new FF maneet tum mile 08/02/201 last parts epilo2

Posted: 13 years ago

Hello everyone

 

 

This is another FF

Maan and Geet

 

It is different''''

But the same story

Love,attraction,Feel'..Passion

 

Hope u guys like it

 

Charcters sketch I will update on next Post



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Edited by srilu_123 - 12 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Characters Sketch:

 

Balraaj Singh Khurana:Dadaji''''..A Founder of Khurana Empire..and a loving person..his decision is final'''''..

 

Damini Singh Khurana:wife of Balraaj,,,,,,,loves his husband follow his foot steps'and always fun loving'''.

 

Their 3 sons'''and 2 daughters''..

         

1.Mahesh Khurana: eleder son.responsble..and take care of all the business empire.he is strict want to be with all'..but love his wife and respects her decisions in the family as she is one who handles all''..

 

2. Manindar Khurana: second son.always on his business trips he take car eof international ventures..but loves his family'''''and take care of them''''..

 

3Rajeshwar Khurana''''.third son fun ny type'..but handles business'''..smaall of them mixes with children''''

 

 

Ragini Singh Khurana:bellowed bahu..and also wife off Mahesh.take care of family.she loves all'''.she respects elders.without her there is no khurana family''''

Her best friend is sunaina''''''and she promised that she will take care of her daughter before she died'''..

Sunaina handa and his husband..ranbir handa.died in an accident'''''''left over with only one child''''

 

Geet Handa''''''''

 

Mahesh has 2 sons''..

The elder one is Aditya Khurana'''''same like father''''..and loves the family'''''

And the second son is MAAN SINGH Khurana''''''' spoilt brat''''.arrogant''''.and different from all'''..

Manidar wife is manjari''''..has one son and one daughter''..

Simran..elder than '''''.maan''''calls simi''

 

And their son is dev''''best friend of geet''''''

Rajeshwar wife is neelu''..filmy type..masti one''.a nd their also have one daughter and one son'''''..

Vicky and purvi'''''''

They stays at abroad'''''..

And one more girl is mahi..uncle's daughter '..and best friend of geet'''..

Where as karan is his brother also friend of geet'''''''

One small girl'''praying to her babaji'''.

 

All are saying that my mom and dad with u'why u take away from me'''am I bad'''''''. And im alone''''''..

At that time a beatifull hand.touches her head'''and says''no beta never say ur alone''''''''ur badimaa,,,,,,,,,,,will be always there for u'''

He brings the little girl to her big house..khurana mansion''''..

And all greet her except a boy''.which is lookingher anger'

The girl comes to the'boy'''..

Why ur angry''..

Because u called my mom''''..

Mymom bought..u I don't like sharing my things with other''''.

And my mom told me thatshe loves u,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The girl says she is my badi maa''''''''.

The boy gives a weird look''''.look'.i want u to leave my house''''.

The girl looks at him shock'''''

He takes her spectacles and throw'''.

Badi maa.comes and scolds''''..

Inthought u both will be friends,,,,,,,,,,,,but u are ,,,,,,,,,

Maan what 's wrong with u''.look at aditya''he cares her just like he care''''..purvi and mahi,,,,,,,,,,,,but u are.and the time a big girl comes to her'badimaa.donot worry inwill talk to maan'he will listen to me'''''

The girl '''''..what's wrong with the boy''..

All the boys and girls are playing'..m ahi and geet are friends,,,,,,,

Dev and Vicky''''''''''.are all playing'..

Except maan''he is looking at geet'..

Geet is making building ''''''.dev and Vicky'''''''.all praise her construction'''''''.

With everyone surprise maan comes to there and kicks it'''''''

And says'''..if u ever mess up with me then I am going to ruin u '''.geet handa'''''''''..

 

Geet  looks at him with anger.and she moves from there'''''..

All are lookinga t one another''''

Results time''''..

Vicky , dev are average'''

Mahi and purvi'are fail''''..

Karan.is good score''''''.

But maan is topper'''''''.

Smiran praises maan'''.

Maan smiles''.

Simi:maan u looks cute when smile'''''..

At that time ragini comes''''.she sees all the cards'''

And she distributes sweets''

At that time geet'comes slowly'..

Aditya also comes'''.

Maan looks at her weirdly'''''

Dadaji.asks her report card''''''.

But she hestitate'''..

Maan.comes and say''..may be she is also fail .just likee useless batch'..he looks at mahi and purvi.they give angry looks'''..

And then badimaa.comes '''''.she says stop maan''''.

And she take the report card'

As geet head is shook down''''''

Badi maa''..looks at the report card in shocking'

Dadji'''kya baat hay puttarji''''''..

Muje dekhe ne do'

And he also looks at shock.

Are beta yeh kya'''''

Tum to karan se bhi upar hoo''''''.

Maan'''looks at her''.

As she is the topper of her school''..

Maan looks shock and he leaves'''.

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
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