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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
wen u ll be updating the next part???

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

wen u ll be updating the next part???
will update it by today..before geet starts..

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Nice FF
Jus loved Suniyeji n kahiyeji in 2nd part
Maan is getting more attracted towards her
Both hav loads of pain in them
Lets how they lesses each others pain
Plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 5:37am | IP Logged
PART 3
Maan breaks down in to tears..
before geet could react...she finds him sitting on the floor..
she sits down in front of him..
geet dint knew the reason but surely could touch the bottom of the ocean
Of his pain....
maan was crying ..yes he was..
it was happiness..
he found someone who knew value of love..
he hugged her tight..
geet was speechless..she dint want to break free..it would hurt maan.
She hugged him too..
they cried as if the dam of tears broke which was built from ages..
and geet broke the silence of the cold room what happened maan..he mutes him self..
geet holds him by his cheeks..cups his face and says..tum mujhe apne dil ki sbi bat bta do...ma kehti hai..ke jab bi koi tumhe tumhare ansu puchne ke liye mile to dil ki bat bol deni chaiye..kyuki ho sakta hai kal tumhare pass dil me wo bat to chupi ho par..ansu puchne wala na rahe...her eyes reflected her innocence..
maan Was playing with her hairs and says kya ye geet be kal mujhse dur ho jayegi...
geet says nahi..4 sal to yai hu..
maan says tum apni ma se bohat pyar karti ho na..
geet nods in positive..
maan's tears were rolling down..
geet says ro kyu rahe ho..wo be ladke ho ke..hamare punjab me kehte hai..munda agar itna jaldi jaldi rota hai...to use ghar jamai banna padta hai..
maan holds geet tight and says me to uske liye be tayar hu...
geet coughs ... Maan leaves her.
he says..tumhari dress kaha hai..
geet makes wierd faces..and say..ji !!!apka matlb kya hai...meko yad hai..maine nahane ke bad kapde pehane the...
maan's eyes pop out in amusement..he says..geet ye be koi yad rakhme wali bat hai..
both start giggling..
maan says i am asking about college uniform...
geet says wo tailor ko size dena hai..
maan says meko bata do me order kar deta hu tumhare nam se..
geet made a very annoyed face..and says matlb kya h.
maan says aisa kuch nahi hai geet..tum mujhe galat samaj rahi ho..mera dil to mount everest pe jami fresh ice ki tarah pure hai..
geet says how do i trust you..
maan says you need a proof..???
geet says show me your heart and i will tell how pure it is..
maan felt a bit hurt but he took his shirt off..took the cutter from geet's kit..and put it on his chest..to tear it ..!!
geet screamed are you crazy..what the hell..and hugs him very very tightly.. maan thinks ..if i hug her ..she may think i am kinda fast guy. .and i will never try to prove my love again geet..
and she says wear your shirt..meri eyes band hai..
maan says ok..
none noticed that how geet was sitting close to him..on his laps facing him..both were on the floor..there was just a few inch gap...
maan says uthogi tabi pehan paunga..
geet realized the way she sat.she felt shy n suddenly got up..and put her dupata properly..maan wore his shirt..
maan says ..so are we friends now...
geet says ...promise kabhi katti nai karoge...
maan says tum bilkul bachi ho..nahi karunga baba
..geet says..ab se tum mere kache friend ho..agar tumne 1 day ladai nahi ki to pakke ban jaoge..
maan was happy that his FRIEnd was so innocent..he said ok..
they shake hands..
geet says ok dost ji now tell me why were you crying..
maan says..pagli kahi ki..pahle pakka friend banke dikhaunga..fir dil kholunga....aur ek baat please ye ji mat lagao me tumhara uncle nahi hu yar hu..so chill babes....
geet says tusi ajeeb munde ho..yaha pe waise e itni thand hai..upar se tum keh rahe ho..chill..you only chill ..i am to hot..
maan s mouth fell open..what this girl is saying..
geet realizes wat she said n says oye meko galat mat samjho..ji me to bas..wo me..me . .wo..
maan saidbolo geet..bolo
suddenly maan heard student coming..
took his hankey and cleaned her face..and said miss geet handa..you are my junior..dont think raging ke bina jane dunga...come to cafeteria..in break..
geet was crying as well as smiling..
maan in eyes said dont or i will kill you..
geet agreed just like a kid..and maan said any problem..any tension..come to me in room no. 143 and if you dont find me..contact my friends they will let you to me..good day..

friends two strangers are friends now..the more true reason of maan's pain will be revealed soon..i hope you liked this part..if you liked it..please please please..do hit the like button and comment..thank you all for your support

Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 19 November 2010 at 6:04am

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 6:24am | IP Logged
pls carry on its too good do add me on pm

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 7:32am | IP Logged
cute update! Embarrassed
update soon!
Smile

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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Chikkki...............you are so good....................Clap
Loved the way Maan broke in front of Geet.....
BTW has he fallen in love with her....well it seems so......Embarrassed
I am loving Maan............he is there to help Kudi naa......if she faces any problem......Great going....Thumbs Up
I am waiting for the next part....Wink


Love
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Posted: 19 November 2010 at 9:39am | IP Logged
love it.
supreb...
love maan and geet
do continue plz.
thx

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