new FF maneet tum mile 08/02/201 last parts epilo2 - Page 3

Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story line.. add me to ur pm list.. thank you!
Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 concept dear
can u plz pm me whenever u continue
Posted: 13 years ago
do continue. plz add me in ur pm list
Posted: 13 years ago

good starting.pm me too. liked it. give some name to this story otherwise it will mixup with other stories of this forum. love it

Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the 1st prt could u add me to yr PM list.
Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon add me to your pm list
Posted: 13 years ago
its really nice....
Plz add me in ur pm list
Posted: 13 years ago

Ragini takes her to hug.and kissed her fore head…….maan looked her angrily………………..

Geet is 8 yrs old

And maan is 10yrs old

He always weird to her

Geet made her first rangoly

She is very good at paintings ………………

Ragini used to feel very happy……as it resemble her mother……………

Day by day………….maan 's grudge towards geet is changing………….

Geet is very happy that she had made her first rangoly………

At the evening……she saw maan coming in the opposite direction

 

She tried to stop him but already he spoiled the rangoly….made her in tears

He see at her tears………………….and smiled happily…………..

This is his daily routine…………she made her cry.all the times……..

And he used to feel fun…………….

But he used to feelbad when ever she cries…………….he don't know why…………

Geet………used to bear him……….

Because she is angel at heart…….some

How maan is very good a tstudies and at sports…..he is alrounder……but his attitude towards geet is same………….

He hates her from the core………….

Their rooms are opposite………………………

And in their balconies………….

Geet balcony is filled with flowers

Where maan is with chair….and writing table…………….and both have a their jolas…………………..

Geet is friend of dev……………

Dev and geet are best friends………….

Dev is shy type guy..and reserved….he only talks with geet………..and shares a good relation with geet……….where .vicky is naughty type and geet always protect him from the elders……………

Where aditya is elder to all……..and he cares for all

Mahi and tanu ar e little girls and they always fight…….

Where simran is elder of all……..and loves all……………………….

Maan and geet are same..

They are different……

Ragini used to feel different for maan……..

She cannot ablee to understand maan………

He is so stubborn………..at the same time…………he is dulhara of dadaji…………….

As according to stars……..he is elgible for getting everything………….

He is arrogant..but listens to dadaji…………………and shares a good relation with dadaji and ragini…………………………………….

Days going on……

They are into school……………………..

As both are famous………..

Maan and geet didn't talk in school…

As he is coming out of the class………….

He see gayatri teacher……..who is his favourite……..she has costume in his hand………………..

Maangood morning maa'm

Gayatri:arey maan…………….kaise hoot um……….

Maan:maa'm what is in your hands…………

Gayatrithis is ramayan's costume……….as ………there is play in our school………….

 

He sees the costumee…………it Is raam's///////////

He smiled……….

As he see the notice board……….as ram is aditya and sita is geet……………

His eyes turn anger………..

He came to class………

Where geet is with her friends…….mita………..and ranoo…….

Rano:geet suna hay tu sita hay………..

geet:haa men seeta hoon………..

mita:and who is raam…………

geet:aditya khurana……………………

ranoo:hey why can't be maan.he looks good………and more good looking then aditya…………………

geet"kya…………….no ways……………….i know only one character he plays………..well……

ranoo:what ……

geet:raven……….he is 10 headed raaavan………dhust danav…..ravan………as she turned back to see….maan..looking at anger……………….

Maan…………….pacing in his room………

Mee 10 headed raavan…………how dare she………

Im going to teach her lesson……….

And he gives back his weird smile……………..

At the evening..where aditya and geet are rehearsing…………..

Maan……poured some liquid.as he want geet to walk and fall on it…..but due to bad luck.it was aditya walked first and fell on the floor…………………

And he was injured……………..

And everyone worried………………….

Gayatri came there…………..

And he had been taken to hospital………..

On the next day.gayatri called .maan……………………..

Maan:maam did u called me………….

Gayatri:yes maan………….the committee had decided…….

As behalf of your brother u r going to play ram……………………….

Maan shocked……………..

Geet felt bad………….

As maan……….had came in raam's costume……………

And geet in sita costume……………….

And they are doing the play…………

Ragini and family members are shocked.d………….as they looked very good In costumes…………………………

And they are exactly like ram and sita of ramayan………

Everybody In school praised…………………………

And ragini take the picture of maan..and geet…………..as they smiled………………………

Part ends…………

 

New girl in maan's entry

 

Posted: 13 years ago

Ragini takes her to hug.and kissed her fore head…….maan looked her angrily………………..

Geet is 8 yrs old

And maan is 10yrs old

He always weird to her

Geet made her first rangoly

She is very good at paintings ………………

Ragini used to feel very happy……as it resemble her mother……………

Day by day………….maan 's grudge towards geet is changing………….

Geet is very happy that she had made her first rangoly………

At the evening……she saw maan coming in the opposite direction

 

She tried to stop him but already he spoiled the rangoly….made her in tears

He see at her tears………………….and smiled happily…………..

This is his daily routine…………she made her cry.all the times……..

And he used to feel fun…………….

But he used to feelbad when ever she cries…………….he don't know why…………

Geet………used to bear him……….

Because she is angel at heart…….some

How maan is very good a tstudies and at sports…..he is alrounder……but his attitude towards geet is same………….

He hates her from the core………….

Their rooms are opposite………………………

And in their balconies………….

Geet balcony is filled with flowers

Where maan is with chair….and writing table…………….and both have a their jolas…………………..

Geet is friend of dev……………

Dev and geet are best friends………….

Dev is shy type guy..and reserved….he only talks with geet………..and shares a good relation with geet……….where .vicky is naughty type and geet always protect him from the elders……………

Where aditya is elder to all……..and he cares for all

Mahi and tanu ar e little girls and they always fight…….

Where simran is elder of all……..and loves all……………………….

Maan and geet are same..

They are different……

Ragini used to feel different for maan……..

She cannot ablee to understand maan………

He is so stubborn………..at the same time…………he is dulhara of dadaji…………….

As according to stars……..he is elgible for getting everything………….

He is arrogant..but listens to dadaji…………………and shares a good relation with dadaji and ragini…………………………………….

Days going on……

They are into school……………………..

As both are famous………..

Maan and geet didn't talk in school…

As he is coming out of the class………….

He see gayatri teacher……..who is his favourite……..she has costume in his hand………………..

Maangood morning maa'm

Gayatri:arey maan…………….kaise hoot um……….

Maan:maa'm what is in your hands…………

Gayatrithis is ramayan's costume……….as ………there is play in our school………….

 

He sees the costumee…………it Is raam's///////////

He smiled……….

As he see the notice board……….as ram is aditya and sita is geet……………

His eyes turn anger………..

He came to class………

Where geet is with her friends…….mita………..and ranoo…….

Rano:geet suna hay tu sita hay………..

geet:haa men seeta hoon………..

mita:and who is raam…………

geet:aditya khurana……………………

ranoo:hey why can't be maan.he looks good………and more good looking then aditya…………………

geet"kya…………….no ways……………….i know only one character he plays………..well……

ranoo:what ……

geet:raven……….he is 10 headed raaavan………dhust danav…..ravan………as she turned back to see….maan..looking at anger……………….

Maan…………….pacing in his room………

Mee 10 headed raavan…………how dare she………

Im going to teach her lesson……….

And he gives back his weird smile……………..

At the evening..where aditya and geet are rehearsing…………..

Maan……poured some liquid.as he want geet to walk and fall on it…..but due to bad luck.it was aditya walked first and fell on the floor…………………

And he was injured……………..

And everyone worried………………….

Gayatri came there…………..

And he had been taken to hospital………..

On the next day.gayatri called .maan……………………..

Maan:maam did u called me………….

Gayatri:yes maan………….the committee had decided…….

As behalf of your brother u r going to play ram……………………….

Maan shocked……………..

Geet felt bad………….

As maan……….had came in raam's costume……………

And geet in sita costume……………….

And they are doing the play…………

Ragini and family members are shocked.d………….as they looked very good In costumes…………………………

And they are exactly like ram and sita of ramayan………

Everybody In school praised…………………………

And ragini take the picture of maan..and geet…………..as they smiled………………………

Part ends…………

 

New girl in maan's entry

 

Posted: 13 years ago
lol... Maan stuck with Geet as Ram and Sita... plz cont soon... and plz PM me when u update...

Related Topics

doc-text Topics pencil Author stackexchange Replies eye Views clock Last Post Reply
Tum se hi (part 4)

pencil Srishti_124   stackexchange 3   eye 467

Srishti_124 3 467 1 months ago Srishti_124
Tum se hi(part-3)

pencil Srishti_124   stackexchange 3   eye 352

Srishti_124 3 352 2 months ago coderlady
Tum se hi(part-2)

pencil Srishti_124   stackexchange 1   eye 360

Srishti_124 1 360 2 months ago coderlady
Tum se hi (part 1)

pencil Srishti_124   stackexchange 2   eye 447

Srishti_124 2 447 2 months ago coderlady
Akshan short story (Tum Se Hi)

pencil Srishti_124   stackexchange 0   eye 292

Srishti_124 0 292 2 months ago Srishti_124

Topic Info

123 Participants 517 Replies 316774Views

Topic started by srilu_123

Last replied by Nivedithachand

loader
loader
up-open TOP