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#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 (Page 3)

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 2:16am | IP Logged
nice part
i loved it
plz do cont soon
if u make pm list add me too it...

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SimplyAparajita

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 6:00am | IP Logged
PART 2
Geet boarded her room
it was corner room.
at one lonely end of the hostel.
she had two room partners which havent boarded yet.she saw their name from lists.pinkey from kolkata and meera from maharashtra.she had to sleep alone in her room.suddenly she heard a knock at her room.she opened and a senior walked inside and said geet handa.comeon .come at the junction of boys and gals hostel for raging..warden is out tonight.geet changed her self into nightsuit and rushed out.geet started blabberingbabaji ye kaha bhej dia..kahi mere kamre ke side me padi barf me koi chudail to nai chupi baithi.haye babaji ye rasta itna sunsan kyu hai.mujse kya dushmani hai apki babaji ye kamra especially geet handa ke lye banaya hoga..geet putar thand rakh..himat se kam le..she closes her eyes and starts walkhng...
while running out suddenly at the gate she bumped in to maan..she screamed..without opening her eyes..bhoot bhoot..
maan said..chup bilkul chup
she opened her one eye just like a baby to check who it was
and she was just about to fall..but maan held her..
he noticed some marks on her neck..and shoulders..
he was startled..
both broke of their dreamy sequence..
he said ye goa nahi hai..its darjeleeng..
where is your winter night suit..

geet replied its in my suitcase..
Maan said..now miss what is it doing there..
geet got scared by his rude voice..
maan realized it....
she said keys are with veerji..
he said where is the jacket you had in the morning..
geet replied its with my younger sister simi.
maan was still holding her tight..
he asked why did you give it..
she had tears..
maan started to panic..
he said dont cry..
please..listen..wear my jacket..

geet was shocked..she asked what will you wear..
maan said oh comeon am your senior..its part of raging..
geet tried her best to smile and wore his jacket..
and they both arrived at the hostel junction..geet sat with new comers..
suddenly a boy called vicky came to geet..
leaned over her...
and other side of his cigarete..he put it on her lips and said..comeon take a gush..you are hot so will be the gush from your lips..lets burn the darjeleeng together..
geet faced away and said i dont smoke..
the boy went more close..
and threw the smoke from his mouth at her face..
geet started coughing..
earlier maan didnot notice..but the cough took his sole attraction to geet..
seeing them both so closed..
and geet being uncomfortable..
he went to hit but..
dev stopped him..maan dont make her dependent on you. .let her face her life..or she will be weak..vickey..switched on a cheap song..and told geet comeon lets burn it...he took geet by her waist in his arms..
geet was petrified..bt she broke free..and slapped him tight..
maan seemed contended..
geet screamed him..dont think my silence as my weakness..its my tolerating limit..you want me to smoke na..wait..she burnt two cigarate..and said see i am smoking..and started coughing heavily..
dev :..maan now interfere..matter is out of control..
every one was sitting just like a mute crowd no one there to help the girl..

vickey pulled her hair hard..came close..
with collar of her nightsuit..tried to clear the blood coming from his lip ends..due to slap..
geet was struggling..
maan came from back..and punched him left right..threw him on the floor and kicked him..and said mafi mang..
vickey was shocked ..he said you being my batch mate supporting a downmarket girl..
maan took him by his face and carried him to bonefire..listen ..if you dont want your face to be down market then ask sorry..
the next moment ..vickey was on his knees..
geet was happy that first time in her life someone cared..but sad that because of her maan had to fight..
she saw maan's hand bleeding..and she couldnt stand further..
maan noticed it..she ran to her room and locked it..and started crying..whole night..she cried for maan and her pain..next morning she straight away went to her class..
only to find maan sitting alone in the corner of the room..
she asked..suniye ji..
maan understood..its geet..
he cleaned his tears..and said smiling kahiye ji..
she said apna hath age karo. .
she took out soframyceine frm her handbag and applied   on his hand..she was applying it on his hand but maan felt the relief in his heart..his pain was being released..his tears were rolling down..
he said suniye ji..agar me kuch karu..to apne jaise kal vickey ko marc waise to nai marogi..
geet said..if you be in your limits..he broke down in to tears..
friends if you like it and want me to continue:..then do hit the like button..and comment..please please..

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 04 December 2010 at 5:47am

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 6:20am | IP Logged
wow dear that was really superb plz cont soon and add me in pm list

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 6:27am | IP Logged
hey add me to ur pm list pls.... awsome updates...

pls continue yaaar...loved it and its different from other ones......Smile...so post the next update tooo


Edited by mrk_1 - 18 November 2010 at 6:34am

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Lol. U made my and firesafire anu maans dad????? Why???????? Lol.
Loved the update ;D
Xxxx

Edited by BadGirlKiss - 18 November 2010 at 6:34am

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BadGirlKiss

Lol. U made my and firesafire anu maans dad????? Why???????? Lol.
Loved the update ;D
Xxxx
lollz seriously i got idea from there only..as your fanfiction made me portray anu as a bad boy..so i made him his dad..kinda negative..thanks for the compliment dear..tc..

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chikkipupuapgp

Originally posted by BadGirlKiss

Lol. U made my and firesafire anu maans dad????? Why???????? Lol.
Loved the update ;D
Xxxx
lollz seriously i got idea from there only..as your fanfiction made me portray anu as a bad boy..so i made him his dad..kinda negative..thanks for the compliment dear..tc..

Haha lol. I have to tell Keyama to make him positive now. Lol.
Lived the update tho. :D pls pls pls update soon.
Xxxx

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Posted: 18 November 2010 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

hey add me to ur pm list pls.... awsome updates...

pls continue yaaar...loved it and its different from other ones......Smile...so post the next update tooo
heya..ye shub kam me bohat jaldi karne wali hu...bas ek bar kal ke test me top kar du..thanks for the compliment

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