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~*Only Mine...forever(AR)1* Part 1-27~ (Page 4)

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
wow sonu! :) 
that was a great starting! :) 
im glad that im in your pm list already :) 
heheh 

Love, 
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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
heyy dear
awesome writing 
cont soon 
n do add me to ur pm list
thx
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awesome part
pls add me in ur pm list

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wonderful concept dear...pls add me to ur pm list...

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Nice ff dear. Pls add me to your PM list.
Continue soon.
Thanks

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 4:37am | IP Logged

 SmileHEY GUYS,

THANK U SO MUCH FOR YOUR RESPONCE.Tongue
ITS GOOD TO KNOW THAT U LIKE MY WORK.
WELL,GUYS I WANT TO TELL U THAT MY PM LIST IS ON PG 1 IF U ARE NOT INCLUDED PLZ  MESSAGE ME.
THE NEXT PART IS COMING IN AM HOUR I AM WORKING ON IT WILL BE FINISHED IN AN HOUR.
LOVE
SONU


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Miss Laadli

 
A girl in her early twenties was making her way out of airport' her long black hairs were flowing all around her face due to wind. She was wearing a sky blue chudidaar. Her almond shaped jet black eyes were searching for something or someone. She scanned the entire premises. She was still frowning when a smile crept on her face seeing what she was searching for.

 

"Riddhi" he exclaimed.

 

 "Papa" and we see the girl is non another than our Ridhimaa.

 

"Papa" squealed Ridhimaa hugging her father.

 

 "Papa I miss you so much"

 

 Sheshank Parted from hug "I miss you too beta"

 

 "Hey bachcha"

 

 "bhaiya! oh I miss you so much bhaiya", said Ridhimaa hugging him.

 

 "I miss you too bachcha. How was your journey?"

 

"It was fine aur aap bataiye sab kuch kaisa chal raha hai?"

 

Rahul noticed the naughty note in her voice "Oh ridhi please ab tu mat start ho jaana vaise hi sab log mere piche pade hua hai at least tu to mera saath de" winced Rahul.

 

 "No ways. Sorry to interrupts you Mr. Rahul Gupta she is all ours so you don't even think that. kyon riddhi?", both Sheshank and Rahul stared at her waiting for her answer but she knew how to handle the situation.

 

"Oh ho main toh aap hi logon ki hoon aap koi alag thode hi hoo main to aap sab se bahut pyaar karti hoon' accha ab yeh sab chodiye yeh bataiye maa kahaan hai? wo kyon nahi aayi mujhe lene?" asked Ridhima  taking hold of their arms from each side.

 

"Are wo beta tum toh janti ho na ki aaj sangit hai toh tumhari maa bas usi ki tayaari me lagi hai isi liye aa nahi payi gher me itne saare mehmaan aaye hain wo sari tayaari use akele karni pad rahi hai"

 

 "Don't worry papa main aa gayi hoon naa main sab sambhal loongi", Ridhima said entering in the car.

 

At Mallik mansion

 

"Good morning dad" wished Anjali serving breakfast to everyone.

 

 "Good morning beta" greeted back Sanjay.

 

"Anjali jara jam pass karne" asked Atul. Anjali just ignored him and asked Sanjay "papa aap ko kuch chahiye?"

 

"Nahi beta mujhe toh kuch nahi chahiye wo Atul''" Anjali cut him in between "oh main to aachar lana he bhul gayi main abhi aati hoon" and walked towards the kitchen. Sanjay asked Atul through eyes about it to which Atul just shook his head clearly signaling that there is a problem. Sitting besides Atul Sanjay asked him "baat kya hai tu mu latka ker baitha hai aur who mu pholaker"

 

 "Puchiye mat dad yeh ladkiyan bhi naa badi ajib hoti hain kisi ki baat samajhana hi nahi chahti aap toh jante hi hai aaj Rahul ka sangit hai aur hamari Japanese delegates ke saath kitni important meeting hai aur Anjali chahti hai ki main uske saath sangit me chalu"

 

 "Beta tumne use bataya nahi"

 

 "Bataya dad per aap toh use jante hai Na jab wo jid per aati hai toh kisiki baat nahi sunti"

 

 "Beta per uska kahna bhi toh galat nahi hai naa akhir Rahul uska ekluta bhai hai"

 

"Papa me samjhta hoon' maine Anjali se bhi yahi kaha ki woh pehle chali jaye aur me kuch der bad join kar loonga but woh hai ki apni jid per aadi hai ab aap hi bataiye papa main kya karu"

 

 "Agar aisi baat hai toh tu Anjali ke saath jaa me meeting attend kar loonga"

 

 "are nahi papa aap ka wahaan hona sabse jada jarori hain after all aap Mallik family me sabse bade hain aur Sheshank uncle unhe kitna bura lagega agar unke best friend wahaan nahi honge"

 

 "Don't worry beta main use samjha loonga itni choti si baat per bahu ko naraz karna thik nahi wo bhi itne kushi ke mauke per"

 

 "Per papa..."

 

 "Ab main kuch kahoon papa naa toh aap ko Sheshank uncle ko kuch samjha ne ki jaroorat hai aur bhai naa hi aap ko bhabhi se ladne ki", said Armaan sitting comfortably for breakfast continuing "meeting main handle kar loonga"

 

 "Per ammy"

 

 "Please bhai maine kaha na main handle kar loonga kya aap ko mujh per bharosa nahi hai"

 

 "Are aisi baat nahi hai"

 

 "Toh bas phir tai raha aap bhabhi ke saath sangit main jaiye meeting mujhpe chood dijiye' kyon dad?"

 

 "Absolutely that's like my tiger' waise bhi tere hote hua mujhe kisi baat ki koi fiker nahi hai" Atul shook his head and look down in his plate as Anjali gave him a look while coming from kitchen.

 

"Oh toh Mr. Perfectionist utha Gaye haan"

 

 "Yes bhabhi ab kya karron aap ke haath ke bane yeh garama garam paranthe me kaise miss kar sakta hoon after all mujhe esi gher me rahana hai"

 

 Anjali shook her head smiling. She was well aware of Armaan's flirting nature' he was a born charmer.

 

"by the way bhabhi kya kisi ne aapse kabhi kaha hai ki aapki aankhe kitni khubsurat hai? haaye in me toh koi bhi dub sakta hai"

 

Anjali just blushed at this comment "seriously agar aap bhai se pehle mujhe milti naa toh main aapse shadi ker leta Atul's head shot up at this Anjali blushed more and smacked him on his shoulder.

 

"Armaan just stop it"

 

"oww no I'm really serious about it" possessiveness took over Atul he just got up from his sit and stood besides Anjali and kept his arm across her shoulder clearly signaling that she was only his "are yar tujhe koi aur nahi mila" to which Anjali just jerk off his hand from her shoulder and went to her room.

 

 Sanjay pushed atul from behind "Are khada khada kya dekha raha hai ja use mana"

 

 Atul immediately went behind Anjali "Anjali Anjali meri baat to sunno"

 

"Mujhe tumhari koi bat nahi sunani" said Anjali walking towards wardrobe.

 

"Are jaan meri baat toh sunno achcha chalo tum yahi chahti ho naa ki main tumhare saath chalu toh main tumhare saath chalunga", Anjali looked at him unsure still a bit angry "lekin tumhari toh meeting hai naa?"

 

 "Are koi meeting meri Anjali se jada important thode hi hai" at this all her anger vanished and a small smile crept on her face but still unsure she asked "tum sach keh rahe ho naa?"

 

 Atul came forward and said "haan baba tumhari is smile ke liye toh main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon" Anjali just hugged him and mumbled "I love you Atul"

 

"I love you too Anjali" replied Atul hugging her back.

 

In Gupta house

 After a brief emotional meeting with her mom Ridhimaa was now busy in preparations. She was supervising all the preparations giving order all around. It was the time guest started arriving; Malliks were also arrived at the time. They all got very warm welcome from everyone. Sheshank asked them about meeting. Sanjay and Sheshank got busy in their talk about the meeting Anjali and Atul came to know about Ridhimaa's arrival.

 

 "Ridzi" Anjali shouted in happiness.

 

"Di oh my god kaisi hai aap" getting her in a rib crashing hug.

 

 "Oh ridzi I miss you so much"

 

 "I miss you too di kaisi hai aap aur jij kaise hai?"

 

"Sab thik hain" then suddenly "huh tu toh mujhse baat hi mat ker" said Anjali Parting from hug.

 

 "Are di kya hua aap achanak"

 

 "Achanak sab KO pata tha ki tu AA rahi hai bas mujhe nahi bataye sabne mujhe paraya kar diya", said Anjali pouting lips.

 

Ridhimaa just shook her head "di aap gussa kyon ho rahi ho Maine hi sab KO mana kiya tha aap KO batane se"

 

"Ridzi tune", asked Anjali slightly confused.

 

 "Haan di actually Maine socha kyon Na main aapko surprise Doon sach kahoon toh main aapke chehre pe yahi smile dekana chahti thi"

 

 "Oh ridz ab tujhse koi naraj bhi nahi reh sakta", said Anjali hugging her.

 

 After the soul sisters meeting Padma called them below as the sangit was about to start. On the other side, meeting was successful. Armaan just single handedly handled everything. All delegates were very impressed with his presentation and they also show their interest in business with Malliks Empire.

 

After changing in suitable cloths Armaan made his way towards Gupta house. He was very happy, firstly it was his best buddy's sangit and than this meeting. Armaan was really eager to share the good news with his dad and bhai.

 

In Gupta house, sangit has started. first of all Anjali and Atul performed on chal pyaar karegi, the next performance was a group performance by Atul, Anjali, Ridhima, Rahul, and Muskaan on salame ishq.Armaan was stuck in the traffic and was cursing it as he was really getting late for sangit.

 

It was the time when there was a solo performance by Ridhimaa she was wearing an olive colored dress and looking just stunning. She was performing on laija laija at the same time Armaan arrives at Gupta house and enters the main hall where sangit was going on. Ridhimaa was totally engrossed in dancing; suddenly her foot trips in something and she just looses balance. In order to prepare for the great pain which was coming she just shut her eyes tightly but before she touches floor someone held her by her waist.

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Edited by -SmokySapphira- - 09 February 2013 at 7:30am

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