new FF maneet tum mile 08/02/201 last parts epilo2 - Page 4

Posted: 13 years ago
First of al a big 🤗 to u... Its very cute... I loved it...

"But he used to feelbad when ever she cries'''''.he don't know why''''"  This dialog is very nice... Very touching


geet:raven'''.he is 10 headed raaavan'''dhust danav'..ravan'''as she turned back to see'.maan..looking at anger''''''.
This dialog is very funny i was imaging little Maan and Geet's Face Expressions .


As behalf of your brother u r going to play ram'''''''''.

Maan shocked'''''..

Geet felt bad''''.  So Cute.....

Posted: 13 years ago

Geet best friend is babaji…………..

 

She came to school……….

As some students are talking..

She came to pinky……..

Who is busy eating something…………….

Yeh pinky.:tu yeha kya kar rahi hay

geet:what's going on.is everythin ok……..

pinky:oye geet..there is a new girl in school…..

she is daughter of famous..bussiness man…..

she is good.and beautiful.but she is senior………….

In ur ram's class………..

Geet:what 's her name………

Pinky:nakusha…………………everyone calls her nakku…………..

And what u guys calling ram.these days……I already told u.he is rakhsas……..dust danav..raavan………..and why it bothers me…………..

Geet felt.something…….

Why I can't check that girl……………

As due to curiousity……….

She peeped into maan's class…………

As he is older than to her…………

She peeped…………..

 It is first time she gone to class…………………she didn't go…….for only one reason……….as maan……………..is there……….

She peeped to find…maan.is busy in writing some notes………………

And see some girl enter into the class….she is tall………her eyes are good…………..

She cam eto class as everyone looking at her.except maan.he is still busy In his writing………………..

She came to the place…and stood before maan……………

Maan looked up…………….and before he could say something…………….

He saw geet is looking him at the window………smile in his lips……..

He stood up……..

The girl introduced her as nakusha………nakku….

Maan greeted her by shaking hand……………giving a look at geet…………..

Geet look inother direction………….

As the girl took next seat.to maan…………

Geet give a disguisting look at her…….and gone back to her………

As she moving back…….

She saw maan………..coming…….

She started running…

Maan:why geet following.sure she is going to discuss with mama..

Today geet I won't leave u………………

Geet I nmean time why im thinking of maan……..

=what if the girl sits with him.

He is not my friend…….he is enemy……………

She came to the room…………she open her books..and finished her homework……

Dev called her…….for playing…..

She ran towards……………….

And they started playing…………..

Dev:geet I had listened that there is a new girl in school………

Geet:yes…………..

Dev:who is she…

Geet:forever dev.why we are talking about……

Dev:ok donot get angry.well.geet next week is ur birthday…………………….

And remember ur going tobee thirteen......................

Geet:yaa……..

In meantime she heard that maan and nakku are going out as nakku is maan's girl friend………….

Geet:didn't pay attention.but donot know why she is feeling bad…………

As usual..geet 's birthday is coming…..

And all kids are fancy dress party……….

As maan invited nakku for the party…………………….

Nakku came in a bright red colon gown…

And dev is like superman………..

Vicky……john bravo……….

And all other s in fancy dress….

Ragini is very happy………….

At last maan.came for thee party……

He is wearing a prince dress…….looking like a prince…..

Dadaji:dekho mera raj kumar aya hay.

Aditya…………in different dress…………

Everyone are happy….

By that timee a young boy entered……………..

He is tall……..handsome…………….

Ragini welcome the boy………..are dutta…………

Childreen.he is srikanth dutta…………….he is my friends son……….joined in your school…….yesterday……………

So be friends with them……………………….

All are praising maan…..as he is looking good…….and nakku is with him,,,

'his eyes are pride and smile on his face………

The lights go on…..

And ragini bring…………..geet…..

She is wearing a pari.dress……………….she is looking like pari………………….

She is smiling……

Dutta looking at her…………lost…….

Maan.looked at her………….

Geet cut the cake…and ragini..told mere nanhi pari.sach much pari lag rahi hay…….

Geet gave a look at maan……….and also look to naku……….and she gave the cake…………….

Vicky and prachi.are having fight………

Mahi and purvi.are busy……………..

Where maan…………….giving look at opposite direction………….

And suddenly dutta introduced himself to geet……..

Maan looking at her………..

 

Geet gave hand to him………

Dutta:friends……………\

Geetfreinds……:

Geet and maan:

Maan and geet

Stop putting ur brain ans stop peeping into my room..why u bother……

Geet:im bother……….ur drinking cigarette in ur bathroom with ur frends………….

So what ur going to say to mama…..right……….

Geetif I really say what's going to happen…………

Maan:ur trouble……………..if u say…………..im going to tear into pieces…………….

 

Well right now im going tosay to badimaa……….

Not only that …..even I say that ur participating..in the climb one ……………and ur camping friends………….all………..

Stop geet……other wise………………….

Other wise…………………

He took the hand..and drag her…………

Geet started running…………..

He tried to pull……..

But he pulled….her dress…where it lead..to tear her dress…………………

He didn't mean that '……………………

Geet:started crying and run back to her room…….

He too run back…………………..

To stop her as she is going to say everything to badimaa..

As all other 's fear .in this house of maan.except geet……

She has the guts……….to face him…

She will always…..give s back to him…..

She is too strong………….equally strong like him…stubborn like him……………….

Ragini see geet is crying………………………

Geet:sobbing badimaa………..

Ragini:kya baat hay geet………………..

Why ur running………….and why are u crying……………………..

Geet"looking at maan………….running behind stopped………….on seeing………….his mother…….

With in a second.he gasped as she is going to tell the truth,……….

Geet:said tha t no badimaa……..i had fell on the ground………………

Maan looked shocked…………………

As geet runned into her room

Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice one
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god !!! geet is so sweet yaar.... do update the next part soon pls...
Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey its sooo sweet....  Nice one, eagerly waiting for next part.... Edited by Nisa_nr - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
so sweet.......please update next part..
Posted: 13 years ago
hey plz update next part soon...
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