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#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 (Page 147)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged

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SimplyAparajita IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged

Geet realized what he meant.
maan looked at her from top to bottom and added" agar tumhe ye lagta hai ki maine tumhare sath physical satisfaction ke liye shadi ki hai
to geet I am sorry
me tumhe kabhi hath bhi nahi lagaunga,
trust me"

Geet felt guilty.
maan called in the nurses.
They opened the bandages.
maan looked at the stitches on her wound and closed his eyes feeling her pain.
geet thought he closed because of my wiered behaviour and am naked,
to make him cozy she threw her gown on his face saying,
now you can open your eyes maan.

Maan felt hurt at her behaviour,
he managed to mumble"oh geet!ab to tumhe metre dekhne se bhi problem hai
fine then.."

geet realized that again she misunderstood his silence.
one of the nurse by mistake pressed the wound hard.
geet yelled in pain.
maan looked angrily at the nurse as if he will throw her out any moment
Maan comforted geet by holding her hands but kept silence, as he thought
" never express your feelings to your loved ones by speaking, as when they cant understand your silence then how will they understand your words"

riddhima and armaan were waiting for maaneet.
hearing the noise ridhima rushed in.
maan was all hyperventilating.
geet was crying in pain

riddhima asked the nurses to leave.
Geet pushed away all the hands, like a baby who is scared of injection
she held geet's hands tight,"do you trust me."
geet managed to utter,"its paining"
maan was silent
totally numb.
a single tear rolled down his cheek kissing his lips.
riddhima again asked "you trust me bhabhi?"

"yes I do.
but not this maan."
[her eyes were closed] "maan
mujhe dard ho raha hai and u dont care an inch about me.
i just hate you"

Riddhima asked him to cluch her tight and she herself neatly and tightly did the dressing.
maan made her wear the new gown and took her to the bed
riddhima putup the drips again
geet annoyedly looked at maan
she wondered"khadus! Sadu! Meri taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha
I just hate him"

Maan dint answer her and left the door banging it.
Armaan asked,"how are you feeling now geet?"
She nodded,"better"
He replied,"take care"
Riddhima sat with geet.
And armaan left trying to catch up with maan

Maan entered armaan's cabin.
Armaan followed.

"armaan,what did the reports say.."

armaan sighed
He continued to stay some thing about the reports in mute[aparajita couldnt hear them]
Armaan patted maan's shoulder.
Maan tried to smile and managed to say,"thanks" and left the hospital.
In the parking his phone rang again.
He got irritated by the number.
"Kya kaam hai sam"

"Jaan please don't forget
i will be waiting
Yaad rakhna"

Maan left in disgust switching his phone off.
Dadi entered geet's vvip cottage along with annie
"geet beta, kaisa mehsus kar rahi hai aap?"
"meri pyari bachi

beta Maan kaha hai"

"Dadima wo"

She stopped

"pata nahi.
kahi nazar nahi aa raha?
2 din se kuch nahi khaya hai aap ke maan ne
aap ki lagan lagi hai bas"

Geet felt guilty for fighting with him this way and doubting her intentions

She tried his number and kept trying.Every one came to meet geet.

Police came and took her statement about what happened.

Search warrant was issued against brij.
Meera got some of her favourite novels like" great expectations","kathekali~all about frenz" and their favourite time pass book"chickensoup".

She kept trying his number.
Every time it was out of coverage area.

This unforbidden silence from his soul and her guilt were tearing apart.

She sighed"usne sab kuch mere liye kiya

par kya mera pyar itna khudgarz hai,

kya me us se apne liye pyar karti hu

mujhe pata hai maan, tum kisi se kuch nahi kahoge

khud ko itna tanha kyu kar rakha hai tumne

kyu tumhe khushi se sab se itni nafrat hai

kitni mohabat hai tumhe mujhse

ye tumhara dil samajhta hai aur mera dil samajhta hai

fir kyu ye deewar si bana li hai apni dil ke aashiyane me

kyu nahi ane dete mujhe is dariya ke us paar

mana nadi ke do kinare kabhi nahi mil sakte

par ye kudrat ka gunah hai.. Kinaro ki khata nahi..

Khud ko kinara hone ki saza mat do maan.

Badi dilchasp hai tumhari ye khamoshi

aur us se bhi jyada dilchasp hai tumhara khud ko gunahgar thehrana
na jane kis anjani khata ke liye"
and she slept fighting her thoughts and trying to overcome her internal conflicts about maan's persona and his strange behaviour
precap:-where is maan.
frenz plish do leave comments for motivating me.

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 15 January 2011 at 1:00am

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SimplyAparajita IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Frenz.. Plish do let me know... Whether you like this ff or not... As it has reached almost 150 pages.. So here i have two options.. Whether to end it in same thread.. Or to continue soon in next thread.... Thank you all for love and concern you show... Love ya....

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 15 January 2011 at 1:02am

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wajiha-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
awesome update
plzz dont end this FF
continue soon

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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
n hope geet reports r alright
n tht sam bit*** she is soooooooooo arghhhhhhhh

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Nice part-----noooo u shouldn't end this update it's so awesome---h8 that Sam the Wh*** ---Cont soon Xx... Wink

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged
awsome update yaar..loved it .. but why did maan go away from geet ??? wat did ARMAAN  say ??so many suspense at the same time can we sleep?

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namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
nice update  Appu.....
I am curious to know what did Armaan tell Maan...
that Sam why can't she leave Maaneet alone...hate her
waiting for the next part

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