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Ragini takes her to hug.and kissed her fore head…….maan looked her angrily………………..

Geet is 8 yrs old

And maan is 10yrs old

He always weird to her

Geet made her first rangoly

She is very good at paintings ………………

Ragini used to feel very happy……as it resemble her mother……………

Day by day………….maan 's grudge towards geet is changing………….

Geet is very happy that she had made her first rangoly………

At the evening……she saw maan coming in the opposite direction

 

She tried to stop him but already he spoiled the rangoly….made her in tears

He see at her tears………………….and smiled happily…………..

This is his daily routine…………she made her cry.all the times……..

And he used to feel fun…………….

But he used to feelbad when ever she cries…………….he don't know why…………

Geet………used to bear him……….

Because she is angel at heart…….some

How maan is very good a tstudies and at sports…..he is alrounder……but his attitude towards geet is same………….

He hates her from the core………….

Their rooms are opposite………………………

And in their balconies………….

Geet balcony is filled with flowers

Where maan is with chair….and writing table…………….and both have a their jolas…………………..

Geet is friend of dev……………

Dev and geet are best friends………….

Dev is shy type guy..and reserved….he only talks with geet………..and shares a good relation with geet……….where .vicky is naughty type and geet always protect him from the elders……………

Where aditya is elder to all……..and he cares for all

Mahi and tanu ar e little girls and they always fight…….

Where simran is elder of all……..and loves all……………………….

Maan and geet are same..

They are different……

Ragini used to feel different for maan……..

She cannot ablee to understand maan………

He is so stubborn………..at the same time…………he is dulhara of dadaji…………….

As according to stars……..he is elgible for getting everything………….

He is arrogant..but listens to dadaji…………………and shares a good relation with dadaji and ragini…………………………………….

Days going on……

They are into school……………………..

As both are famous………..

Maan and geet didn't talk in school…

As he is coming out of the class………….

He see gayatri teacher……..who is his favourite……..she has costume in his hand………………..

Maangood morning maa'm

Gayatri:arey maan…………….kaise hoot um……….

Maan:maa'm what is in your hands…………

Gayatrithis is ramayan's costume……….as ………there is play in our school………….

 

He sees the costumee…………it Is raam's///////////

He smiled……….

As he see the notice board……….as ram is aditya and sita is geet……………

His eyes turn anger………..

He came to class………

Where geet is with her friends…….mita………..and ranoo…….

Rano:geet suna hay tu sita hay………..

geet:haa men seeta hoon………..

mita:and who is raam…………

geet:aditya khurana……………………

ranoo:hey why can't be maan.he looks good………and more good looking then aditya…………………

geet"kya…………….no ways……………….i know only one character he plays………..well……

ranoo:what ……

geet:raven……….he is 10 headed raaavan………dhust danav…..ravan………as she turned back to see….maan..looking at anger……………….

Maan…………….pacing in his room………

Mee 10 headed raavan…………how dare she………

Im going to teach her lesson……….

And he gives back his weird smile……………..

At the evening..where aditya and geet are rehearsing…………..

Maan……poured some liquid.as he want geet to walk and fall on it…..but due to bad luck.it was aditya walked first and fell on the floor…………………

And he was injured……………..

And everyone worried………………….

Gayatri came there…………..

And he had been taken to hospital………..

On the next day.gayatri called .maan……………………..

Maan:maam did u called me………….

Gayatri:yes maan………….the committee had decided…….

As behalf of your brother u r going to play ram……………………….

Maan shocked……………..

Geet felt bad………….

As maan……….had came in raam's costume……………

And geet in sita costume……………….

And they are doing the play…………

Ragini and family members are shocked.d………….as they looked very good In costumes…………………………

And they are exactly like ram and sita of ramayan………

Everybody In school praised…………………………

And ragini take the picture of maan..and geet…………..as they smiled………………………

Part ends…………

 

New girl in maan's entry

 

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Ragini takes her to hug.and kissed her fore head…….maan looked her angrily………………..

Geet is 8 yrs old

And maan is 10yrs old

He always weird to her

Geet made her first rangoly

She is very good at paintings ………………

Ragini used to feel very happy……as it resemble her mother……………

Day by day………….maan 's grudge towards geet is changing………….

Geet is very happy that she had made her first rangoly………

At the evening……she saw maan coming in the opposite direction

 

She tried to stop him but already he spoiled the rangoly….made her in tears

He see at her tears………………….and smiled happily…………..

This is his daily routine…………she made her cry.all the times……..

And he used to feel fun…………….

But he used to feelbad when ever she cries…………….he don't know why…………

Geet………used to bear him……….

Because she is angel at heart…….some

How maan is very good a tstudies and at sports…..he is alrounder……but his attitude towards geet is same………….

He hates her from the core………….

Their rooms are opposite………………………

And in their balconies………….

Geet balcony is filled with flowers

Where maan is with chair….and writing table…………….and both have a their jolas…………………..

Geet is friend of dev……………

Dev and geet are best friends………….

Dev is shy type guy..and reserved….he only talks with geet………..and shares a good relation with geet……….where .vicky is naughty type and geet always protect him from the elders……………

Where aditya is elder to all……..and he cares for all

Mahi and tanu ar e little girls and they always fight…….

Where simran is elder of all……..and loves all……………………….

Maan and geet are same..

They are different……

Ragini used to feel different for maan……..

She cannot ablee to understand maan………

He is so stubborn………..at the same time…………he is dulhara of dadaji…………….

As according to stars……..he is elgible for getting everything………….

He is arrogant..but listens to dadaji…………………and shares a good relation with dadaji and ragini…………………………………….

Days going on……

They are into school……………………..

As both are famous………..

Maan and geet didn't talk in school…

As he is coming out of the class………….

He see gayatri teacher……..who is his favourite……..she has costume in his hand………………..

Maangood morning maa'm

Gayatri:arey maan…………….kaise hoot um……….

Maan:maa'm what is in your hands…………

Gayatrithis is ramayan's costume……….as ………there is play in our school………….

 

He sees the costumee…………it Is raam's///////////

He smiled……….

As he see the notice board……….as ram is aditya and sita is geet……………

His eyes turn anger………..

He came to class………

Where geet is with her friends…….mita………..and ranoo…….

Rano:geet suna hay tu sita hay………..

geet:haa men seeta hoon………..

mita:and who is raam…………

geet:aditya khurana……………………

ranoo:hey why can't be maan.he looks good………and more good looking then aditya…………………

geet"kya…………….no ways……………….i know only one character he plays………..well……

ranoo:what ……

geet:raven……….he is 10 headed raaavan………dhust danav…..ravan………as she turned back to see….maan..looking at anger……………….

Maan…………….pacing in his room………

Mee 10 headed raavan…………how dare she………

Im going to teach her lesson……….

And he gives back his weird smile……………..

At the evening..where aditya and geet are rehearsing…………..

Maan……poured some liquid.as he want geet to walk and fall on it…..but due to bad luck.it was aditya walked first and fell on the floor…………………

And he was injured……………..

And everyone worried………………….

Gayatri came there…………..

And he had been taken to hospital………..

On the next day.gayatri called .maan……………………..

Maan:maam did u called me………….

Gayatri:yes maan………….the committee had decided…….

As behalf of your brother u r going to play ram……………………….

Maan shocked……………..

Geet felt bad………….

As maan……….had came in raam's costume……………

And geet in sita costume……………….

And they are doing the play…………

Ragini and family members are shocked.d………….as they looked very good In costumes…………………………

And they are exactly like ram and sita of ramayan………

Everybody In school praised…………………………

And ragini take the picture of maan..and geet…………..as they smiled………………………

Part ends…………

 

New girl in maan's entry

 

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great n sweet.......

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lol... Maan stuck with Geet as Ram and Sita... plz cont soon... and plz PM me when u update...

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First of al a big Hug to u... Its very cute... I loved it...

"But he used to feelbad when ever she cries'''''.he don't know why''''"  This dialog is very nice... Very touching


geet:raven'''.he is 10 headed raaavan'''dhust danav'..ravan'''as she turned back to see'.maan..looking at anger''''''.
This dialog is very funny i was imaging little Maan and Geet's Face Expressions .


As behalf of your brother u r going to play ram'''''''''.

Maan shocked'''''..

Geet felt bad''''.  So Cute.....

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Geet best friend is babaji…………..

 

She came to school……….

As some students are talking..

She came to pinky……..

Who is busy eating something…………….

Yeh pinky.:tu yeha kya kar rahi hay

geet:what's going on.is everythin ok……..

pinky:oye geet..there is a new girl in school…..

she is daughter of famous..bussiness man…..

she is good.and beautiful.but she is senior………….

In ur ram's class………..

Geet:what 's her name………

Pinky:nakusha…………………everyone calls her nakku…………..

And what u guys calling ram.these days……I already told u.he is rakhsas……..dust danav..raavan………..and why it bothers me…………..

Geet felt.something…….

Why I can't check that girl……………

As due to curiousity……….

She peeped into maan's class…………

As he is older than to her…………

She peeped…………..

 It is first time she gone to class…………………she didn't go…….for only one reason……….as maan……………..is there……….

She peeped to find…maan.is busy in writing some notes………………

And see some girl enter into the class….she is tall………her eyes are good…………..

She cam eto class as everyone looking at her.except maan.he is still busy In his writing………………..

She came to the place…and stood before maan……………

Maan looked up…………….and before he could say something…………….

He saw geet is looking him at the window………smile in his lips……..

He stood up……..

The girl introduced her as nakusha………nakku….

Maan greeted her by shaking hand……………giving a look at geet…………..

Geet look inother direction………….

As the girl took next seat.to maan…………

Geet give a disguisting look at her…….and gone back to her………

As she moving back…….

She saw maan………..coming…….

She started running…

Maan:why geet following.sure she is going to discuss with mama..

Today geet I won't leave u………………

Geet I nmean time why im thinking of maan……..

=what if the girl sits with him.

He is not my friend…….he is enemy……………

She came to the room…………she open her books..and finished her homework……

Dev called her…….for playing…..

She ran towards……………….

And they started playing…………..

Dev:geet I had listened that there is a new girl in school………

Geet:yes…………..

Dev:who is she…

Geet:forever dev.why we are talking about……

Dev:ok donot get angry.well.geet next week is ur birthday…………………….

And remember ur going tobee thirteen......................

Geet:yaa……..

In meantime she heard that maan and nakku are going out as nakku is maan's girl friend………….

Geet:didn't pay attention.but donot know why she is feeling bad…………

As usual..geet 's birthday is coming…..

And all kids are fancy dress party……….

As maan invited nakku for the party…………………….

Nakku came in a bright red colon gown…

And dev is like superman………..

Vicky……john bravo……….

And all other s in fancy dress….

Ragini is very happy………….

At last maan.came for thee party……

He is wearing a prince dress…….looking like a prince…..

Dadaji:dekho mera raj kumar aya hay.

Aditya…………in different dress…………

Everyone are happy….

By that timee a young boy entered……………..

He is tall……..handsome…………….

Ragini welcome the boy………..are dutta…………

Childreen.he is srikanth dutta…………….he is my friends son……….joined in your school…….yesterday……………

So be friends with them……………………….

All are praising maan…..as he is looking good…….and nakku is with him,,,

'his eyes are pride and smile on his face………

The lights go on…..

And ragini bring…………..geet…..

She is wearing a pari.dress……………….she is looking like pari………………….

She is smiling……

Dutta looking at her…………lost…….

Maan.looked at her………….

Geet cut the cake…and ragini..told mere nanhi pari.sach much pari lag rahi hay…….

Geet gave a look at maan……….and also look to naku……….and she gave the cake…………….

Vicky and prachi.are having fight………

Mahi and purvi.are busy……………..

Where maan…………….giving look at opposite direction………….

And suddenly dutta introduced himself to geet……..

Maan looking at her………..

 

Geet gave hand to him………

Dutta:friends……………\

Geetfreinds……:

Geet and maan:

Maan and geet

Stop putting ur brain ans stop peeping into my room..why u bother……

Geet:im bother……….ur drinking cigarette in ur bathroom with ur frends………….

So what ur going to say to mama…..right……….

Geetif I really say what's going to happen…………

Maan:ur trouble……………..if u say…………..im going to tear into pieces…………….

 

Well right now im going tosay to badimaa……….

Not only that …..even I say that ur participating..in the climb one ……………and ur camping friends………….all………..

Stop geet……other wise………………….

Other wise…………………

He took the hand..and drag her…………

Geet started running…………..

He tried to pull……..

But he pulled….her dress…where it lead..to tear her dress…………………

He didn't mean that '……………………

Geet:started crying and run back to her room…….

He too run back…………………..

To stop her as she is going to say everything to badimaa..

As all other 's fear .in this house of maan.except geet……

She has the guts……….to face him…

She will always…..give s back to him…..

She is too strong………….equally strong like him…stubborn like him……………….

Ragini see geet is crying………………………

Geet:sobbing badimaa………..

Ragini:kya baat hay geet………………..

Why ur running………….and why are u crying……………………..

Geet"looking at maan………….running behind stopped………….on seeing………….his mother…….

With in a second.he gasped as she is going to tell the truth,……….

Geet:said tha t no badimaa……..i had fell on the ground………………

Maan looked shocked…………………

As geet runned into her room

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