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Guys shoul i write next part or you peeps need some more time to get familiar with the plot and track

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hey yar plz continue soon i nm dying to read next part

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when are you going to update next part..LOL

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In few minutes dear

Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 20 November 2010 at 7:13am

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pls post the next part soon...and also pls pm me the link

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PART 4

Geet sat in her class ?

 A girl eating chocolate came ?..

She said ? geet handa ..Pointing towards geet?.

She said yes

..The girl says you don't know me. I am pinkey?your bro came and gave me the keys of your suitcase

..Geet says ...hi?Smile

 they both exchange friendly looks..Smile

Pinkey offers her a bite from her chocolate?

Geet eats it up?(she was hungry).Wink

.both sits and attends 4 continuous lectures?.they get tired.

.geet asks pinkey..pinkey yaar mere ko ek khadoos Ouchko ragging dene jana hai ..Please..Please chal na.

.pinkey sayss ok.Confused .its recess time?lets go.

.both..go to cafeteria..

They find maan..Adi..Jay,,, dev..WinkHaving soup competitionTongueTongue[ i also want soup..]?

Maan saysguys you have. I will be right back in some time.

.he  comes to geet n says....so miss geet handa. .how were the lectures?.

She says interesting..Shocked

Pinky makes a puckish face.Dead And says mere chips lecture se better the?ROFL

Geet introduces pinkey to maan,,Big smile

 Maan says pinkey you have come today only..So pinkey you will come today for ragging in the eveningEvil Smile.

.pinkey nods..

 Maan says ..to geet ko bhoot se bohat dar lagta hai?Evil Smile

geet says bhoot se nahi andhere se?Shocked

maan says baat to ek hi hai naConfusedConfusedOuch?

geet says nahi.. bhoot bahar ka andhera hai..mujhe us andhere se dar lagta hai jo insane ke andar panapta hai jab yahi bahar ke log us se ruswa ho jate hai?Disapprove

jay pops in ?he says ye dekho maan ki jodi dar?miss ShakespeareROFL,ROFL

,maan  gives an angry glare to jay..n says..geet ye dekho ye college ka purana confession room hai?yaha pe ek ladki ne 12 saal pehale suicide kar liya thaShockedShockedShocked?tab se koi is me nahi jata?is gate se andar ghuso ..aur seedhe chalti jao?neeche stares jati hongi?stairs se neeche utar jana basement me aa jaogi?ok?.uske baad ek tunnel dikhega?usme ek steel ki ladder hogi..us se climb karma?aur ye emergency exit hai?aur ha..tunnel se kuch hi pehale ek rope hai use pull karogi..to tumhe khuli chat dikhegi? tunnel le end me tumhe me khada dikhunga..its a 5 min task ..go ahead..

geet says can I take pin,,.Ouch..but is interrupted.no go alone?Ouchshe will have soup here..

geet goes?but a wicked..3rd year student shasha Angrysees and she locks the tunnel from outside.. And covers it with snow so that maan doesn,t noiceDead?maan waits?

geet was inside,,she closed her eyes as usual while walking..she came to tunnel?she saw the rope..she was climbing the ladder. .suddenly lost her balance and while falling holds the rope and the roof of confession room got exposed?geet fell down at basement..her head was bleeding?ShockedShockedShockedmaan waited for two hours,,CryCryCry,
pinkey said she  might have gone to hostelDeadDead?

he agree with heavy heartBroken Heart he gave her his number and told her to inform him when she finds geet safe.. He went to his hostel. Pinkey came running to the hostel?junction..nd called for maan..she saw adi and asked him to inform maan..that every one is searching for geet?and its snowing heavily.adi runs to maan and says bhabi ab tak hostel nahi pohachi?maan gets shocked.. he wears his leather shoes jacket and muffler..warden and every one tries to stop him but he doesn't listen..after all geet ki zindagi maan ki zindagi hai?Day Dreaminghe runs out to cafeteria?clears the snow and finds the lock..

he thinks who could have done it to geet.Shocked.

maan takes a stone and breaks the lock?Comes down the ladder.. Sees there is no roof.. he searches for geet whole floor was whit with snow..room completely dark..suddenly something comes under his foot.OuchOuch.he switches on torch of his cell..he sees geetDead..covered with snow,,her full body..numb.Dead.lips nails fingers?legs all blue.. Deadhe sees blood oozing out her hairs.. Deadhe gets startled.. his eyes are wet.. CryCryhis princess was in this condition cauz he dint took proper care of her.. maan khud ko kabhi maaf nahi karega iske liye .use khud se nafrat ho rahi thi ke jo sapna usne itne shok se dekha Cry..us sapne ko usne hi dard de diya..he says geet mujhe ye to pata tha ke khushiyo aur mere beech chhidi is jung ki dastaan bohat purani hai?par mujhe ye nahi pata tha ke ye khushiya tumhe dard dengi..mujhe dard den eke liyae..and he sighs.CryCry..he picked her in his arms EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.took her to the othr corner where some roof was there..puts her on bench..and says ..geet kuch bolo na..geet chup kyu ho?please geet ankhe kholo?dekho tumhara kacha friend aa gaya hai?me tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga,,Embarrassed,samjhi tum?Embarrassedhe takes her dupatta which is wet?squeezes it and ties it hard on her head..fortunately its not internal injury,,,as she fell on the matresss but on some sho piece,,fortunately bleeding decreases..he lifts her legs and sees numbness on her legs he says to  him selfI will change her clothes,,Smile,he says sorry geet SmileI will have to do this..as your life is more than my principlesSmile..next...maan in dilema..so am i ..whether to show him out of his maryada for her life...or try something else as he knows ..wat her virginity means means to a gal..its something more than life for a gal..so guys ..i hope you like it...and do reply  how you think story is moving..i hope its not fast..thanks for the support...please please do comment..



Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 20 November 2010 at 7:45am

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Posted: 20 November 2010 at 8:22am | IP Logged
loved it ....wat ll be geets reaction wen she waked up ??? cant maan take her out by the way he came in ????

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Posted: 20 November 2010 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Awwwwww Chikki so you updated.....
thanks hun.....
love the way your  story is progressing.....I just hate that Sasha...wanna thrash her hard.....
poor Geet ......thank god...Maan found her...so its clear that he loves her.....wanna know Geet's reaction now .....does she love him tooo....


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