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both the parts were amazing and lovely.....
cont soon
cont soon
lovely part
but why are you showing Raj as this and even cadets dont like him why?
plz continue soon
Pooja and Naina get out of the lovely mesmerizing tone of his great song.
Pooja: umm..umm. Sir
Naina: Sir, vo Pooja ka charger reh gaya tha idher…to hum vo lene aaye the.
Rajveer: charger lene mein kitna time lagta hai,cadets?
Pooja: Sir main abhi le rahi thi..lekin aap gaana ga rahe the na to maine socha ke aapko disturb na karoon.
Rajveer: hmm..come take it and leave.
Pooja hurries to the table where her charger was kept, picks it up and turns to leave in order to run away from Rajveer. But…
Rajveer: Vaise dikhana ek baar ye charger…
Pooja looks at the charger and then at him and then finally decides to give it to him, vaise she wasn't left any choice either. Rajveer takes the charger from her hand and bounces it.
Rajveer: Cadet Pooja?
Pooja: yes sir..
Rajveer: Vaise ye charger kitne kilo ka hoga?
Pooja; (raising her eyebrows at his stupid question) ummm…sir kilo? Yeh to kuchh grams ka hi hoga..
Rajveer: achha…to phir kya aap itni kamzor hain ki kuchh grams ka charger khud akele nahi utha sakti…jo aapko dusro ki help chahiye?(pointing Naina)
Naina is pretty much annoyed with him and his words. But she decides not to speak a word in their defence.
Rajveer :( giving the charger to Pooja) take it. And learn to be self-dependant.
Pooja gets very angry and frustrated at his behavior and leaves giving him "the" look.
While going, she shuts the door with full pressure expressing his anger. The door bangs too loud. Now Naina moves over to the door to leave. She tries to open the door but it has jammed. She struggled again but didn't succeed. Rajveer watches this and comes over to help.
Rajveer: Let me try to open it.
Naina: No thanks. Somebody told me to be self-dependant.
Rajveer:(to himself) meri billi..mujhi ko meow.
Naina: what?
Rajveer: nothing…Get aside. It's my order.
Naina gives him the space to struggle with the door. He sighs as he fails. Now Naina and Rajveer are left alone in a locked room.
Rajveer: Let me call security to help us.(taking out his cell phone)
He tries to call the guard several times, but there was a network problem in the room.
They banged the door several times for help but nothing helped. They had no choice but to wait for someone to come and help.
Desperately, Naina sits in the corner on the floor. While Rajveer sits on a chair near a drum.
Rajveer: I have an idea.
Naina: Kya?
Rajveer: Let's beat this drum so loud that the whole KMA hears us.
Naina: sorry..i am not interested.
Rajveer: kabhi kabhi vo cheese bhi karni padti hain jinmeb humme interest nahi hota..come and do what I am saying. You can take it as an order.
Naina goes to him and picks up the drum sticks and settles herself on a chair beside him.
Rajveer: (with a smile) Let's start…
They both start playing the drums, actually beating them. Both of them are having too much fun at this stupid act. When they are hell tired, they stop beating drums. They both start laughing at this.
Rajveer: enjoyed a lot na?
Naina: hmm…vaise mujhe nahi pata tha aap itne fun loving kind of person hain..
Rajveer: mujhe pata hai kit um sab sochte ho ki I am a strict and a khaduss kind of man.
Naina: haan…actually aap ka ye side kabhi dekha hi nahi na…singing…playing guitar…beating drums like mads…
Rajveer giggles.
Rajveer: Actually ye hi meri asli side hai..but mujhe tum logo ke saath strict hona hi padta hai…kyunki you know…you all think that being a soldier is an easy cup of tea.
But aisa nahi hai..it takes strength and you have to dignity to be soldier.
Naina nods.
Rajveer: Jab main aap sab cadets se pehli baar mila tha to I found ke tum mein se koi bhi soldier ban ne ko lekar serious nahi hai..actually tumhare bas mein hi nahi hai.
Naina raises her eyebrows.
Rajveer: I mean aisa mujhe pehli baar hi laga tha..I thought this isn't your cup of tea. May I was wrong..May be I am wrong..
Naina: you know what..you are a nice man…(smiling at him)
Rajveer smiles in return.
Rajveer: are hum ye to bhul hi gaye ki ab baahar kaise jaayein..drum ka idea to flop ho gaya…koi aaya hi nahi…
Naina: hmm…
Rajveer: are 12 baje guard khud hi aajayega..roomm lock karne ke liye. Room lock karne se pehle vo ek baar andar check karega..to everything gonna be alright.
Naina: (looking at her wrist watch) bas 2 minutes hi hain 12 bajne mein.
Rajveer: chalo phir darwaaze ke paas hi khade ho jaate hain..
They both stand up and stand near the door. Rajveer is leaning on the door while Naina is watching him leaning. Suddenly they feel someone outside.
They start banging the door. Somebody opens the door. As they look who was there to open the door, they are totally astonished to find Huda there.
Naina: tum??
Huda: haan …vo Suri ji ne bola ke guard office mein hai..to tu activity room lock kar aa. Main bas vahi kar raha tha..lekin(raising his eyebrows) aap dono yahan kya????
Rajveer: Tumhe jo kaam kaha hai vo karo…lock the room and leave. Aapne kaam se kaam rakha karo. Naina leave. Aur mujhe bhi ab jaana chahiye.
Rajveer leaves while Naina watches him leaving with dignity. And Huda watches Naina watching Rajveer.
Huda: o fulandevi?? Kya baat hai??
Naina: kuchh nahi..
And she leaves.
Huda: (to himself) kuchh to gadbad hai…pata lagana padega..
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Hope you liked the part. Do comment. This time it was a long part. Haina??
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Riddhi
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