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~*Only Mine...forever(AR)1* Part 1-27~ (Page 152)

punamluvshilpa Goldie
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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
hey sonu,sorry for late comment...actually mai abhi ghumne niklt hun to time kam milta hai..anyways about ur ff...actually part nahi kahungi,ye pura ff hi itna khubsurat hai ki kya kahun...aur shayad ye part sabse khubsurat hai...mujhe to itna achcha laga ki kya bataun...i think sabhi readers is part ka "the 1st night of ar" ka wait kar rahe they...arman ka behaviour and 

riddhima ka reaction...aur tum is test mein puri tarah safal hui...bari khubsurati ke sath is part ko likha...aisa nahi ki arman aaya aur achche bachche ki tarah riddhima ko sone kahkar chala gaya...whole part padhte hue bas ek excitement chaya raha,har pal laga kya arman itna bura hai? kya arman riddhima ke sath jabardasti karega? kya riddhima apne handsome husband ko pakar sab bhul jayegi? kya wo surrender kar degi? kya ye 1st night unki life mein ek dukh bhari raat bankar rah jayegi,jahan riddhima arman se aur jyada hate karne lagegi...but aisa kuch nahi hua...humey na riddhima par gussa aaya na arman par...dono hi apne place par thik they...
meri bak bak padhte padhte bore ho gayi hogi,but kya karun..itna achcha laga ki lagta hai bolti hi jaun...
and sorry hindi mein comments ke liye,actually english mein apne dill ki baaten mai nahi likh sakti thi,isliye hindi use kiya...plz.cont soon sonu dear...love ur ff so much...muaaah!






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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
amazing part
loved it!!!!!!!

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
nice part

update soon plzzz

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Awesome part. Loved AR moments. Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
nice ff

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Reopened on request of the Author for some edits.

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