28 November 2010 at 1:48am | IP Logged
wow wonderfully written

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Posted: 28 November 2010 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Thnkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much guyz for liking i'll write one more OS tommorrow :))

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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 4:45am | IP Logged
hi khushi.this OS is very beautiful & really touchy...bahut pyara.keep writing more OS on RM..

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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

Hey guyz m back with one more OS n this time its gonna be MaanEet. 


Let me Love You


Once upon a time, there was once a guy who was very much in love with this girl. This romantic guy folded 1,000 pieces of papercranes as a gift to his girl. Although, at that time he was just a small executive in his company, his future doesn't seemed too bright, they were very happy together. Until one day, his girl told him she was going to canada and will never come back. She also told him that she cannot visualise any future for the both of them, so let's go their own ways there and then... heartbroken, the guy agreed.

When he regained his confidence, he worked hard day and night, slogging his body and mind just to make something out of himself. Finally with all these hardwork and with the help of friends, this guy had set up his own company...

"You never fail until you stop trying." he always told himself. "I must make it in life!"
One rainy day, while this guy was driving, he saw an elderly couple sharing an umbrella in the rain walking to some destination. Even with the umbrella, they were still drenched. It didn't take him long to realise those were his ex-girlfriend's parents. With a heart in getting back at them, he drove slowly beside the couple, wanting them to spot him in his luxury sedan. He wanted them to know that he wasn't the same anymore, he had his own company, car, condo, etc. He had made it in life!

Before the guy can realise, the couple was walking towards a cemetary,and he got out of his car and followed them...and he saw his ex-girlfriend, a photograph of her smiling sweetly as ever at him from her tombstone... and he saw his precious papercranes in a bottle placed beside her tomb. Her parents saw him. He walked over and asked them why this had happened. They explained, she did not leave for canada at all. She was stricken ill with cancer. In her heart, she had believed that he will make it someday, but she did not want her illness to be his obstacle ... therefore she had chosen to leave him.

She had wanted her parents to put his papercranes beside her, because, if the day comes when fate brings him to her again he can take some of those back with him. The guy just wept ...the worst way to miss someone is to be sitting right beside them but knowing you can't have them and will never see them again.
The End."

A tragic story that perhaps happens only in the movies. At the end of the day, money is money but love is divine.Take time to make time for our loved ones. There will be a time when we have only memories to cling to.
Take this week to show our "love" to all that are close to us.



Edited by khushi909 - 29 November 2010 at 12:55pm

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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 12:49pm | IP Logged

wwwwwwwooooowwwwwww di

awesome

very heart touching

luvd itClapClap

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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 1:31pm | IP Logged

oh my my di...

its simply superb...........

loved it........

such a sweet n deep meaning is there....

though sad...but beautiful.........

thnx for the pm.........

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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
really nice written 

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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Amazing, superb.
Sooooooo touchy, sooooooo poignant.
U r such a wonderful writer.
Hats off 2 u.
Ur os always leave me speechless.

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