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Posted: 17 November 2010 at 9:52am | IP Logged
hi
the up is really good
nice concept and intro part is just great
plzzzzzzz cont soon and do pm me

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Posted: 17 November 2010 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
gr8t part do cont sooon

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Posted: 20 November 2010 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

Wow ! Awsome part Clap Keep it up !

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Posted: 22 November 2010 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
hey guys... nice concept and part 1..:)
really liked how u introduced the chrcters.. but wonder what happened in Armaan's parents life..?? that changed him to this extenet.. well lets see ahead..:)
anywayzz gud that AR r friends..:) <3
plzz plzz add me to ur PM list and continue soon..;0
tc :-)
Preet <3

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Posted: 26 November 2010 at 8:12am | IP Logged
awesome ff

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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 6:03am | IP Logged
hey sam,
it sounds interesting
continue this ff
do pm me

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thanks guys!!!

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hey guys waise toh yeh update ameera karne wali thi.but she is busy so yeh update main sirf post kar rahi hoon.

Part 2

In Sanjeevani

(Armaan sanjeevani mein ek doctor hai)

Armaan chal raha hota hai tab hi kuch bachche baghte huwe aa rahe hote hai

Armaan: dihaan se

bachche bohot shararat kar rahe hote hai to Armaan ka haath zor se jaa kar ek vase se laghta hai to uske haath par choth aa jati hai

kid: sorry uncleConfused

Armaan: it's okSmile

Ridhima aati hai aur Armaan ko aise dekhti hai

Ridhima: tumhe kitni choth aaye haiConfused

Armaan: abhi hi thik ho jaye gaSmile

Ridhima: main doctor houn na to main better janti hounConfused

Ridhima Armaan ko ek room mein le jati hai aur phir uski patti karti hai, Armaan ko dard hota hai to woh dheere se awaaz nikaal tha hai

Ridhima: bahir to hero ban rahe the aur yahan kaise dard se chikhein mar rahe hoSmile

Armaan: pehle to tumhe kabhi is hospital mein nahi dekhaConfused

Ridhima: tum to aise baat kar rahe ho jaise tum yahan har roz ate hoConfused

Armaan: ek doctor hospital mein nahi aye ga to kiya office jaye gaConfused?

Ridhima: isska matlab tum yahan Sanjeevani mein doctor hoShocked

Armaan: haan BasketWink

Ridhima: ohh! maine aaj hi Sajeevani join kiya haiSmile

Armaan: welcome to SanjeevaniSmile

they smile... after sometimes... Armaan Ridhima ko sara hospital dikha raha hota hai... Ridhima mudh rahi hoti hai ke uska balance nahi rehta aur woh ghirne laghi hoti hai... woh dar kar apni ankhein baandh karti hai lekin Armaan usse pakkar leta hai... Ridhima ahista se apni ankhein kolti hai... phir Armaan usse sida karta hai

Ridhima: thanks Smile

Armaan: Room mein to Heroine ban rahi thi aur yahan ghirne ke darse aankhein baandh kar liLOL

Ridhima apni baadi baadi ankhon se Armaan ko dekhne laghti hai aur phir kuch hi dher mein zor se hasne laghti hai, Armaan use aise haste huwe dekh kar ek pal ke liye kho jata hai... aur phir Armaan bhi hasne laghta hai

Ridhima: tumne meri baat mujh par hi chipka diLOL

Armaan: main to sirf tumhe yeh battana chah raha tha ke sirf tumhi nahi main bhi lines chipka sakhta hounSmile

Ridhima: mujhe aaj tak zindagi mein jo bhi ladke mille hai tum un sabse alag hoSmile

Armaan: mujhe bhi aaj tak zindagi mein jo bhi ladki milli hai tum un sabse bohot alag ho Smile

after sometimes.... Armaan Ridhima ko sabse millwa tha hai aur usse sab samjhaa bhi deta hai

Armaan think "itne waqat baad kisse se mill ka bohot apna sa lagh raha hai, kyon na aaj main basket ke saath diner karoun?"Smile

Armaan: waise Ridhima tum aaj Diner kiss ke saath kar rahi ho?Smile

Ridhima: akeleSmile

Armaan: kiya aaj ka Diner tum mere saath karo gi?Smile

Ridhima: sure!!! tum mujhe apne ghar par le kar jao ge Diner ke liyeSmile

Armaan: mere ghar par?Confused

Ridhima: haan, aise main tumhari mom se bhi mill loun giSmile

Armaan(sad): meri mom ho ke bhi na hone ke barabar haiConfused

Ridhima: tum aise kyon keh rahe ho? tumhe patta bhi hai mom ka na hona kiya hota hai?.... meri mom nahi hai to main iss kami ko feel kar sakhti hounConfused

Armaan: ok basket sorry... main tumhe diner ke liye apne hi ghar le kar jaoun gaSmile

Ridhima: finally... tumhari mom ne tumhe kuch to sikaya hi hai... aaj main tumhe kuch sikha thi houn ke ladkyon ko kabhi na nahi karte Smile

Armaan: ok basketSmile

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Armaan terrace par hota hai aur uska ke haath mein uska mobile hota hai

Armaan think "mom ko phone karoun ya na karoun?... agar basket ko apne ghar diner par le kar jana hai to phir mom se khaana bhi to banna na hi hoga"Confused

Armaan phir apni mom ko phone karta hai

Armaan: aaj shaam ko mere saath ek friend aa rahi hai diner ke liyeConfused
Ananya: acha betha Smile
Armaan: don't call me your bethaAngry
Ananya: betha na kehne se rishta badal to nahi jaye ga na kher main shaam ko tere aur teri uss dost ke liye khaana bana doun giSmile

Armaan phone baadh kar deta hai aur piche mudh kar dekhta hai to Ridhima usse ghusse se dekh rahi hoti hai

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